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书面表达
写一写“我的家乡”。
Tips:
① Where is your hometown?
② What colour is it? / What is it like?
③ What is it famous for?
④ What can we do there?
⑤ What do you think of your hometown?
...
总分5分。我的得分:
我的总分:
Excellent 33-40
OK 25-32
Review again 0-24
写一写“我的家乡”。
Tips:
① Where is your hometown?
② What colour is it? / What is it like?
③ What is it famous for?
④ What can we do there?
⑤ What do you think of your hometown?
...
总分5分。我的得分:
我的总分:
Excellent 33-40
OK 25-32
Review again 0-24
答案
思维导图填写参考
Where: My hometown is Jinan, it's a beautiful city in Shandong Province.
Famous for: It is famous for different kinds of clear springs.
Things to do: We can visit the nice springs, climb the green mountains and eat tasty local snacks.
My opinion: My hometown is a very lovely place, I love it so much.
参考范文
My Hometown
My hometown is Jinan. It's a pretty city in Shandong. There are many green trees and nice flowers everywhere in the city, it looks very beautiful all year round.
Jinan is very famous for its clear and lovely springs. Thousands of visitors come here every year. If you come to my hometown, you can walk around the old springs, climb the green Qianfo Mountain, and taste all kinds of delicious local food.
I think my hometown is a warm and interesting place. I love my hometown very much.
Where: My hometown is Jinan, it's a beautiful city in Shandong Province.
Famous for: It is famous for different kinds of clear springs.
Things to do: We can visit the nice springs, climb the green mountains and eat tasty local snacks.
My opinion: My hometown is a very lovely place, I love it so much.
参考范文
My Hometown
My hometown is Jinan. It's a pretty city in Shandong. There are many green trees and nice flowers everywhere in the city, it looks very beautiful all year round.
Jinan is very famous for its clear and lovely springs. Thousands of visitors come here every year. If you come to my hometown, you can walk around the old springs, climb the green Qianfo Mountain, and taste all kinds of delicious local food.
I think my hometown is a warm and interesting place. I love my hometown very much.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求围绕“我的家乡”完成思维导图填写及短文写作。解题时需先明确思维导图的四个核心维度：家乡的地理位置、家乡的特色、可开展的活动、个人对家乡的看法，再结合参考范文的结构，围绕济南的特点展开，确保内容紧扣主题，语言通顺，涵盖所有提示要点，符合英语写作的基本要求。
【解析】首先确定家乡的位置为山东省济南市；接着说明家乡以各类清澈的泉水闻名；再列举可进行的活动：游览泉水、爬青山、品尝当地小吃；最后表达对家乡的喜爱之情。写作时注意语句连贯，用简单易懂的英语表达，参考范文的结构清晰，依次介绍位置、特色、活动、个人情感，确保内容完整。
【答案】思维导图填写：Where: My hometown is Jinan, it's a beautiful city in Shandong Province. Famous for: It is famous for different kinds of clear springs. Things to do: We can visit the nice springs, climb the green mountains and eat tasty local snacks. My opinion: My hometown is a very lovely place, I love it so much. 参考范文：My Hometown My hometown is Jinan. It's a pretty city in Shandong. There are many green trees and nice flowers everywhere in the city, it looks very beautiful all year round. Jinan is very famous for its clear and lovely springs. Thousands of visitors come here every year. If you come to my hometown, you can walk around the old springs, climb the green Qianfo Mountain, and taste all kinds of delicious local food. I think my hometown is a warm and interesting place. I love my hometown very much.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家乡话题写作、思维导图应用
【点评】本题围绕“我的家乡”话题，通过思维导图引导学生梳理写作要点，降低写作难度，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生表达对家乡的情感，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先确定家乡的位置为山东省济南市；接着说明家乡以各类清澈的泉水闻名；再列举可进行的活动：游览泉水、爬青山、品尝当地小吃；最后表达对家乡的喜爱之情。写作时注意语句连贯，用简单易懂的英语表达，参考范文的结构清晰，依次介绍位置、特色、活动、个人情感，确保内容完整。
【答案】思维导图填写：Where: My hometown is Jinan, it's a beautiful city in Shandong Province. Famous for: It is famous for different kinds of clear springs. Things to do: We can visit the nice springs, climb the green mountains and eat tasty local snacks. My opinion: My hometown is a very lovely place, I love it so much. 参考范文：My Hometown My hometown is Jinan. It's a pretty city in Shandong. There are many green trees and nice flowers everywhere in the city, it looks very beautiful all year round. Jinan is very famous for its clear and lovely springs. Thousands of visitors come here every year. If you come to my hometown, you can walk around the old springs, climb the green Qianfo Mountain, and taste all kinds of delicious local food. I think my hometown is a warm and interesting place. I love my hometown very much.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家乡话题写作、思维导图应用
【点评】本题围绕“我的家乡”话题，通过思维导图引导学生梳理写作要点，降低写作难度，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生表达对家乡的情感，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
