三、书面表达
假如你是李林。今天你特别开心,因为参加了一次非常有趣的农场之旅。请根据下面的信息,写一篇60词左右的日记,记录你今天的活动及感受。
时间:周六
地点:开心农场
交通方式:校车
活动内容:早上八点:乘车出发
早上九点:采摘草莓
中午十二点:吃午餐
下午两点:爬山
下午五点:回家
活动感受:有点累但是很开心
Saturday, 16 March
假如你是李林。今天你特别开心,因为参加了一次非常有趣的农场之旅。请根据下面的信息,写一篇60词左右的日记,记录你今天的活动及感受。
时间:周六
地点:开心农场
交通方式:校车
活动内容:早上八点:乘车出发
早上九点:采摘草莓
中午十二点:吃午餐
下午两点:爬山
下午五点:回家
活动感受:有点累但是很开心
Saturday, 16 March
Today is Saturday. Our teacher took us to
Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00
in the morning. When we got there, we went to
pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were
big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had
lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We
went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was
very happy.
Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00
in the morning. When we got there, we went to
pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were
big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had
lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We
went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was
very happy.
答案
One possible version:
Saturday, 16 March
Today is Saturday. Our teacher took us to
Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00
in the morning. When we got there, we went to
pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were
big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had
lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We
went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was
very happy.
Saturday, 16 March
Today is Saturday. Our teacher took us to
Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00
in the morning. When we got there, we went to
pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were
big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had
lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We
went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was
very happy.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示类英语日记写作题,解题思路如下:1. 先明确文体要求:日记属于叙事类应用文,题干已经给出日期抬头,不需要额外补充格式;2. 确定时态和人称:记录当天已经发生的活动,统一使用一般过去时,以第一人称叙事即可;3. 梳理所有给定要点,按照时间先后顺序把8点乘校车出发、9点摘草莓、12点吃午餐、2点爬山、5点回家的活动依次串联,最后补充题干给出的活动感受,适当添加少量自然的衔接细节,控制总词数在60左右,确保没有遗漏核心信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇点题:直接交代核心事件,说明今日和老师一同前往开心农场,早上8点乘坐校车出发,点明出行的基本信息。
2. 顺叙活动:按照时间先后顺序依次介绍后续安排:上午9点到达农场后采摘草莓,中午12点集体享用午餐,下午2点一起爬山,下午5点结束行程返程,可适当补充草莓又大又红、味道很甜这类符合场景的小细节,让内容更生动。
3. 收尾抒情:最后点明本次出行的感受,即虽然身体有些疲惫,但是整体非常开心,完成所有要点的覆盖。
4. 最后通读全文,检查时态是否统一为一般过去时,有没有遗漏题干给出的信息,词数符合60词左右的要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday, 16 March
Today is Saturday. Our teacher took us to Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00 in the morning. When we got there, we went to pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
英语日记写作规范、一般过去时应用、记叙文时间顺序表达
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类写作,所有核心要点都已经明确给出,只需要学生按照时间逻辑串联内容,正确使用一般过去时叙事即可,难度较低,适合刚接触叙事类写作的初中低年级学生练习,写作时注意不要遗漏给定的时间节点信息,避免出现时态错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类英语日记写作题,解题思路如下:1. 先明确文体要求:日记属于叙事类应用文,题干已经给出日期抬头,不需要额外补充格式;2. 确定时态和人称:记录当天已经发生的活动,统一使用一般过去时,以第一人称叙事即可;3. 梳理所有给定要点,按照时间先后顺序把8点乘校车出发、9点摘草莓、12点吃午餐、2点爬山、5点回家的活动依次串联,最后补充题干给出的活动感受,适当添加少量自然的衔接细节,控制总词数在60左右,确保没有遗漏核心信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇点题:直接交代核心事件,说明今日和老师一同前往开心农场,早上8点乘坐校车出发,点明出行的基本信息。
2. 顺叙活动:按照时间先后顺序依次介绍后续安排:上午9点到达农场后采摘草莓,中午12点集体享用午餐,下午2点一起爬山,下午5点结束行程返程,可适当补充草莓又大又红、味道很甜这类符合场景的小细节,让内容更生动。
3. 收尾抒情:最后点明本次出行的感受,即虽然身体有些疲惫,但是整体非常开心,完成所有要点的覆盖。
4. 最后通读全文,检查时态是否统一为一般过去时,有没有遗漏题干给出的信息,词数符合60词左右的要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday, 16 March
Today is Saturday. Our teacher took us to Happy Farm. We went there by school bus at 8:00 in the morning. When we got there, we went to pick strawberries at 9 a.m. These strawberries were big and red. They tasted good. At 12:00, we had lunch together. At 2 p.m., we went climbing. We went home at 5 p.m. Today I felt tired, but I was very happy.
【知识点】
英语日记写作规范、一般过去时应用、记叙文时间顺序表达
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类写作,所有核心要点都已经明确给出,只需要学生按照时间逻辑串联内容,正确使用一般过去时叙事即可,难度较低,适合刚接触叙事类写作的初中低年级学生练习,写作时注意不要遗漏给定的时间节点信息,避免出现时态错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
四、补充练习
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个合适的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Dear Xiao Li,
My time in China is going well. I love my new classmates. They are very
We're also looking forward to
I guess that's all for now! I will write again soon and send some
Yours,
Tony
1.
6.
