Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假设学校正在开展“健康生活周”活动,请根据以下提示,为校刊写一篇题为“How to Be a Healthy Student”的短文。
提示:

写作要求:
1. 短文必须包含提示中的内容,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
假设学校正在开展“健康生活周”活动,请根据以下提示,为校刊写一篇题为“How to Be a Healthy Student”的短文。
提示:
写作要求:
1. 短文必须包含提示中的内容,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
答案
One possible version:
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. It is good for us to have balanced meals. Don't eat fast food. Second, doing sport can make us healthy and strong. We can play basketball when we are free. We can also ride bikes or walk to school. Third, it is important for everyone to have enough sleep. So we should go to bed early and get up early.
I hope everyone is healthy and happy.
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. It is good for us to have balanced meals. Don't eat fast food. Second, doing sport can make us healthy and strong. We can play basketball when we are free. We can also ride bikes or walk to school. Third, it is important for everyone to have enough sleep. So we should go to bed early and get up early.
I hope everyone is healthy and happy.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以“How to Be a Healthy Student”为题写短文。解题思路:先承接已给开头,明确从提示的“健康饮食习惯”“做运动”入手,还可适当补充合理内容;接着分点阐述具体做法,确保涵盖所有提示要点,适当发挥充实内容;最后结尾表达对健康的祝愿,注意词数要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 承接开头后,第一点写健康饮食习惯:说明要均衡饮食,不吃快餐;2. 第二点写做运动:举例空闲时打篮球,骑车或步行上学;3. 第三点补充充足睡眠:早睡早起;4. 结尾表达祝愿,确保内容符合要求,词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. It is good for us to have balanced meals. Don't eat fast food. Second, doing sport can make us healthy and strong. We can play basketball when we are free. We can also ride bikes or walk to school. Third, it is important for everyone to have enough sleep. So we should go to bed early and get up early.
I hope everyone is healthy and happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点,适当补充内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合写作要求,是合格范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:1. 承接开头后,第一点写健康饮食习惯:说明要均衡饮食,不吃快餐;2. 第二点写做运动:举例空闲时打篮球,骑车或步行上学;3. 第三点补充充足睡眠:早睡早起;4. 结尾表达祝愿,确保内容符合要求,词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
How to Be a Healthy Student
It's important for us students to grow up healthily. There are lots of ways to stay healthy.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. It is good for us to have balanced meals. Don't eat fast food. Second, doing sport can make us healthy and strong. We can play basketball when we are free. We can also ride bikes or walk to school. Third, it is important for everyone to have enough sleep. So we should go to bed early and get up early.
I hope everyone is healthy and happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点,适当补充内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合写作要求,是合格范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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