七、书面表达(满分25分)
家是一盏灯,家是一个屋檐,家是一张柔软的床,家是幸福的港湾!在你的家里,一定会有你最喜欢的一个地方。请你以" Is My Favourite"为题,写一篇英语小短文。
提示:1. Which place is your favourite? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What's in it? 4. What do you usually do there?
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;2. 要点齐全,适当发挥,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚;3. 字体规范,卷面整洁,词数90左右。
Is My Favourite
家是一盏灯,家是一个屋檐,家是一张柔软的床,家是幸福的港湾!在你的家里,一定会有你最喜欢的一个地方。请你以" Is My Favourite"为题,写一篇英语小短文。
提示:1. Which place is your favourite? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What's in it? 4. What do you usually do there?
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;2. 要点齐全,适当发挥,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚;3. 字体规范,卷面整洁,词数90左右。
Is My Favourite
答案
One possible version:
The Study Is My Favourite
In my house, the study is my favourite. Why?
I like spending my free time there because there are many books and a computer in my study. I love reading books there. The books are just like my good friends. I learn a lot from them. Every day after I come back home from school, I do my homework there. After that, I often learn English, Maths and Physics on the internet. Oh, there is also a guitar in my study. When I'm tired, I can play the guitar for a while to make me relaxed.
The study is really my favourite place.
The Study Is My Favourite
In my house, the study is my favourite. Why?
I like spending my free time there because there are many books and a computer in my study. I love reading books there. The books are just like my good friends. I learn a lot from them. Every day after I come back home from school, I do my homework there. After that, I often learn English, Maths and Physics on the internet. Oh, there is also a guitar in my study. When I'm tired, I can play the guitar for a while to make me relaxed.
The study is really my favourite place.
解析
【分析】
本题为半命题英语书面表达,解题思路如下:1. 先补全题目确定写作主题;2. 紧扣提示的4个核心要点:明确最喜欢的家的地方、说明喜欢的原因、介绍该场所的物品、描述在那里的日常活动;3. 写作时注意词数90左右,语言通顺,无真实姓名和学校,结构清晰,适当发挥细节让内容更生动。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 补全题目:将题目补充为“The Study Is My Favourite”;2. 开篇点题:直接说明书房是自己最喜欢的地方;3. 主体展开:介绍书房内的物品(书籍、电脑、吉他),对应描述在书房的活动:读书(将书比作朋友体现收获)、放学后做作业、上网学习学科知识、疲惫时弹吉他放松,解释喜欢的原因;4. 结尾总结:再次强调书房是自己最喜欢的地方,呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Study Is My Favourite
In my house, the study is my favourite. Why?
I like spending my free time there because there are many books and a computer in my study. I love reading books there. The books are just like my good friends. I learn a lot from them. Every day after I come back home from school, I do my homework there. After that, I often learn English, Maths and Physics on the internet. Oh, there is also a guitar in my study. When I'm tired, I can play the guitar for a while to make me relaxed.
The study is really my favourite place.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
该范文补题恰当,紧扣提示所有要点,内容具体充实,通过“书像朋友”“弹吉他放松”等细节丰富情感,语言通顺连贯,采用总-分-总结构,符合词数要求,未出现真实信息,完美满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为半命题英语书面表达,解题思路如下:1. 先补全题目确定写作主题;2. 紧扣提示的4个核心要点:明确最喜欢的家的地方、说明喜欢的原因、介绍该场所的物品、描述在那里的日常活动;3. 写作时注意词数90左右,语言通顺,无真实姓名和学校,结构清晰,适当发挥细节让内容更生动。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 补全题目:将题目补充为“The Study Is My Favourite”;2. 开篇点题:直接说明书房是自己最喜欢的地方;3. 主体展开:介绍书房内的物品(书籍、电脑、吉他),对应描述在书房的活动:读书(将书比作朋友体现收获)、放学后做作业、上网学习学科知识、疲惫时弹吉他放松,解释喜欢的原因;4. 结尾总结:再次强调书房是自己最喜欢的地方,呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Study Is My Favourite
In my house, the study is my favourite. Why?
I like spending my free time there because there are many books and a computer in my study. I love reading books there. The books are just like my good friends. I learn a lot from them. Every day after I come back home from school, I do my homework there. After that, I often learn English, Maths and Physics on the internet. Oh, there is also a guitar in my study. When I'm tired, I can play the guitar for a while to make me relaxed.
The study is really my favourite place.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
该范文补题恰当,紧扣提示所有要点,内容具体充实,通过“书像朋友”“弹吉他放松”等细节丰富情感,语言通顺连贯,采用总-分-总结构,符合词数要求,未出现真实信息,完美满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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