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［经典例题］
假设你是李华，请你根据表格内容写一封电子邮件，向你新认识的网友彼得（Peter）介绍你的生活方式。
要求：词数80左右，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
［高分范文］
Dear Peter，
① I'm a student from China. My name is Li Hua. I'm glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle.
② I usually have an egg, an apple, bread and a glass of milk for breakfast. I usually have some rice, meat, bananas and vegetables for lunch. It's not good to eat too much for supper. So I have a bowl of noodles, fish and vegetables. I spend half an hour playing volleyball from Monday to Thursday after school. On Friday afternoon, I always go swimming.
I think I have a healthy lifestyle. It makes me strong. ③ How about you？
Yours，
Li Hua
［名师点评］
短文是一封电子邮件，作者介绍了自己的生活方式，说明了健康饮食和定期锻炼的重要性。
① 开门见山，引出写这封电子邮件的目的。
② 详细地介绍了自己的生活方式。for breakfast/lunch/supper、from Monday to Thursday 和 On Friday afternoon 等短语的运用使短文内容层次分明，富有逻辑性。a bowl of、have a healthy lifestyle 等短语和“It's not good to eat too much for supper.”的使用体现了作者对单元知识的综合运用能力。
③ 用“How about you？”询问对方的生活方式。
素材积累
［开头句］
1. It is important for us to live a healthy life.
2. A healthy diet can give us enough energy.
［中间句］
1. We should eat more vegetables.
2. We should never miss breakfast.
［结尾句］
1. Let's save food and eat healthily！
2. I can stay fit with a healthy lifestyle.
［名言警句］
1. Eat five grains to keep your body strong.
食五谷杂粮，保身体强壮。
2. Take a soup before dinner and never suffer.
饭前喝口汤，永远没灾殃。
写作演练
［小试身手］
假设你是安迪（Andy），请根据下面的提示，以“My lifestyle”为题，写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的英语短文。
提示：1. 每天打篮球。2. 早餐吃一个鸡蛋，喝一杯牛奶。3. 午餐、晚餐吃肉和蔬菜。4. 喜欢喝牛奶，不喜欢吃甜食。
课时作业本 英语（译林版·江苏专用）七年级上
注意：1. 词数70左右。2. 要点完整，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。
［思路点拨］
① 时态：一般现在时。② 人称：第一人称。
③ 开头自我介绍，主体部分按提示依次介绍，结尾阐述自己的生活方式很健康。
［写作提纲］
［妙笔生花］
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（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
［经典例题］
假设你是李华，请你根据表格内容写一封电子邮件，向你新认识的网友彼得（Peter）介绍你的生活方式。
要求：词数80左右，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
［高分范文］
Dear Peter，
① I'm a student from China. My name is Li Hua. I'm glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle.
② I usually have an egg, an apple, bread and a glass of milk for breakfast. I usually have some rice, meat, bananas and vegetables for lunch. It's not good to eat too much for supper. So I have a bowl of noodles, fish and vegetables. I spend half an hour playing volleyball from Monday to Thursday after school. On Friday afternoon, I always go swimming.
I think I have a healthy lifestyle. It makes me strong. ③ How about you？
Yours，
Li Hua
［名师点评］
短文是一封电子邮件，作者介绍了自己的生活方式，说明了健康饮食和定期锻炼的重要性。
① 开门见山，引出写这封电子邮件的目的。
② 详细地介绍了自己的生活方式。for breakfast/lunch/supper、from Monday to Thursday 和 On Friday afternoon 等短语的运用使短文内容层次分明，富有逻辑性。a bowl of、have a healthy lifestyle 等短语和“It's not good to eat too much for supper.”的使用体现了作者对单元知识的综合运用能力。
③ 用“How about you？”询问对方的生活方式。
素材积累
［开头句］
1. It is important for us to live a healthy life.
2. A healthy diet can give us enough energy.
［中间句］
1. We should eat more vegetables.
2. We should never miss breakfast.
［结尾句］
1. Let's save food and eat healthily！
2. I can stay fit with a healthy lifestyle.
［名言警句］
1. Eat five grains to keep your body strong.
食五谷杂粮，保身体强壮。
2. Take a soup before dinner and never suffer.
饭前喝口汤，永远没灾殃。
写作演练
［小试身手］
假设你是安迪（Andy），请根据下面的提示，以“My lifestyle”为题，写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的英语短文。
提示：1. 每天打篮球。2. 早餐吃一个鸡蛋，喝一杯牛奶。3. 午餐、晚餐吃肉和蔬菜。4. 喜欢喝牛奶，不喜欢吃甜食。
课时作业本 英语（译林版·江苏专用）七年级上
注意：1. 词数70左右。2. 要点完整，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。
［思路点拨］
① 时态：一般现在时。② 人称：第一人称。
③ 开头自我介绍，主体部分按提示依次介绍，结尾阐述自己的生活方式很健康。
［写作提纲］
［妙笔生花］
My lifestyle
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（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
答案
One possible version:
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
