写作演练
[小试身手]
你是一名来自山区的学生，小时候患有眼疾，在ORBIS的帮助下被治愈了，并获得了上学的机会。请你写一篇80词左右的发言稿，谈谈你以前和现在生活的不同，并说说你的感想。
[思路点拨]
① 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作时要注意逻辑性，表达要清晰，同时要表达出感激之情。
[写作提纲]
ORBIS的救助
|——原来的困境|——eye disease, so poor, stay at home
|——现在的情况|——see everything clearly, go to school
|——表达感激|——very grateful to them
[妙笔生花]
______________________________
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
[小试身手]
你是一名来自山区的学生，小时候患有眼疾，在ORBIS的帮助下被治愈了，并获得了上学的机会。请你写一篇80词左右的发言稿，谈谈你以前和现在生活的不同，并说说你的感想。
[思路点拨]
① 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；② 人称：第一人称；③ 写作时要注意逻辑性，表达要清晰，同时要表达出感激之情。
[写作提纲]
ORBIS的救助
|——原来的困境|——eye disease, so poor, stay at home
|——现在的情况|——see everything clearly, go to school
|——表达感激|——very grateful to them
[妙笔生花]
______________________________
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
答案
One possible version:
I'm a student from a mountain village. When I was young, I suffered from eye disease. My family was so poor that my parents didn't have money to send me to hospital. So I used to stay at home, helping my mother do some simple housework instead of going to school.
Then ORBIS changed my life. The ORBIS doctors performed an operation on me. The operation was successful, and I am able to see everything clearly and go to school now.
My family are very grateful to them. It is ORBIS that gives me a bright future.
I'm a student from a mountain village. When I was young, I suffered from eye disease. My family was so poor that my parents didn't have money to send me to hospital. So I used to stay at home, helping my mother do some simple housework instead of going to school.
Then ORBIS changed my life. The ORBIS doctors performed an operation on me. The operation was successful, and I am able to see everything clearly and go to school now.
My family are very grateful to them. It is ORBIS that gives me a bright future.
