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假设你是李华,下周日是你的生日,你想与朋友们共度一个有意义的生日。请你给你的好友Tony写一封邀请信(包含生日日期、活动安排和期望),60词左右。
主题:生日邀请
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
[写作提纲]

[范文展示]
Dear Tony,
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I would like to go to the old people's home on my birthday. Would you like to join me?
We need to prepare some food for them. And I plan to write some cards. They're a symbol of our love. The old may be very happy to see them. And we can do many things for the old. For example, we can help them clean the rooms and talk with them.
I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,下周日是你的生日,你想与朋友们共度一个有意义的生日。请你给你的好友Tony写一封邀请信(包含生日日期、活动安排和期望),60词左右。
主题:生日邀请
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
[写作提纲]
[范文展示]
Dear Tony,
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I would like to go to the old people's home on my birthday. Would you like to join me?
We need to prepare some food for them. And I plan to write some cards. They're a symbol of our love. The old may be very happy to see them. And we can do many things for the old. For example, we can help them clean the rooms and talk with them.
I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Tony,
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I'd like to spend my meaningful birthday in the old people's home. Would you like to join me?
We will prepare food for the old, help them clean rooms and chat with them. I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I'd like to spend my meaningful birthday in the old people's home. Would you like to join me?
We will prepare food for the old, help them clean rooms and chat with them. I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给好友Tony写一封生日邀请信,需包含生日日期、活动安排和期望。写作思路:首先用问候语开头,点明生日并引出邀请的活动(去敬老院过生日);接着说明具体活动安排,运用给定的短语(prepare...for...、clean the rooms、talk with...等);最后表达对活动的期望,符合邀请信的格式和字数要求。
【解析】按照邀请信的结构,先问候Tony,告知生日是下周日,邀请他一起去敬老院度过有意义的生日;接着说明活动安排:为老人准备食物,帮忙打扫房间,和老人聊天;最后表达希望大家玩得开心,完成写作要求。
【答案】Dear Tony,
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I'd like to spend my meaningful birthday in the old people's home. Would you like to join me?
We will prepare food for the old, help them clean rooms and chat with them. I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、常用短语运用
【点评】本题考查邀请信的写作,贴近学生日常,要求掌握基本的书信结构和常用表达,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照邀请信的结构,先问候Tony,告知生日是下周日,邀请他一起去敬老院度过有意义的生日;接着说明活动安排:为老人准备食物,帮忙打扫房间,和老人聊天;最后表达希望大家玩得开心,完成写作要求。
【答案】Dear Tony,
How are you these days? My birthday is next Sunday. I'd like to spend my meaningful birthday in the old people's home. Would you like to join me?
We will prepare food for the old, help them clean rooms and chat with them. I hope we can have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、常用短语运用
【点评】本题考查邀请信的写作,贴近学生日常,要求掌握基本的书信结构和常用表达,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
写作应用
某英文网站正在面向中学生开展以“感恩母亲”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示问题以“My Mother’s Birthday”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. When is your mother's birthday? 2. How do you and your family celebrate your mother's birthday? 3. How do you feel about it? Something more about your mother's birthday.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 60左右。
My Mother’s Birthday
某英文网站正在面向中学生开展以“感恩母亲”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示问题以“My Mother’s Birthday”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. When is your mother's birthday? 2. How do you and your family celebrate your mother's birthday? 3. How do you feel about it? Something more about your mother's birthday.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 60左右。
My Mother’s Birthday
答案
One possible version:
My Mother’s Birthday
My mother's birthday is on 1st June. We usually have a birthday party for her at home on this day.
On the morning of her birthday, my father always cooks a bowl of birthday noodles for her. And we make a big birthday cake and make delicious pizza together. Then my uncles and my aunts come. They usually give some gifts to my mum. I also make a gift for my mum to give my wishes. Next, we sing the "Happy Birthday" song for my mum and enjoy the cake together.
We always have a good time on my mother's birthday. And I'm really thankful to my mother.
My Mother’s Birthday
My mother's birthday is on 1st June. We usually have a birthday party for her at home on this day.
On the morning of her birthday, my father always cooks a bowl of birthday noodles for her. And we make a big birthday cake and make delicious pizza together. Then my uncles and my aunts come. They usually give some gifts to my mum. I also make a gift for my mum to give my wishes. Next, we sing the "Happy Birthday" song for my mum and enjoy the cake together.
We always have a good time on my mother's birthday. And I'm really thankful to my mother.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题,主题是“感恩母亲”,题目为My Mother’s Birthday,需围绕三个提示问题展开:①明确母亲生日时间;②描述家人的庆祝方式;③表达自身感受。写作时需紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有要点,语言符合中学生水平,词数控制在60左右,不得透露个人真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开篇直接点明母亲的生日时间;2. 具体描述庆祝活动:父亲准备生日面,全家一起制作蛋糕,亲戚赠送礼物,自己准备礼物表达心意,唱生日歌等;3. 结尾表达对母亲的感恩之情,紧扣征文主题。注意语言简洁,避免复杂句式,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Mother’s Birthday
My mother's birthday is on 1st June. We usually have a birthday party for her at home on this day.
On the morning of her birthday, my father always cooks a bowl of birthday noodles for her. And we make a big birthday cake and make delicious pizza together. Then my uncles and my aunts come. They usually give some gifts to my mum. I also make a gift for my mum to give my wishes. Next, we sing the "Happy Birthday" song for my mum and enjoy the cake together.
We always have a good time on my mother's birthday. And I'm really thankful to my mother.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,主题表达,要点整合
【点评】
本文紧扣“感恩母亲”的征文主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,内容具体生动,情感真挚自然,语言简洁流畅,符合中学生写作水平,词数恰当,未透露个人真实信息,很好地完成了征文任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语征文写作题,主题是“感恩母亲”,题目为My Mother’s Birthday,需围绕三个提示问题展开:①明确母亲生日时间;②描述家人的庆祝方式;③表达自身感受。写作时需紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有要点,语言符合中学生水平,词数控制在60左右,不得透露个人真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 开篇直接点明母亲的生日时间;2. 具体描述庆祝活动:父亲准备生日面,全家一起制作蛋糕,亲戚赠送礼物,自己准备礼物表达心意,唱生日歌等;3. 结尾表达对母亲的感恩之情,紧扣征文主题。注意语言简洁,避免复杂句式,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Mother’s Birthday
My mother's birthday is on 1st June. We usually have a birthday party for her at home on this day.
On the morning of her birthday, my father always cooks a bowl of birthday noodles for her. And we make a big birthday cake and make delicious pizza together. Then my uncles and my aunts come. They usually give some gifts to my mum. I also make a gift for my mum to give my wishes. Next, we sing the "Happy Birthday" song for my mum and enjoy the cake together.
We always have a good time on my mother's birthday. And I'm really thankful to my mother.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,主题表达,要点整合
【点评】
本文紧扣“感恩母亲”的征文主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,内容具体生动,情感真挚自然,语言简洁流畅,符合中学生写作水平,词数恰当,未透露个人真实信息,很好地完成了征文任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
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