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五、书面表达。
根据以下图片内容,向你的美国朋友 Peter 介绍中国寓言故事——"守株待兔"。请清楚地表
达故事的内容,可适当添加细节,并且谈谈自己从这个故事中得到的启发。
提示词:田地 field 撞到 run into 捡起 pick up 农活 farmwork 杂草 weed
根据以下图片内容,向你的美国朋友 Peter 介绍中国寓言故事——"守株待兔"。请清楚地表
达故事的内容,可适当添加细节,并且谈谈自己从这个故事中得到的启发。
提示词:田地 field 撞到 run into 捡起 pick up 农活 farmwork 杂草 weed
答案
Once upon a time,there was a farmer. He worked in
the field to make a living.
One day,when he was working in the field,he saw a
rabbit running quickly. Suddenly,the rabbit ran into a tree
and died. The farmer was very happy and picked it up. So
from that day on,he didn't do any farmwork. He just sat
near the tree and waited for another rabbit to run into the
tree. His friend told him to work hard in the field,but he
didn't listen to him. Day after day,no rabbits came. At the
same time,his field was full of weeds because he didn't
take care of it. In the end,he got nothing.
This story tells us that we should not expect too much
from luck. We should work hard to get what we want.
the field to make a living.
One day,when he was working in the field,he saw a
rabbit running quickly. Suddenly,the rabbit ran into a tree
and died. The farmer was very happy and picked it up. So
from that day on,he didn't do any farmwork. He just sat
near the tree and waited for another rabbit to run into the
tree. His friend told him to work hard in the field,but he
didn't listen to him. Day after day,no rabbits came. At the
same time,his field was full of weeds because he didn't
take care of it. In the end,he got nothing.
This story tells us that we should not expect too much
from luck. We should work hard to get what we want.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求向美国朋友Peter介绍中国寓言故事《守株待兔》，需包含故事内容、适当细节及个人启发，且要用到提示词。解题思路为：先明确文章结构（开头引入→故事叙述→启发总结），再按时间顺序梳理“守株待兔”的核心情节，将提示词自然融入语句，注意故事部分用一般过去时、启发部分用一般现在时，最后提炼故事传递的道理，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【解析】1. 开头：用“Once upon a time”引出故事，介绍农夫以种田为生的日常（用到提示词field）；2. 故事叙述：按情节发展，描述农夫劳作时看到兔子快速奔跑、撞树死亡（用到run into）、捡起兔子（用到pick up），之后不再做农活（用到farmwork），天天守在树旁等兔子，田地长满杂草（用到weed），最终一无所获；3. 启发总结：点明故事寓意，即不能依赖运气，要通过努力获得想要的东西；4. 检查：确保提示词全部用到，时态正确，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Once upon a time,there was a farmer. He worked in the field to make a living.
One day,when he was working in the field,he saw a rabbit running quickly. Suddenly,the rabbit ran into a tree and died. The farmer was very happy and picked it up. So from that day on,he didn't do any farmwork. He just sat near the tree and waited for another rabbit to run into the tree. His friend told him to work hard in the field,but he didn't listen to him. Day after day,no rabbits came. At the same time,his field was full of weeds because he didn't take care of it. In the end,he got nothing.
This story tells us that we should not expect too much from luck. We should work hard to get what we want.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、寓言故事写作
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化寓言，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确转述故事内容并提炼核心道理，既锻炼语言输出能力，又传递了正确的价值观，是典型的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头：用“Once upon a time”引出故事，介绍农夫以种田为生的日常（用到提示词field）；2. 故事叙述：按情节发展，描述农夫劳作时看到兔子快速奔跑、撞树死亡（用到run into）、捡起兔子（用到pick up），之后不再做农活（用到farmwork），天天守在树旁等兔子，田地长满杂草（用到weed），最终一无所获；3. 启发总结：点明故事寓意，即不能依赖运气，要通过努力获得想要的东西；4. 检查：确保提示词全部用到，时态正确，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Once upon a time,there was a farmer. He worked in the field to make a living.
One day,when he was working in the field,he saw a rabbit running quickly. Suddenly,the rabbit ran into a tree and died. The farmer was very happy and picked it up. So from that day on,he didn't do any farmwork. He just sat near the tree and waited for another rabbit to run into the tree. His friend told him to work hard in the field,but he didn't listen to him. Day after day,no rabbits came. At the same time,his field was full of weeds because he didn't take care of it. In the end,he got nothing.
This story tells us that we should not expect too much from luck. We should work hard to get what we want.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、寓言故事写作
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化寓言，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确转述故事内容并提炼核心道理，既锻炼语言输出能力，又传递了正确的价值观，是典型的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
