典例赏析
近年来,我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中学生,正参加英语写作大赛,请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预防措施。

注意:1.要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.词数80—100。
审题指导
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架

优秀范文:

There are many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, and sandstorms today.
When there is a flood, we should get to the high ground and not walk through the water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. We should take action to prevent disasters by planting more trees and cutting down fewer forests.
I hope we can have a better world.

【分析】本题要求以中学生身份写英语短文，介绍不同灾害中的自我保护方法及预防措施，体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。写作时需先列举常见灾害，再分述各类灾害的自救方法，最后提出预防措施，注意控制词数在80-100，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】首先引出当前存在洪水、地震、火灾、沙尘暴等多种灾害；接着分述不同灾害的自救方法：洪水时前往高地不涉水，地震时躲在坚固桌下远离窗户，火灾时用湿毛巾捂口鼻低姿前行；最后提出预防措施：多植树、少砍伐森林，结尾表达对美好世界的期望，确保要点齐全、符合写作要求。
【答案】There are many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, and sandstorms today.
When there is a flood, we should get to the high ground and not walk through the water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. We should take action to prevent disasters by planting more trees and cutting down fewer forests.
I hope we can have a better world.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、灾害防护英语表达
【点评】范文要点齐全，结构清晰，严格遵循题目对体裁、时态、人称的要求，语言通顺连贯，词数符合规定，准确传达了灾害自救与预防的核心内容。
【难度系数】0.6