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假如你是李华,你刚刚进入新学校学习,你的美国好友Tom想了解你的学校。请根据地图,给他写一封邮件介绍你的学校。
要求:70词左右。作文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I am very happy to tell you something about my new school.
Welcome to my new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文(邮件)
2.时态:以一般现在时为主
3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Tom,
I am very happy to tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground where we exercise. ⑥ On the left of the sports field① stands the maths teaching building, and
the right② of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a modern gym and a clean dining hall. We often play basketball③ on the playground and read books④ in the library⑤.
I love my new school very much. Welcome to my new school.
亮点词块
①the sports filed 操场
②on the right 在右边
③play basketball 打篮球
④read books 读书
⑤in the library 在图书馆
高分句子
⑥ In the middle of the school is a large playground where we exercise. ( where 引导定语从句)学校中央是一个宽敞的操场,我们在那里锻炼身体。
假如你是李华,你刚刚进入新学校学习,你的美国好友Tom想了解你的学校。请根据地图,给他写一封邮件介绍你的学校。
要求:70词左右。作文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I am very happy to tell you something about my new school.
Welcome to my new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文(邮件)
2.时态:以一般现在时为主
3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Tom,
I am very happy to tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground where we exercise. ⑥ On the left of the sports field① stands the maths teaching building, and
the right② of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a modern gym and a clean dining hall. We often play basketball③ on the playground and read books④ in the library⑤.I love my new school very much. Welcome to my new school.
亮点词块
①the sports filed 操场
②on the right 在右边
③play basketball 打篮球
④read books 读书
⑤in the library 在图书馆
高分句子
⑥ In the middle of the school is a large playground where we exercise. ( where 引导定语从句)学校中央是一个宽敞的操场,我们在那里锻炼身体。
答案
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground. On the left of the playground stands a teaching building, and on the right of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a clean dining hall and a modern gym. We often play sports on the playground and read books in the library. I love my new school very much.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以第一人称、一般现在时写一封介绍新学校的邮件，开头结尾已给出，要结合学校方位布局，控制70词左右。解题思路：1. 先总述学校整体特点；2. 用方位介词（in the middle of、on the left/right of、behind）清晰描述各场所位置；3. 补充在场所的日常活动，让内容真实；4. 控制词数，语言简洁符合邮件格式。
【解析】
根据题目要求，按以下步骤组织内容：先点明学校特点，再按方位介绍操场、教学楼、图书馆、餐厅、体育馆的位置，最后补充日常活动，结尾呼应。具体内容如下：
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground. On the left of the playground stands a teaching building, and on the right of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a clean dining hall and a modern gym. We often play sports on the playground and read books in the library. I love my new school very much.
【答案】
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground. On the left of the playground stands a teaching building, and on the right of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a clean dining hall and a modern gym. We often play sports on the playground and read books in the library. I love my new school very much.
【知识点】
应用文写作（邮件）、方位介词运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文符合邮件体裁要求，以第一人称、一般现在时清晰介绍学校布局，方位词使用准确，补充日常活动使内容充实，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的初中英语应用文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求：需以第一人称、一般现在时写一封介绍新学校的邮件，开头结尾已给出，要结合学校方位布局，控制70词左右。解题思路：1. 先总述学校整体特点；2. 用方位介词（in the middle of、on the left/right of、behind）清晰描述各场所位置；3. 补充在场所的日常活动，让内容真实；4. 控制词数，语言简洁符合邮件格式。
【解析】
根据题目要求，按以下步骤组织内容：先点明学校特点，再按方位介绍操场、教学楼、图书馆、餐厅、体育馆的位置，最后补充日常活动，结尾呼应。具体内容如下：
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground. On the left of the playground stands a teaching building, and on the right of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a clean dining hall and a modern gym. We often play sports on the playground and read books in the library. I love my new school very much.
【答案】
My school is big and beautiful. In the middle of the school is a large playground. On the left of the playground stands a teaching building, and on the right of it is the library. Behind the playground, there is a clean dining hall and a modern gym. We often play sports on the playground and read books in the library. I love my new school very much.
【知识点】
应用文写作（邮件）、方位介词运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文符合邮件体裁要求，以第一人称、一般现在时清晰介绍学校布局，方位词使用准确，补充日常活动使内容充实，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的初中英语应用文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
