XI. Think and write. 你去过什么地方?请根据下面的思维导图,以“My wonderful trip”为题,写一写你的旅行经历。
要求:1. 用一般过去时;
2. 语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 不少于6句话。

My wonderful trip
要求:1. 用一般过去时;
2. 语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 不少于6句话。
My wonderful trip
答案
My wonderful trip
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We got there by train. On the first day, we visited the Great Wall and took many nice photos. On the second day, we went to the Palace Museum, it was really amazing. We ate delicious Beijing duck for dinner, it tasted very good. All of us felt so happy and we had a great time on this trip.
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We got there by train. On the first day, we visited the Great Wall and took many nice photos. On the second day, we went to the Palace Museum, it was really amazing. We ate delicious Beijing duck for dinner, it tasted very good. All of us felt so happy and we had a great time on this trip.
解析
本题要求以“My wonderful trip”为题写旅行经历,需要覆盖思维导图给出的6个核心要点:旅行地点、出行时间、出行方式、旅行期间的活动、品尝的食物、旅行感受,全程使用一般过去时,保证语句通顺连贯,满足不少于6句话的要求,使用五年级已掌握的基础词汇和句型即可完成写作。
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