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六、书面表达。
假如现在是2092年，你是Kate，生活在火星上，你的朋友Jim现在在地球上，他即将来火星生活。请你写一封100词左右的信，向他介绍你在火星上的生活。
【要点】1. What's your feeling of living on Mars?
2. What about your study and life there?
3. How about the environment on Mars?
【注意】1. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 信中需涉及上述几个方面的内容，可适当增加相关细节，使意思表达更加完整。
Dear Jim，
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
Yours，
Kate
假如现在是2092年，你是Kate，生活在火星上，你的朋友Jim现在在地球上，他即将来火星生活。请你写一封100词左右的信，向他介绍你在火星上的生活。
【要点】1. What's your feeling of living on Mars?
2. What about your study and life there?
3. How about the environment on Mars?
【注意】1. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 信中需涉及上述几个方面的内容，可适当增加相关细节，使意思表达更加完整。
Dear Jim，
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
Yours，
Kate
答案
One possible version
Dear Jim,
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on the Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. We have lessons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates through the computer connected to an interplanetary network at home. It's not so crowded here, so we have more space to live in. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and pretty flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.
Yours,
Kate
Dear Jim,
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on the Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. We have lessons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates through the computer connected to an interplanetary network at home. It's not so crowded here, so we have more space to live in. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and pretty flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.
Yours,
Kate
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确核心要求：这是写给朋友的介绍火星生活的书信，需要覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点。第一步先确定写作基调：用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，语气轻松贴合好友交流的场景。第二步梳理内容逻辑：首先承接题目已给出的开头，先点明自己居住在火星的整体感受，对比地球突出火星生活的优势；接下来依次展开介绍学习模式、日常起居的相关细节，对应第二个要点；最后描述火星的生态环境，对应第三个要点。第三步补充符合2092年火星生活设定的合理细节，让内容更饱满，同时控制总词数在100词左右，最后检查不要遗漏要点，语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为私人书信，写作身份是生活在火星的Kate，收信人是即将来火星的地球好友Jim，核心要求覆盖居住感受、学习生活、火星环境三个要点，词数100左右，开头结尾已给出无需自行创作。
2. 内容搭建：
① 开篇承接给定开头，先点明核心感受：火星生活比地球更舒适有趣，回应第一个要点。
② 展开介绍学习与日常：说明我们没有实体学校，依托接入星际网络的电脑在家完成上课、写作业、考试、和师生交流的全部学习流程；火星人口密度低不拥挤，居住空间更充足，机器人承担绝大多数家务，我们有更多时间发展爱好，社区周边还有超市让生活十分便利，完整回应第二个要点。
③ 最后介绍环境：火星没有污染，随处可见绿树鲜花，环境十分优美，回应第三个要点。
3. 通读调整语句衔接，修正语法错误，确认词数符合要求，三个要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Jim,
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on the Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. We have lessons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates through the computer connected to an interplanetary network at home. It's not so crowded here, so we have more space to live in. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and pretty flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.
Yours,
Kate
【知识点】
英文书信写作
要点类书面表达
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题是想象类应用文书信写作，限定要点清晰，学生只要紧扣三个给定核心方向，结合火星未来生活的设定补充合理细节，保证语句通顺、时态统一，就可以完成合格的作文，需要注意不要出现违背火星生活设定的不合理内容，同时不要遗漏任意一个题干要求的要点。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确核心要求：这是写给朋友的介绍火星生活的书信，需要覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点。第一步先确定写作基调：用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，语气轻松贴合好友交流的场景。第二步梳理内容逻辑：首先承接题目已给出的开头，先点明自己居住在火星的整体感受，对比地球突出火星生活的优势；接下来依次展开介绍学习模式、日常起居的相关细节，对应第二个要点；最后描述火星的生态环境，对应第三个要点。第三步补充符合2092年火星生活设定的合理细节，让内容更饱满，同时控制总词数在100词左右，最后检查不要遗漏要点，语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为私人书信，写作身份是生活在火星的Kate，收信人是即将来火星的地球好友Jim，核心要求覆盖居住感受、学习生活、火星环境三个要点，词数100左右，开头结尾已给出无需自行创作。
2. 内容搭建：
① 开篇承接给定开头，先点明核心感受：火星生活比地球更舒适有趣，回应第一个要点。
② 展开介绍学习与日常：说明我们没有实体学校，依托接入星际网络的电脑在家完成上课、写作业、考试、和师生交流的全部学习流程；火星人口密度低不拥挤，居住空间更充足，机器人承担绝大多数家务，我们有更多时间发展爱好，社区周边还有超市让生活十分便利，完整回应第二个要点。
③ 最后介绍环境：火星没有污染，随处可见绿树鲜花，环境十分优美，回应第三个要点。
3. 通读调整语句衔接，修正语法错误，确认词数符合要求，三个要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Jim,
Now, I'm writing a letter to you about my life on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars.
I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on the Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. We have lessons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates through the computer connected to an interplanetary network at home. It's not so crowded here, so we have more space to live in. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and pretty flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.
Yours,
Kate
【知识点】
英文书信写作
要点类书面表达
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题是想象类应用文书信写作，限定要点清晰，学生只要紧扣三个给定核心方向，结合火星未来生活的设定补充合理细节，保证语句通顺、时态统一，就可以完成合格的作文，需要注意不要出现违背火星生活设定的不合理内容，同时不要遗漏任意一个题干要求的要点。
【难度系数】
0.7
