【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“明智消费”,围绕家庭理财、压岁钱管理、预算制定和货币发展展开。写作题目一般要求我们写一篇关于如何管理压岁钱的文章,学生需要运用描述理财的词汇,清晰分段,并使用恰当的衔接词让文章逻辑连贯,同时表达对理财的态度和正确的金钱价值观。
【范文赏析】
Ⅰ. 例题
校英语杂志正在举办“How to Use My Lucky Money”主题征文活动。请你根据写作要求,结合自己的实际经验,用英语写一篇短文向杂志投稿,谈谈你是如何管理和使用压岁钱的,包括以下要点:
• how much you save and why
• what you spend it on
• how to plan your budget
• your opinion on using money wisely
要求:1. 文中须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;2. 不少于100词(开头不计入总词数)。
How to Use My Lucky Money
Ⅱ. 写作策略
写这篇征文时,需先明确压岁钱的分配方案,围绕“储蓄—消费—计划”三个层次展开:先说明储蓄的金额和理由(如安全、有利息),再列举具体的消费方向(如学习用品、礼物),最后强调制定预算的重要性。写作时合理使用一般现在时描述理财习惯,some/any和there be句型描述财务状况,通过first、second、also等衔接词组织内容,做到内容具体、理由充分,同时表达“学会理财是成长的一部分”这一观点,让文章层次清晰、有说服力。
Ⅲ. 范文
How to Use My Lucky Money
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is ①how to use it wisely. Here is my plan. ②First, I put some of my lucky money into the bank. It is safe there, and I can also get some interest. I save most of the money for emergencies. Second, I use some of the money to buy some things I need, like school things and books. There are always some books I want to read. Also, I always spend some money on gifts for my parents ③because they take good care of me every day. Making a budget is important for me. It helps me avoid buying things I don't really need. By saving and planning, I can develop good habits with money, which will help me in the future.
① 使用 how to use it wisely 引出话题,开门见山点明文章主题,自然流畅。
② 使用 first、second、also 等衔接词清晰划分理财层次,使文章结构分明。
③ 使用 because 引导的原因状语从句说明给父母买礼物的原因,表达感恩之情,内容真实具体。
【写作积累】
本单元的话题是“明智消费”,围绕家庭理财、压岁钱管理、预算制定和货币发展展开。写作题目一般要求我们写一篇关于如何管理压岁钱的文章,学生需要运用描述理财的词汇,清晰分段,并使用恰当的衔接词让文章逻辑连贯,同时表达对理财的态度和正确的金钱价值观。
【范文赏析】
Ⅰ. 例题
校英语杂志正在举办“How to Use My Lucky Money”主题征文活动。请你根据写作要求,结合自己的实际经验,用英语写一篇短文向杂志投稿,谈谈你是如何管理和使用压岁钱的,包括以下要点:
• how much you save and why
• what you spend it on
• how to plan your budget
• your opinion on using money wisely
要求:1. 文中须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;2. 不少于100词(开头不计入总词数)。
How to Use My Lucky Money
Ⅱ. 写作策略
写这篇征文时,需先明确压岁钱的分配方案,围绕“储蓄—消费—计划”三个层次展开:先说明储蓄的金额和理由(如安全、有利息),再列举具体的消费方向(如学习用品、礼物),最后强调制定预算的重要性。写作时合理使用一般现在时描述理财习惯,some/any和there be句型描述财务状况,通过first、second、also等衔接词组织内容,做到内容具体、理由充分,同时表达“学会理财是成长的一部分”这一观点,让文章层次清晰、有说服力。
Ⅲ. 范文
How to Use My Lucky Money
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is ①how to use it wisely. Here is my plan. ②First, I put some of my lucky money into the bank. It is safe there, and I can also get some interest. I save most of the money for emergencies. Second, I use some of the money to buy some things I need, like school things and books. There are always some books I want to read. Also, I always spend some money on gifts for my parents ③because they take good care of me every day. Making a budget is important for me. It helps me avoid buying things I don't really need. By saving and planning, I can develop good habits with money, which will help me in the future.
① 使用 how to use it wisely 引出话题,开门见山点明文章主题,自然流畅。
② 使用 first、second、also 等衔接词清晰划分理财层次,使文章结构分明。
③ 使用 because 引导的原因状语从句说明给父母买礼物的原因,表达感恩之情,内容真实具体。
【写作积累】
答案
How to Use My Lucky Money
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is how to use it wisely. Here is my plan.
First, I put most of my lucky money into the bank. It is really safe to keep money there, and I can also get a little interest over time. I save such a large part of the money for unexpected emergencies, so I won't need to ask my parents for extra money when something unexpected happens.
