单元写作要求
本单元以“科技创新与便捷生活”为话题,主要谈论智能科技产品、便民发明的功能用途,科技创新对日常生活的影响,以及科技发展的利弊辩证分析。常见写作角度:①介绍一项发明/产品,说明其发明背景、功能用途,以及对人们生活的影响;②创意发明方案;③探讨科技利弊。
写作方法策略 如何写有关“发明介绍”的文章
写这类文章时,首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要点明介绍的科技产品/发明,亮明其核心功能与设计意义;主体部分介绍产品的使用场景、功能优势,可辩证分析科技对生活的双重影响;结尾总结产品价值,或表达对未来科技创新的展望。
思路导引 —— 佳作展示 —— 高分词句
引出 话题
The smart translation pen has become an indispensable helper in our daily foreign language learning with its powerful functions and portable and lightweight design.
详细 介绍
① When we come across unfamiliar words while reading English articles, it can tell us ② how to pronounce them correctly and give clear, detailed explanations in seconds, even when we attend outdoor classes or travel abroad. It also ③ allows us to translate long passages efficiently, and most users admit ④ that it greatly cuts down the time spent consulting traditional paper dictionaries.
总结 展望
⑤ This invention not only makes our language learning more efficient, but also breaks down cross-language communication barriers for us. We believe that more inventions will keep bringing great convenience and considerate services to our daily lives in the near future.
高分词句
① 运用 when 引导时间状语从句。
② 运用“疑问词+不定式”作宾语。
③ 运用动词不定式作宾语补足语。
④ 运用 that 引导宾语从句,作 admit 的宾语;运用过去分词短语 spent consulting ... 作后置定语,修饰 time。
⑤ 运用并列连词 not only ... but also ... 连接两个谓语成分。
话题写作积累
1. 使人们能够做某事
2. 被应用于各行各业
3. 打破时空限制
4. 充分发挥它的优势
5. 这款智能手表能帮助用户实时记录自己的健康数据,还能告诉用户如何科学地锻炼身体。
6. 即便智能设备能帮我们解决很多问题,我们也不能放弃独立思考和动手实践的能力。
7. 凡事皆有两面性。只有当我们明智地使用科技时,它才能真正地为我们创造更美好的生活。
本单元以“科技创新与便捷生活”为话题,主要谈论智能科技产品、便民发明的功能用途,科技创新对日常生活的影响,以及科技发展的利弊辩证分析。常见写作角度:①介绍一项发明/产品,说明其发明背景、功能用途,以及对人们生活的影响;②创意发明方案;③探讨科技利弊。
写作方法策略 如何写有关“发明介绍”的文章
写这类文章时,首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要点明介绍的科技产品/发明,亮明其核心功能与设计意义;主体部分介绍产品的使用场景、功能优势,可辩证分析科技对生活的双重影响;结尾总结产品价值,或表达对未来科技创新的展望。
思路导引 —— 佳作展示 —— 高分词句
引出 话题
The smart translation pen has become an indispensable helper in our daily foreign language learning with its powerful functions and portable and lightweight design.
详细 介绍
① When we come across unfamiliar words while reading English articles, it can tell us ② how to pronounce them correctly and give clear, detailed explanations in seconds, even when we attend outdoor classes or travel abroad. It also ③ allows us to translate long passages efficiently, and most users admit ④ that it greatly cuts down the time spent consulting traditional paper dictionaries.
总结 展望
⑤ This invention not only makes our language learning more efficient, but also breaks down cross-language communication barriers for us. We believe that more inventions will keep bringing great convenience and considerate services to our daily lives in the near future.
高分词句
① 运用 when 引导时间状语从句。
② 运用“疑问词+不定式”作宾语。
③ 运用动词不定式作宾语补足语。
④ 运用 that 引导宾语从句,作 admit 的宾语;运用过去分词短语 spent consulting ... 作后置定语,修饰 time。
⑤ 运用并列连词 not only ... but also ... 连接两个谓语成分。
话题写作积累
1. 使人们能够做某事
2. 被应用于各行各业
3. 打破时空限制
4. 充分发挥它的优势
5. 这款智能手表能帮助用户实时记录自己的健康数据,还能告诉用户如何科学地锻炼身体。
6. 即便智能设备能帮我们解决很多问题,我们也不能放弃独立思考和动手实践的能力。
7. 凡事皆有两面性。只有当我们明智地使用科技时,它才能真正地为我们创造更美好的生活。
答案
1. enable people to do sth.
2. be used in all walks of life
3. break the limits of time and space
4. give full play to its advantages
5. This smart watch can help users record their own health data in real time, and also tell users how to exercise their bodies scientifically.
6. Even if smart devices can help us solve many problems, we should not give up the ability to think independently and practice by ourselves.
7. Every coin has two sides. Only when we use technology wisely can it truly create a better life for us.
2. be used in all walks of life
3. break the limits of time and space
4. give full play to its advantages
5. This smart watch can help users record their own health data in real time, and also tell users how to exercise their bodies scientifically.
6. Even if smart devices can help us solve many problems, we should not give up the ability to think independently and practice by ourselves.
7. Every coin has two sides. Only when we use technology wisely can it truly create a better life for us.
解析
本题为译林版九年级全一册“科技创新与便捷生活”主题的写作积累训练,要求结合单元核心词汇、固定搭配与已学语法知识,写出对应中文含义的规范英文表达,帮助学生积累该话题的写作素材,适配本单元介绍发明产品、辩证探讨科技利弊的写作要求。
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