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四、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的笔友Alice最近沉迷小说，成绩下降，与父母矛盾加深。请根据下面提示，给Alice写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。
要求:(1)包含所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;(3)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你的笔友Alice最近沉迷小说，成绩下降，与父母矛盾加深。请根据下面提示，给Alice写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。
要求:(1)包含所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;(3)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries.
You used to be a hard-working student who always achieved good grades, and your parents were really proud of you. However, things are different now. You've become so crazy about reading novels that you've lost interest in your schoolwork. As a result, your grades are dropping, and the relationship between you and your parents is getting worse.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries. You used to be a hard-working student who always achieved good grades, and your parents were really proud of you. However, things are different now. You've become so crazy about reading novels that you've lost interest in your schoolwork. As a result, your grades are dropping, and the relationship between you and your parents is getting worse.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
(146 words)
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries. You used to be a hard-working student who always achieved good grades, and your parents were really proud of you. However, things are different now. You've become so crazy about reading novels that you've lost interest in your schoolwork. As a result, your grades are dropping, and the relationship between you and your parents is getting worse.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
(146 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，身份是李华，需针对笔友Alice沉迷小说导致成绩下降、与父母矛盾加深的问题展开。解题思路：1. 承接开头，对比Alice过去的优秀表现与现在沉迷小说的现状，点明问题；2. 分析沉迷小说的弊端（占用学习时间、引发父母焦虑）；3. 给出具体可行的建议（平衡学习与爱好、与父母沟通）；4. 确保包含所有要点，词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 先承接开头，描述Alice的变化：过去勤奋成绩好，现在沉迷小说致成绩下降、与父母关系变差；2. 分析沉迷的影响：占用学习时间，让父母担忧；3. 给出建议：平衡学习与爱好，空闲时读小说；主动与父母沟通，分享想法；4. 结尾落款符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries. You used to be a hard-working student who always achieved good grades, and your parents were really proud of you. However, things are different now. You've become so crazy about reading novels that you've lost interest in your schoolwork. As a result, your grades are dropping, and the relationship between you and your parents is getting worse.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类应用文写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰（现状-影响-建议），语言流畅自然，符合书信格式要求，合理发挥内容，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书信写作题，身份是李华，需针对笔友Alice沉迷小说导致成绩下降、与父母矛盾加深的问题展开。解题思路：1. 承接开头，对比Alice过去的优秀表现与现在沉迷小说的现状，点明问题；2. 分析沉迷小说的弊端（占用学习时间、引发父母焦虑）；3. 给出具体可行的建议（平衡学习与爱好、与父母沟通）；4. 确保包含所有要点，词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 先承接开头，描述Alice的变化：过去勤奋成绩好，现在沉迷小说致成绩下降、与父母关系变差；2. 分析沉迷的影响：占用学习时间，让父母担忧；3. 给出建议：平衡学习与爱好，空闲时读小说；主动与父母沟通，分享想法；4. 结尾落款符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear about your worries. You used to be a hard-working student who always achieved good grades, and your parents were really proud of you. However, things are different now. You've become so crazy about reading novels that you've lost interest in your schoolwork. As a result, your grades are dropping, and the relationship between you and your parents is getting worse.
I understand reading novels can be a relaxing way to spend time, but spending too much time on it will take away your study time. What's worse, your parents will feel anxious and worried about your future.
So, here is my advice. First, try to balance your study and hobbies. You can read novels in your free time instead of spending all your time on them. Second, communicate with your parents honestly. Share your feelings with them, and I believe they will understand you and help you make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类应用文写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰（现状-影响-建议），语言流畅自然，符合书信格式要求，合理发挥内容，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