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个合适的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Dear Xiao Li,
My time in China is going well. I love my new classmates. They are very
friendly
1(friend). Over the National Day Holiday, my parents and I are planning to go
2(go) to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Army. I've heard that it is an
3 amazing sight and I can't wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. It's amazing that there are more
4(many) than 7,000 terracotta warriors and horses. And no one in modern times knew about them
5(they) until the 1970s.We're also looking forward to
visiting
6(visit) several other places in Xi'an. Both my dad and I want to go to the Shaanxi History Museum first because
7 we love history. And I have heard that this museum is famous for
8 its works of art! We're also going to the Xi'an City Wall and a few other famous sights. We're going by train. We are arriving at 9:30 a. m. and will start sightseeing right away, so we hope to sleep
9(sleep) well on the train!I guess that's all for now! I will write again soon and send some
photos
10(photo) I take in Xi'an! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,
Tony
1.
friendly
2. to go
3. an
4. more
5. them
6.
visiting
7. because
8. for
9. to sleep
10. photos
答案
1. friendly 2. to go 3. an 4. more 5. them
6. visiting 7. because 8. for 9. to sleep
10. photos
6. visiting 7. because 8. for 9. to sleep
10. photos
解析
【分析】
拿到这道短文语法填空题,首先先通读全文,理清文章大意是Tony写给好友小李的信,介绍自己在中国的生活以及即将去西安旅行的计划。接下来逐个分析空格:首先判断空格处是否需要对括号内给出的词进行词性/形式变换,没有给出提示词的空格就从冠词、介词、连词等功能词的角度结合固定搭配和句子逻辑推导,每一步都结合已学的基础语法规则验证,就能顺利得出所有答案。
【解析】
1. 第1空:空格前有系动词are和副词very,此处需要形容词作表语修饰主语They(指代同学),名词friend的形容词形式为friendly,意为“友好的”,符合语境。
2. 第2空:此处考查固定搭配plan to do sth.,意为“计划做某事”,因此填入动词不定式to go。
3. 第3空:此处表达“一处令人惊叹的景观”,sight是可数名词单数,且修饰它的amazing以元音音素开头,因此填入不定冠词an。
4. 第4空:空格后出现比较级的标志词than,说明此处需要用many的比较级形式more,构成more than短语,意为“超过”。
5. 第5空:空格前是介词about,介词后接人称代词时需要使用宾格形式,主格they的宾格为them,指代前文提到的兵马俑。
6. 第6空:此处考查固定搭配look forward to,意为“盼望”,结构中的to是介词,后面需要接动名词作宾语,因此visit变为动名词visiting。
7. 第7空:空格前“我和爸爸都想先去陕西历史博物馆”,空格后“我们热爱历史”,前后是因果关系,后半句是前半句的原因,因此填入连词because。
8. 第8空:此处考查固定搭配be famous for,意为“因……而闻名”,符合句意“我听说这个博物馆以它的艺术品闻名”,因此填入介词for。
9. 第9空:此处考查固定搭配hope to do sth.,意为“希望做某事”,因此填入动词不定式to sleep。
10. 第10空:空格前有修饰词some,后接可数名词时需要使用复数形式,photo的复数变化为photos。
【答案】
1. friendly 2. to go 3. an 4. more 5. them
6. visiting 7. because 8. for 9. to sleep 10. photos
【知识点】
词性转换,固定搭配,冠词用法
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段的基础语法填空题型,考点全部围绕课内核心基础知识点展开,没有偏题怪题,既考查了词形变换的基础规则,也检验了学生对常见固定短语的积累,只要平时牢记基础搭配、理清句子逻辑关系,就能顺利拿到满分,适合用来巩固基础语法体系。
【难度系数】
0.8
拿到这道短文语法填空题,首先先通读全文,理清文章大意是Tony写给好友小李的信,介绍自己在中国的生活以及即将去西安旅行的计划。接下来逐个分析空格:首先判断空格处是否需要对括号内给出的词进行词性/形式变换,没有给出提示词的空格就从冠词、介词、连词等功能词的角度结合固定搭配和句子逻辑推导,每一步都结合已学的基础语法规则验证,就能顺利得出所有答案。
【解析】
1. 第1空:空格前有系动词are和副词very,此处需要形容词作表语修饰主语They(指代同学),名词friend的形容词形式为friendly,意为“友好的”,符合语境。
2. 第2空:此处考查固定搭配plan to do sth.,意为“计划做某事”,因此填入动词不定式to go。
3. 第3空:此处表达“一处令人惊叹的景观”,sight是可数名词单数,且修饰它的amazing以元音音素开头,因此填入不定冠词an。
4. 第4空:空格后出现比较级的标志词than,说明此处需要用many的比较级形式more,构成more than短语,意为“超过”。
5. 第5空:空格前是介词about,介词后接人称代词时需要使用宾格形式,主格they的宾格为them,指代前文提到的兵马俑。
6. 第6空:此处考查固定搭配look forward to,意为“盼望”,结构中的to是介词,后面需要接动名词作宾语,因此visit变为动名词visiting。
7. 第7空:空格前“我和爸爸都想先去陕西历史博物馆”,空格后“我们热爱历史”,前后是因果关系,后半句是前半句的原因,因此填入连词because。
8. 第8空:此处考查固定搭配be famous for,意为“因……而闻名”,符合句意“我听说这个博物馆以它的艺术品闻名”,因此填入介词for。
9. 第9空:此处考查固定搭配hope to do sth.,意为“希望做某事”,因此填入动词不定式to sleep。
10. 第10空:空格前有修饰词some,后接可数名词时需要使用复数形式,photo的复数变化为photos。
【答案】
1. friendly 2. to go 3. an 4. more 5. them
6. visiting 7. because 8. for 9. to sleep 10. photos
【知识点】
词性转换,固定搭配,冠词用法
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段的基础语法填空题型,考点全部围绕课内核心基础知识点展开,没有偏题怪题,既考查了词形变换的基础规则,也检验了学生对常见固定短语的积累,只要平时牢记基础搭配、理清句子逻辑关系,就能顺利拿到满分,适合用来巩固基础语法体系。
【难度系数】
0.8
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