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在日常学习中,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以"Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?"为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种学习方式中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你的理由,向专栏投稿。
要求:1. 文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示,可适当发挥;2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
在日常学习中,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以"Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?"为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种学习方式中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你的理由,向专栏投稿。
要求:1. 文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示,可适当发挥;2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁：本文是一篇议论。②时态：主要为一般现在时。③提示：以“Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①solve problems on my own 我自己解决问题 ②at the same time 同时 ③keep my mind on ... 集中我的注意力在……上 ④develop a good learning habit 养成一个良好的学习习惯
⑤Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing.（when 引导时间状语从句；what 引导宾语从句）
⑥I think studying alone is a really good way and will benefit me a lot in my life.（think 后为省略引导词的宾语从句；动名词作从句的主语）
[审题步骤]
①体裁：本文是一篇议论。②时态：主要为一般现在时。③提示：以“Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①solve problems on my own 我自己解决问题 ②at the same time 同时 ③keep my mind on ... 集中我的注意力在……上 ④develop a good learning habit 养成一个良好的学习习惯
⑤Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing.（when 引导时间状语从句；what 引导宾语从句）
⑥I think studying alone is a really good way and will benefit me a lot in my life.（think 后为省略引导词的宾语从句；动名词作从句的主语）
参考范文1（选择独自学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my schoolwork quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is a really good way and will benefit me a lot in my life.
参考范文2（选择小组学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇观点类英语议论文写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：二选一选定自己偏好的学习方式，必须覆盖对应选项给出的两个提示要点，词数不少于80。第一步先承接题干已给出的开头，直接亮明自己的立场，说明更倾向独自学习还是小组学习；第二步围绕选定的方向展开论述，把表格里的两个要点自然融入内容，还可以补充贴合日常学习的细节，让内容更饱满，比如补充独立解题能锻炼思维、小组讨论能拓宽思路这类延伸内容；最后第三步收尾总结，点明该学习方式给自己带来的长期益处，让文章结构完整。全程注意不要出现自己的真实姓名和学校信息，时态以一般现在时为主即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇亮明观点：承接给定的开头语句，直接清晰说明自己更偏好的学习方式，比如选择独自学习就写"As for me, I like studying alone better"，选择小组学习就写"As for me, I prefer to study with a group"。
2. 主体分点论述：用逻辑连接词（firstly, secondly等）分层展开，覆盖对应选项的两个必写要点：
· 若选独自学习：第一层对应"自己独立解决问题"的要点，说明独立思考解题可以锻炼自身思维能力，避免过度依赖他人；第二层对应"专注于学业"的要点，说明独自学习没有外界不必要的干扰，可以全程集中注意力完成学习任务，逐步养成良好的自主学习习惯。
· 若选小组学习：第一层对应"从他人处获得帮助"的要点，说明遇到学习卡点时组员可以及时提供帮助，降低学习难度，提升学习信心；第二层对应"和组员分享想法"的要点，说明多人交流可以碰撞出不同的思路，从更多维度理解知识点，拓宽自身视野。
3. 结尾总结升华：用all in all等收尾短语，再次点明该学习方式给自己带来的成长价值，让文章结构完整。
写作过程中注意使用合适的固定搭配、状语从句等丰富句式，保证词数达标，不泄露个人隐私信息。
【答案】
参考范文1（选择独自学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my schoolwork quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is a really good way and will benefit me a lot in my life.
参考范文2（选择小组学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作，常用固定搭配，复合句运用
【点评】
本题话题贴合学生日常学习生活，考生很容易找到写作切入点，难度适中。写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的两个必写要点，合理使用逻辑连接词让行文条理更清晰，适当加入细节补充可以让内容更生动，避免生硬翻译要点，同时注意规避语法错误，保证词数达标即可获得不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇观点类英语议论文写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：二选一选定自己偏好的学习方式，必须覆盖对应选项给出的两个提示要点，词数不少于80。第一步先承接题干已给出的开头，直接亮明自己的立场，说明更倾向独自学习还是小组学习；第二步围绕选定的方向展开论述，把表格里的两个要点自然融入内容，还可以补充贴合日常学习的细节，让内容更饱满，比如补充独立解题能锻炼思维、小组讨论能拓宽思路这类延伸内容；最后第三步收尾总结，点明该学习方式给自己带来的长期益处，让文章结构完整。全程注意不要出现自己的真实姓名和学校信息，时态以一般现在时为主即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇亮明观点：承接给定的开头语句，直接清晰说明自己更偏好的学习方式，比如选择独自学习就写"As for me, I like studying alone better"，选择小组学习就写"As for me, I prefer to study with a group"。
2. 主体分点论述：用逻辑连接词（firstly, secondly等）分层展开，覆盖对应选项的两个必写要点：
· 若选独自学习：第一层对应"自己独立解决问题"的要点，说明独立思考解题可以锻炼自身思维能力，避免过度依赖他人；第二层对应"专注于学业"的要点，说明独自学习没有外界不必要的干扰，可以全程集中注意力完成学习任务，逐步养成良好的自主学习习惯。
· 若选小组学习：第一层对应"从他人处获得帮助"的要点，说明遇到学习卡点时组员可以及时提供帮助，降低学习难度，提升学习信心；第二层对应"和组员分享想法"的要点，说明多人交流可以碰撞出不同的思路，从更多维度理解知识点，拓宽自身视野。
3. 结尾总结升华：用all in all等收尾短语，再次点明该学习方式给自己带来的成长价值，让文章结构完整。
写作过程中注意使用合适的固定搭配、状语从句等丰富句式，保证词数达标，不泄露个人隐私信息。
【答案】
参考范文1（选择独自学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my schoolwork quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is a really good way and will benefit me a lot in my life.
参考范文2（选择小组学习）：
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like studying alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作，常用固定搭配，复合句运用
【点评】
本题话题贴合学生日常学习生活，考生很容易找到写作切入点，难度适中。写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的两个必写要点，合理使用逻辑连接词让行文条理更清晰，适当加入细节补充可以让内容更生动，避免生硬翻译要点，同时注意规避语法错误，保证词数达标即可获得不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.6
