B. 书面表达
51. 假如你是李华,请以“My Eating Habits”为题介绍你的饮食习惯。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍你的一日三餐;
(2)你认为你的饮食习惯怎么样?
(3)希望每个人都健康饮食。
要求:
(1)不能照译原文;作文中不得出现真实校名、地点和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数60左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old.
51. 假如你是李华,请以“My Eating Habits”为题介绍你的饮食习惯。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍你的一日三餐;
(2)你认为你的饮食习惯怎么样?
(3)希望每个人都健康饮食。
要求:
(1)不能照译原文;作文中不得出现真实校名、地点和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数60左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old.
Let me tell you something about my eating habits.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
答案
51. 参考范文:
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. Let me tell you something about my eating habits.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. Let me tell you something about my eating habits.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份介绍饮食习惯,需完成三个核心要点:介绍一日三餐、评价自身饮食习惯、呼吁健康饮食,开头已给出,需补全内容。解题思路:1. 承接开头引出饮食习惯话题;2. 分别描述早、中、晚三餐的具体食物,符合日常饮食场景;3. 评价自身饮食习惯(如健康);4. 发出健康饮食的呼吁,注意控制词数在60左右,避免出现真实信息,保证语句连贯。
【解析】
根据题目要求,补全内容如下:先承接开头用“Let me tell you something about my eating habits.”引出;早餐写面包和牛奶,说明对身体有益;午餐说明在学校食用,食物为番茄鸡蛋面或鸡肉饭;晚餐写水果(香蕉、橙子);接着评价饮食习惯是健康的;最后用“I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.”呼吁大家健康饮食,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求,无违规信息。
【答案】
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. Let me tell you something about my eating habits.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作(饮食习惯)、英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求,涵盖指定要点,内容贴合实际,语句通顺,用词准确,符合初中生英语水平,词数达标,无违规信息,是一篇符合要求的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份介绍饮食习惯,需完成三个核心要点:介绍一日三餐、评价自身饮食习惯、呼吁健康饮食,开头已给出,需补全内容。解题思路:1. 承接开头引出饮食习惯话题;2. 分别描述早、中、晚三餐的具体食物,符合日常饮食场景;3. 评价自身饮食习惯(如健康);4. 发出健康饮食的呼吁,注意控制词数在60左右,避免出现真实信息,保证语句连贯。
【解析】
根据题目要求,补全内容如下:先承接开头用“Let me tell you something about my eating habits.”引出;早餐写面包和牛奶,说明对身体有益;午餐说明在学校食用,食物为番茄鸡蛋面或鸡肉饭;晚餐写水果(香蕉、橙子);接着评价饮食习惯是健康的;最后用“I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.”呼吁大家健康饮食,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求,无违规信息。
【答案】
My Eating Habits
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. Let me tell you something about my eating habits.
For breakfast, I have bread and milk. I think they're good for me. I always have lunch at school. For lunch, I like tomato and egg noodles. But sometimes I have rice with chicken. For dinner, I always eat fruit. I like bananas and oranges. My eating habits are really healthy.
I hope everyone can eat well and keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作(饮食习惯)、英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求,涵盖指定要点,内容贴合实际,语句通顺,用词准确,符合初中生英语水平,词数达标,无违规信息,是一篇符合要求的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
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