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[小试身手]
请先阅读下面所给故事的开头部分,再根据以下问题,并结合自己的想象,续写这个故事。
One day, Tom found a little bird in the garden. The bird was weak. Tom took it to his room and looked after it well. Soon the bird got better. Tom bought a cage and kept the bird in it. But when the bird was in the cage, it didn't eat anything.
1. Why didn't the bird eat?
2. What did Tom do with the bird then?
3. Would he meet the bird again?
要求:
1. 设想合理,语言流畅。
2. 词数90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。
② 人称:第三人称。
③ 情节:第一段:汤姆分析小鸟在笼子里不吃东西的原因;第二段:汤姆释放小鸟;第三段:汤姆表达祝愿,期待重逢。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第一段 Tom wondered why ... He soon realized ...
第二段 Feeling ... Tom decided to ...
第三段 Tom hoped ... He also secretly wished to ...

[妙笔生花]
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[小试身手]
请先阅读下面所给故事的开头部分,再根据以下问题,并结合自己的想象,续写这个故事。
One day, Tom found a little bird in the garden. The bird was weak. Tom took it to his room and looked after it well. Soon the bird got better. Tom bought a cage and kept the bird in it. But when the bird was in the cage, it didn't eat anything.
1. Why didn't the bird eat?
2. What did Tom do with the bird then?
3. Would he meet the bird again?
要求:
1. 设想合理,语言流畅。
2. 词数90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。
② 人称:第三人称。
③ 情节:第一段:汤姆分析小鸟在笼子里不吃东西的原因;第二段:汤姆释放小鸟;第三段:汤姆表达祝愿,期待重逢。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第一段 Tom wondered why ... He soon realized ...
第二段 Feeling ... Tom decided to ...
第三段 Tom hoped ... He also secretly wished to ...
[妙笔生花]
______________________________
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Tom wondered why the bird wouldn't eat. He soon realized the bird must be missing its family and friends. It wanted to fly freely in the sky and be with them.
Feeling worried about the bird, Tom decided to set it free. He opened the cage door, and the bird flew out joyfully. As it disappeared into the sky, Tom felt a sense of relief.
Tom hoped the bird would live a happy life. He also secretly wished to meet the bird again someday, maybe in the same garden where they first met.
Tom wondered why the bird wouldn't eat. He soon realized the bird must be missing its family and friends. It wanted to fly freely in the sky and be with them.
Feeling worried about the bird, Tom decided to set it free. He opened the cage door, and the bird flew out joyfully. As it disappeared into the sky, Tom felt a sense of relief.
Tom hoped the bird would live a happy life. He also secretly wished to meet the bird again someday, maybe in the same garden where they first met.