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假如你是李华，某杂志社正在开展以“宣传海洋保护”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，以“Protecting China’s Seas”为题，写一篇100词左右的文章投稿。
【要点】 (1) The importance of China's seas；(2) The challenges China's seas are facing；(3) The ways to protect China's seas；(4) Your opinions on protecting China's seas.
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 对……有更好的理解
2. 从……中受益
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to environmental protection, I often think of the blue ocean, which covers most of our planet. 说到环境保护，我经常会想到那片覆盖了地球大部分面积的蓝色海洋。
中间句：I won’t give up protecting the ocean because I believe that every small effort we make can help save our blue home. 我不会放弃保护海洋，因为我相信我们付出的每一份微小努力都能帮助拯救我们的蓝色家园。
结尾句：Protecting the ocean is protecting our own future, so we must take action now. 保护海洋就是保护我们自己的未来，所以我们必须立刻行动起来。
【美文欣赏】
Protecting China’s Seas
China's seas are of great importance. They provide us with rich resources, support coastal economies, and are home to thousands of marine species.
However, they are now facing serious challenges: plastic pollution, industrial waste, and overfishing are damaging the marine environment. To protect our seas, the government should make stricter laws to control pollution. We students can also help by reducing single-use plastic and telling others about the importance of sea protection.
In my opinion, protecting China's seas is everyone's duty. Only by working together can we keep our seas clean and sustainable for future generations.
【小试牛刀】
假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Great Sea Explorers”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据下表内容，介绍我国海洋地质领域泰斗 —— 汪品先院士。
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。
假如你是李华，某杂志社正在开展以“宣传海洋保护”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，以“Protecting China’s Seas”为题，写一篇100词左右的文章投稿。
【要点】 (1) The importance of China's seas；(2) The challenges China's seas are facing；(3) The ways to protect China's seas；(4) Your opinions on protecting China's seas.
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 对……有更好的理解
2. 从……中受益
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to environmental protection, I often think of the blue ocean, which covers most of our planet. 说到环境保护，我经常会想到那片覆盖了地球大部分面积的蓝色海洋。
中间句：I won’t give up protecting the ocean because I believe that every small effort we make can help save our blue home. 我不会放弃保护海洋，因为我相信我们付出的每一份微小努力都能帮助拯救我们的蓝色家园。
结尾句：Protecting the ocean is protecting our own future, so we must take action now. 保护海洋就是保护我们自己的未来，所以我们必须立刻行动起来。
【美文欣赏】
Protecting China’s Seas
China's seas are of great importance. They provide us with rich resources, support coastal economies, and are home to thousands of marine species.
However, they are now facing serious challenges: plastic pollution, industrial waste, and overfishing are damaging the marine environment. To protect our seas, the government should make stricter laws to control pollution. We students can also help by reducing single-use plastic and telling others about the importance of sea protection.
In my opinion, protecting China's seas is everyone's duty. Only by working together can we keep our seas clean and sustainable for future generations.
【小试牛刀】
假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Great Sea Explorers”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据下表内容，介绍我国海洋地质领域泰斗 —— 汪品先院士。
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。
答案
【审题要领】
海洋保护;第一人称和第三人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.have a better understanding of... 2.benefit from
【小试牛刀】
Wang Pinxian is a great Chinese marine geologist who devotes his life to ocean research,and people call him the "Deep-Sea Warrior".
For over 60 years,he has worked hard to study the ocean. In 1999,he led China's first ocean drilling programme in the South China Sea,opening a new chapter in our country's deep-sea exploration. Even at the age of 82,he dived into the deep sea three times to study marine life and discovered rare sea creatures like deep-water coral forests. Besides his research,he also works to tell people more about the ocean and why we should protect it.
