B写作实战
随着社会的发展,越来越多的人走进博物馆。假如上周六(6月22日)你参观了青海省博物馆(Qinghai Provincial Museum),并认识了一个新朋友。请根据以下图示写一篇80词左右的日记,介绍你的博物馆之旅。

要求:
1.日记应包括全部图文信息,并适当补充;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名;
3.注意日记的格式。

请做: 单元检测(九) 勤演练,汇真知

【写作实战】
One possible version:
Saturday,22nd June Sunny
Today was Saturday. The weather was sun-
ny. I visited the Qinghai Provincial Museum.
The museum was about three kilometres away
from my home. It took me 15 minutes to get
there by bus. At the museum,I met a new
friend. Her name is Maria. She has long blonde
hair and big eyes. She is also very outgoing. We
talked a lot about things in the museum. I took a
lot of photos in the museum,bought some gifts
for my friends and learnt about the history of
the old objects. I felt tired but very happy.

【分析】
本题为英语日记写作题，解题思路如下：首先牢记日记格式，开头需标注日期和天气；其次结合图示信息，依次涵盖天气、交通（距离、出行方式及时长）、新朋友的外貌与性格、博物馆内的活动、个人感受；最后适当补充细节让内容连贯，控制在80词左右，避免出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
按照日记格式开篇，先写日期和天气；接着说明天气情况，介绍去青海博物馆的交通方式、距离及时长；然后描述遇到的新朋友的外貌与性格；再列举在博物馆的活动；最后表达个人感受，确保所有图示信息都包含，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Saturday,22nd June Sunny
Today was Saturday. The weather was sunny. I visited the Qinghai Provincial Museum. The museum was about three kilometres away from my home. It took me 15 minutes to get there by bus. At the museum,I met a new friend. Her name is Maria. She has long blonde hair and big eyes. She is also very outgoing. We talked a lot about things in the museum. I took a lot of photos in the museum,bought some gifts for my friends and learnt about the history of the old objects. I felt tired but very happy.
【知识点】
英语日记写作；词汇运用；情景表达
【点评】
范文严格遵循日记格式，完整覆盖图示所有信息，补充了合理细节，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5