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四、书面表达。（30 分）
假如你是李华,收到了美国好友汤姆(Tom)的一封信,他想要了解中国的餐桌文化。请给汤姆写一封邮件,介绍中国的餐桌文化(餐具与使用礼仪、用餐礼仪与举止、饮食观念与习俗等)。
要求:
1. 应包含题目所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,不得出现真实个人信息(姓名、校名等);
3. 词数不少于 80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,收到了美国好友汤姆(Tom)的一封信,他想要了解中国的餐桌文化。请给汤姆写一封邮件,介绍中国的餐桌文化(餐具与使用礼仪、用餐礼仪与举止、饮食观念与习俗等)。
要求:
1. 应包含题目所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,不得出现真实个人信息(姓名、校名等);
3. 词数不少于 80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you.
I'm happy to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China, we usually use chopsticks and spoons. When using chopsticks, remember not to stick them into your bowl. Also, it's polite to let elders start eating first.
During the meal, we often share dishes placed in the centre of the table. If you're the host, you should serve food to your guests to show warmth. It's impolite to make a noise while eating noodles. An important custom is that people like to offer tea or pour drinks for others. If someone fills your cup, you can tap the table with two fingers to say thanks quietly.
I hope you can come to China one day and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version：
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you. I'm happy to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China, we usually use chopsticks and spoons. When using chopsticks, remember not to stick them into your bowl. Also, it's polite to let elders start eating first.
During the meal, we often share dishes placed in the centre of the table. If you're the host, you should serve food to your guests to show warmth. It's impolite to make a noise while eating noodles. An important custom is that people like to offer tea or pour drinks for others. If someone fills your cup, you can tap the table with two fingers to say thanks quietly.
I hope you can come to China one day and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you. I'm happy to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China, we usually use chopsticks and spoons. When using chopsticks, remember not to stick them into your bowl. Also, it's polite to let elders start eating first.
During the meal, we often share dishes placed in the centre of the table. If you're the host, you should serve food to your guests to show warmth. It's impolite to make a noise while eating noodles. An important custom is that people like to offer tea or pour drinks for others. If someone fills your cup, you can tap the table with two fingers to say thanks quietly.
I hope you can come to China one day and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：身份是李华，收信人是美国好友Tom，主题是介绍中国餐桌文化，需要覆盖餐具使用礼仪、用餐举止、饮食习俗三类核心内容，词数不少于80，文体是日常友好往来的邮件。接下来梳理写作思路：先承接题干给出的开头句，直接点明写信目的是介绍中国餐桌礼仪；随后分模块依次展开内容，先介绍常用餐具和对应的使用禁忌，再讲用餐过程中的礼貌举止，最后补充有中国特色的饮食相关习俗，收尾自然发出邀请，欢迎Tom来中国亲身体验，全程注意使用贴合好友交流的轻松语气，不出现真实个人信息，保证语句连贯、词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体为非正式英文邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称，确保核心写作要点不遗漏：餐具礼仪、用餐举止、特色饮食习俗。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 开篇承接给定开头，直接引出话题，说明自己很乐意给Tom介绍中国的餐桌文化；
② 第一部分介绍餐具相关内容：说明中国人常用筷子和勺子，点明使用筷子的禁忌（不要把筷子插在碗里的饭上），同时补充基础礼仪：要等长辈先动筷再开始用餐；
③ 第二部分介绍用餐举止：说明菜品会放在桌子中央大家共享，作为主人要主动给客人布菜表示热情，用餐时尤其是吃面条不要发出声响是不礼貌的；
④ 第三部分介绍特色习俗：中国人习惯给他人倒茶添饮品，如果有人给你倒满杯子，可以用两根手指轻敲桌面悄悄表达谢意；
⑤ 结尾收尾：表达希望Tom未来可以来中国亲身体验这些文化的愿景，自然结束邮件。
3. 核查调整：通读全文，确认所有核心要点都覆盖，语句通顺，词数符合要求，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you. I'm happy to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China, we usually use chopsticks and spoons. When using chopsticks, remember not to stick them into your bowl. Also, it's polite to let elders start eating first.
During the meal, we often share dishes placed in the centre of the table. If you're the host, you should serve food to your guests to show warmth. It's impolite to make a noise while eating noodles. An important custom is that people like to offer tea or pour drinks for others. If someone fills your cup, you can tap the table with two fingers to say thanks quietly.
I hope you can come to China one day and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，话题作文表达，文化类应用文书写
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖了题干要求的所有核心信息，从餐具使用礼仪、用餐举止到特色饮食习俗的介绍层次清晰，逻辑顺畅，语气贴合好友之间交流的轻松友好感，用词地道准确，没有生硬的翻译腔，结尾的邀约让整篇邮件内容完整饱满，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀参考范文，学生可以参考它的分层叙事逻辑完成同类文化介绍类写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：身份是李华，收信人是美国好友Tom，主题是介绍中国餐桌文化，需要覆盖餐具使用礼仪、用餐举止、饮食习俗三类核心内容，词数不少于80，文体是日常友好往来的邮件。接下来梳理写作思路：先承接题干给出的开头句，直接点明写信目的是介绍中国餐桌礼仪；随后分模块依次展开内容，先介绍常用餐具和对应的使用禁忌，再讲用餐过程中的礼貌举止，最后补充有中国特色的饮食相关习俗，收尾自然发出邀请，欢迎Tom来中国亲身体验，全程注意使用贴合好友交流的轻松语气，不出现真实个人信息，保证语句连贯、词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体为非正式英文邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称，确保核心写作要点不遗漏：餐具礼仪、用餐举止、特色饮食习俗。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 开篇承接给定开头，直接引出话题，说明自己很乐意给Tom介绍中国的餐桌文化；
② 第一部分介绍餐具相关内容：说明中国人常用筷子和勺子，点明使用筷子的禁忌（不要把筷子插在碗里的饭上），同时补充基础礼仪：要等长辈先动筷再开始用餐；
③ 第二部分介绍用餐举止：说明菜品会放在桌子中央大家共享，作为主人要主动给客人布菜表示热情，用餐时尤其是吃面条不要发出声响是不礼貌的；
④ 第三部分介绍特色习俗：中国人习惯给他人倒茶添饮品，如果有人给你倒满杯子，可以用两根手指轻敲桌面悄悄表达谢意；
⑤ 结尾收尾：表达希望Tom未来可以来中国亲身体验这些文化的愿景，自然结束邮件。
3. 核查调整：通读全文，确认所有核心要点都覆盖，语句通顺，词数符合要求，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear Tom,
It's great to hear from you. I'm happy to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China, we usually use chopsticks and spoons. When using chopsticks, remember not to stick them into your bowl. Also, it's polite to let elders start eating first.
During the meal, we often share dishes placed in the centre of the table. If you're the host, you should serve food to your guests to show warmth. It's impolite to make a noise while eating noodles. An important custom is that people like to offer tea or pour drinks for others. If someone fills your cup, you can tap the table with two fingers to say thanks quietly.
I hope you can come to China one day and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，话题作文表达，文化类应用文书写
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖了题干要求的所有核心信息，从餐具使用礼仪、用餐举止到特色饮食习俗的介绍层次清晰，逻辑顺畅，语气贴合好友之间交流的轻松友好感，用词地道准确，没有生硬的翻译腔，结尾的邀约让整篇邮件内容完整饱满，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀参考范文，学生可以参考它的分层叙事逻辑完成同类文化介绍类写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
