登录
四、书面表达
假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。
注意事项：1. 回复的邮件须包括Jennie邮件中的所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于90，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
Yours,
Li Mei
假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。
注意事项：1. 回复的邮件须包括Jennie邮件中的所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于90，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
My favourite wild animal is pandas. They are black and white and live mainly on bamboo. I like them because they are quite lovely. Moreover, it is very satisfying to see them eat bamboo.
However, pandas are in danger. They are losing their homes because people use more land to plant crops. Besides/Moreover, it is difficult for them to have babies.
We must take action to help them. I think we should build more nature reserves and plant more bamboo.
It’s also necessary to help them have more babies.
Yours,
Li Mei
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
My favourite wild animal is pandas. They are black and white and live mainly on bamboo. I like them because they are quite lovely. Moreover, it is very satisfying to see them eat bamboo.
However, pandas are in danger. They are losing their homes because people use more land to plant crops. Besides/Moreover, it is difficult for them to have babies. We must take action to help them. I think we should build more nature reserves and plant more bamboo. It’s also necessary to help them have more babies.
Yours,
Li Mei
(90 words)
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
My favourite wild animal is pandas. They are black and white and live mainly on bamboo. I like them because they are quite lovely. Moreover, it is very satisfying to see them eat bamboo.
However, pandas are in danger. They are losing their homes because people use more land to plant crops. Besides/Moreover, it is difficult for them to have babies. We must take action to help them. I think we should build more nature reserves and plant more bamboo. It’s also necessary to help them have more babies.
Yours,
Li Mei
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李梅的身份回复英国朋友Jennie的邮件，需覆盖邮件提出的所有问题：是否对保护濒危野生动物感兴趣、最喜欢的野生动物、喜欢的原因、该动物是否濒危、濒危原因、可采取的保护措施。解题思路：1. 选定常见且易展开的濒危野生动物（如熊猫）；2. 依次回应每个问题，补充细节让内容连贯；3. 遵循邮件格式，利用已给的开头结尾，确保词数达标，语句通顺自然。
【解析】
回复邮件需包含所有要求要点：① 明确最喜欢的野生动物是熊猫，描述其外形（黑白相间）、食性（主要以竹子为食），说明喜欢的原因（可爱，看它们吃竹子很治愈）；② 指出熊猫处于濒危状态，原因是人类占用土地种植作物导致栖息地丧失，且繁殖困难；③ 提出保护措施：建立更多自然保护区、种植更多竹子、帮助熊猫繁殖。写作时注意语气友好，符合邮件交流的语境，确保词数不少于90。
【答案】
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
My favourite wild animal is pandas. They are black and white and live mainly on bamboo. I like them because they are quite lovely. Moreover, it is very satisfying to see them eat bamboo.
However, pandas are in danger. They are losing their homes because people use more land to plant crops. Besides, it is difficult for them to have babies. We must take action to help them. I think we should build more nature reserves and plant more bamboo. It’s also necessary to help them have more babies.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、濒危野生动物词汇
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖所有问题要点，语言通顺连贯，需结合具体例子展开，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李梅的身份回复英国朋友Jennie的邮件，需覆盖邮件提出的所有问题：是否对保护濒危野生动物感兴趣、最喜欢的野生动物、喜欢的原因、该动物是否濒危、濒危原因、可采取的保护措施。解题思路：1. 选定常见且易展开的濒危野生动物（如熊猫）；2. 依次回应每个问题，补充细节让内容连贯；3. 遵循邮件格式，利用已给的开头结尾，确保词数达标，语句通顺自然。
【解析】
回复邮件需包含所有要求要点：① 明确最喜欢的野生动物是熊猫，描述其外形（黑白相间）、食性（主要以竹子为食），说明喜欢的原因（可爱，看它们吃竹子很治愈）；② 指出熊猫处于濒危状态，原因是人类占用土地种植作物导致栖息地丧失，且繁殖困难；③ 提出保护措施：建立更多自然保护区、种植更多竹子、帮助熊猫繁殖。写作时注意语气友好，符合邮件交流的语境，确保词数不少于90。
【答案】
Dear Jennie,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am also interested in protecting wild animals.
My favourite wild animal is pandas. They are black and white and live mainly on bamboo. I like them because they are quite lovely. Moreover, it is very satisfying to see them eat bamboo.
However, pandas are in danger. They are losing their homes because people use more land to plant crops. Besides, it is difficult for them to have babies. We must take action to help them. I think we should build more nature reserves and plant more bamboo. It’s also necessary to help them have more babies.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、濒危野生动物词汇
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求覆盖所有问题要点，语言通顺连贯，需结合具体例子展开，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