Dr Wang sets a good example for us all.His spirit of never giving up encourages more young people to explore the unknown sea world and care for our blue home.(共134词)
海洋保护;第一人称和第三人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.have a better understanding of... 2.benefit from
【小试牛刀】
Wang Pinxian is a great Chinese marine geologist who devotes his life to ocean research,and people call him the "Deep-Sea Warrior".
For over 60 years,he has worked hard to study the ocean. In 1999,he led China's first ocean drilling programme in the South China Sea,opening a new chapter in our country's deep-sea exploration. Even at the age of 82,he dived into the deep sea three times to study marine life and discovered rare sea creatures like deep-water coral forests. Besides his research,he also works to tell people more about the ocean and why we should protect it.
Dr Wang sets a good example for us all.His spirit of never giving up encourages more young people to explore the unknown sea world and care for our blue home.(共134词)
解析
【分析】
首先审题确定写作主题为介绍我国海洋地质泰斗汪品先院士，需用第三人称，以一般现在时为主；其次梳理所有要求包含的核心要点：身份、称号、60余年研究经历、1999年领导南海首个大洋钻探项目、82岁三次深潜发现深海珊瑚林、科普海洋知识、精神影响；接着搭建结构：开头点明身份与称号，中间分述研究贡献与科普行动，结尾总结其精神对年轻人的激励；最后确保词数达标，无真实个人信息，语言流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确主题为人物介绍，人称用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，需覆盖所有给定要点；
2. 要点整合：将汪院士的核心事迹按逻辑排序，确保无遗漏；
3. 结构搭建：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头引入人物，中间分述研究与科普贡献，结尾升华精神影响；
4. 语言运用：使用准确的词汇与短语，如devote...to, lead a programme等，衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Wang Pinxian is a great Chinese marine geologist who devotes his life to ocean research,and people call him the "Deep-Sea Warrior".For over 60 years,he has worked hard to study the ocean. In 1999,he led China's first ocean drilling programme in the South China Sea,opening a new chapter in our country's deep-sea exploration. Even at the age of 82,he dived into the deep sea three times to study marine life and discovered rare sea creatures like deep-water coral forests. Besides his research,he also works to tell people more about the ocean and why we should protect it.Dr Wang sets a good example for us all.His spirit of never giving up encourages more young people to explore the unknown sea world and care for our blue home.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态与人称运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求的内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言准确流畅，体现了汪品先院士的卓越贡献与可贵精神，符合征文要求，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.4
首先审题确定写作主题为介绍我国海洋地质泰斗汪品先院士，需用第三人称，以一般现在时为主；其次梳理所有要求包含的核心要点：身份、称号、60余年研究经历、1999年领导南海首个大洋钻探项目、82岁三次深潜发现深海珊瑚林、科普海洋知识、精神影响；接着搭建结构：开头点明身份与称号，中间分述研究贡献与科普行动，结尾总结其精神对年轻人的激励；最后确保词数达标，无真实个人信息，语言流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确主题为人物介绍，人称用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，需覆盖所有给定要点；
2. 要点整合：将汪院士的核心事迹按逻辑排序，确保无遗漏；
3. 结构搭建：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头引入人物，中间分述研究与科普贡献，结尾升华精神影响；
4. 语言运用：使用准确的词汇与短语，如devote...to, lead a programme等，衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Wang Pinxian is a great Chinese marine geologist who devotes his life to ocean research,and people call him the "Deep-Sea Warrior".For over 60 years,he has worked hard to study the ocean. In 1999,he led China's first ocean drilling programme in the South China Sea,opening a new chapter in our country's deep-sea exploration. Even at the age of 82,he dived into the deep sea three times to study marine life and discovered rare sea creatures like deep-water coral forests. Besides his research,he also works to tell people more about the ocean and why we should protect it.Dr Wang sets a good example for us all.His spirit of never giving up encourages more young people to explore the unknown sea world and care for our blue home.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态与人称运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求的内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言准确流畅，体现了汪品先院士的卓越贡献与可贵精神，符合征文要求，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.4
