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三、书面表达。
初二下学期的生活已经开始，除了上课，你对新学期的英语学习有什么规划呢?
请你以 "My English Learning Plan" 为题并根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
写作提示:
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
My English Learning Plan
The new term has begun, and I made a
detailed plan for my English learning.
初二下学期的生活已经开始，除了上课，你对新学期的英语学习有什么规划呢?
请你以 "My English Learning Plan" 为题并根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
写作提示:
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
My English Learning Plan
The new term has begun, and I made a
detailed plan for my English learning.
On the one hand, I'll listen to
English news and songs when I'm free.
What's more, I'll catch every chance to
speak English, for example, talking with
my classmates in English even for very
simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose
different English materials, such as books,
novels, stories and so on, and spend half
an hour reading them every day. Keeping a
diary is also a good way to improve writing
skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and
stay confident. By following my learning
plan, I believe I can make great progress
this term.
English news and songs when I'm free.
What's more, I'll catch every chance to
speak English, for example, talking with
my classmates in English even for very
simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose
different English materials, such as books,
novels, stories and so on, and spend half
an hour reading them every day. Keeping a
diary is also a good way to improve writing
skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and
stay confident. By following my learning
plan, I believe I can make great progress
this term.
答案
三、 My English Learning Plan
The new term has begun, and I made
a detailed plan for my English learning.
On the one hand, I'll listen to
English news and songs when I'm free.
What's more, I'll catch every chance to
speak English, for example, talking with
my classmates in English even for very
simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose
different English materials, such as books,
novels, stories and so on, and spend half
an hour reading them every day. Keeping a
diary is also a good way to improve writing
skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and
stay confident. By following my learning
plan, I believe I can make great progress
this term.
The new term has begun, and I made
a detailed plan for my English learning.
On the one hand, I'll listen to
English news and songs when I'm free.
What's more, I'll catch every chance to
speak English, for example, talking with
my classmates in English even for very
simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose
different English materials, such as books,
novels, stories and so on, and spend half
an hour reading them every day. Keeping a
diary is also a good way to improve writing
skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and
stay confident. By following my learning
plan, I believe I can make great progress
this term.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是新学期的课后英语学习规划，要满足三个硬性要求：覆盖表格里听说、读写、心态三个板块的全部提示信息，不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，词数符合要求。接下来梳理写作思路：顺着题目已经给出的开头，先落地听说部分的安排，把“多听英语新闻、音乐等材料，多用英语交流”的要点写具体；接着用过渡词转到读写板块，把“读文章、写日记”的内容补充完整；最后写心态层面的规划，点明要努力、保持自信，最后收尾表达对取得进步的期待，全程用初二阶段掌握的简单句式和衔接词串联，保证行文通顺没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头后首先完成听说板块内容：说明空闲时间会多听英语新闻、英文歌曲，主动抓住所有机会和同学用英语交流，锻炼听说能力，对应表格里听说部分的提示。
2. 用过渡短语转到读写板块：说明自己会挑选不同类型的英语文章，每天留出固定时间阅读，同时坚持写英语日记，以此提升阅读和写作能力，覆盖读写部分的所有提示。
3. 最后补充心态部分的内容：点明自己在学习过程中会始终努力、保持自信，最后表达按照规划执行就能取得进步的期待，完成全部要点，整体逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
My English Learning Plan
The new term has begun, and I made a detailed plan for my English learning.
On the one hand, I'll listen to English news and songs when I'm free. What's more, I'll catch every chance to speak English, for example, talking with my classmates in English even for very simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose different English materials, such as books, novels, stories and so on, and spend half an hour reading them every day. Keeping a diary is also a good way to improve writing skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and stay confident. By following my learning plan, I believe I can make great progress this term.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，英语学习话题表达，书面表达逻辑衔接
【点评】
这篇习作完全贴合题目要求，完整覆盖了所有给定的提示要点，层次清晰分明，从听说训练到读写提升再到学习心态层层递进，过渡自然流畅，所用的词汇和句式都符合初二年级的英语能力水平，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，表意清晰，是一篇非常规范的同话题范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是新学期的课后英语学习规划，要满足三个硬性要求：覆盖表格里听说、读写、心态三个板块的全部提示信息，不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，词数符合要求。接下来梳理写作思路：顺着题目已经给出的开头，先落地听说部分的安排，把“多听英语新闻、音乐等材料，多用英语交流”的要点写具体；接着用过渡词转到读写板块，把“读文章、写日记”的内容补充完整；最后写心态层面的规划，点明要努力、保持自信，最后收尾表达对取得进步的期待，全程用初二阶段掌握的简单句式和衔接词串联，保证行文通顺没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头后首先完成听说板块内容：说明空闲时间会多听英语新闻、英文歌曲，主动抓住所有机会和同学用英语交流，锻炼听说能力，对应表格里听说部分的提示。
2. 用过渡短语转到读写板块：说明自己会挑选不同类型的英语文章，每天留出固定时间阅读，同时坚持写英语日记，以此提升阅读和写作能力，覆盖读写部分的所有提示。
3. 最后补充心态部分的内容：点明自己在学习过程中会始终努力、保持自信，最后表达按照规划执行就能取得进步的期待，完成全部要点，整体逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
My English Learning Plan
The new term has begun, and I made a detailed plan for my English learning.
On the one hand, I'll listen to English news and songs when I'm free. What's more, I'll catch every chance to speak English, for example, talking with my classmates in English even for very simple questions.
On the other hand, I'll choose different English materials, such as books, novels, stories and so on, and spend half an hour reading them every day. Keeping a diary is also a good way to improve writing skills.
Most importantly, I'll work hard and stay confident. By following my learning plan, I believe I can make great progress this term.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，英语学习话题表达，书面表达逻辑衔接
【点评】
这篇习作完全贴合题目要求，完整覆盖了所有给定的提示要点，层次清晰分明，从听说训练到读写提升再到学习心态层层递进，过渡自然流畅，所用的词汇和句式都符合初二年级的英语能力水平，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，表意清晰，是一篇非常规范的同话题范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