Second, I use a small part of the money to buy things I really need, like new pens, notebooks and my favourite storybooks. There are always a few new books on my book list that I look forward to reading. Also, I always spend a little money on small gifts for my parents because they take good care of me every day.
Making a clear budget is one of my most important rules. I will write down all the things I need to buy first and set specific money for each item, so I can avoid spending money on useless things that I don't really need.
I think using money wisely is a very important lesson for me. By planning my lucky money well, I can form a good habit of managing money, and this will surely help me a lot when I grow up.
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is how to use it wisely. Here is my plan.
First, I put most of my lucky money into the bank. It is really safe to keep money there, and I can also get a little interest over time. I save such a large part of the money for unexpected emergencies, so I won't need to ask my parents for extra money when something unexpected happens.
Second, I use a small part of the money to buy things I really need, like new pens, notebooks and my favourite storybooks. There are always a few new books on my book list that I look forward to reading. Also, I always spend a little money on small gifts for my parents because they take good care of me every day.
Making a clear budget is one of my most important rules. I will write down all the things I need to buy first and set specific money for each item, so I can avoid spending money on useless things that I don't really need.
I think using money wisely is a very important lesson for me. By planning my lucky money well, I can form a good habit of managing money, and this will surely help me a lot when I grow up.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“How to Use My Lucky Money”,需覆盖“储蓄金额及原因、消费方向、预算制定、正确金钱观”四个核心要点;写作时采用“总—分—总”结构,围绕“储蓄—消费—预算”三个层次展开,使用first、second、also等衔接词梳理逻辑,运用一般现在时、there be句型等,结合实际经验,内容具体,传递感恩与理财的重要性。
【解析】
1. 总起段:以春节收压岁钱的传统引出“明智使用压岁钱”的主题,自然过渡到下文计划;
2. 储蓄部分(First):说明将大部分压岁钱存入银行,原因是安全、有利息,且用于应急,避免向父母额外要钱;
3. 消费部分(Second):用小部分钱购买学习用品、书籍,同时给父母买小礼物(因父母照顾自己),融入感恩;
4. 预算部分:强调制定明确预算的重要性,通过规划避免无用消费;
5. 观点总结:点明明智用钱是成长的重要一课,形成理财好习惯对未来有益;
确保所有要点齐全,逻辑连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
How to Use My Lucky Money
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is how to use it wisely. Here is my plan.
First, I put most of my lucky money into the bank. It is really safe to keep money there, and I can also get a little interest over time. I save such a large part of the money for unexpected emergencies, so I won't need to ask my parents for extra money when something unexpected happens.
Second, I use a small part of the money to buy things I really need, like new pens, notebooks and my favourite storybooks. There are always a few new books on my book list that I look forward to reading. Also, I always spend a little money on small gifts for my parents because they take good care of me every day.
Making a clear budget is one of my most important rules. I will write down all the things I need to buy first and set specific money for each item, so I can avoid spending money on useless things that I don't really need.
I think using money wisely is a very important lesson for me. By planning my lucky money well, I can form a good habit of managing money, and this will surely help me a lot when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、应用文写作、理财表达
【点评】
范文紧扣征文要求,覆盖所有写作要点,结构清晰,衔接自然,内容真实具体,融入感恩之情,传递了正确的金钱价值观,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“How to Use My Lucky Money”,需覆盖“储蓄金额及原因、消费方向、预算制定、正确金钱观”四个核心要点;写作时采用“总—分—总”结构,围绕“储蓄—消费—预算”三个层次展开,使用first、second、also等衔接词梳理逻辑,运用一般现在时、there be句型等,结合实际经验,内容具体,传递感恩与理财的重要性。
【解析】
1. 总起段:以春节收压岁钱的传统引出“明智使用压岁钱”的主题,自然过渡到下文计划;
2. 储蓄部分(First):说明将大部分压岁钱存入银行,原因是安全、有利息,且用于应急,避免向父母额外要钱;
3. 消费部分(Second):用小部分钱购买学习用品、书籍,同时给父母买小礼物(因父母照顾自己),融入感恩;
4. 预算部分:强调制定明确预算的重要性,通过规划避免无用消费;
5. 观点总结:点明明智用钱是成长的重要一课,形成理财好习惯对未来有益;
确保所有要点齐全,逻辑连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
How to Use My Lucky Money
Getting lucky money during the Spring Festival is a Chinese tradition. However, the question is how to use it wisely. Here is my plan.
First, I put most of my lucky money into the bank. It is really safe to keep money there, and I can also get a little interest over time. I save such a large part of the money for unexpected emergencies, so I won't need to ask my parents for extra money when something unexpected happens.
Second, I use a small part of the money to buy things I really need, like new pens, notebooks and my favourite storybooks. There are always a few new books on my book list that I look forward to reading. Also, I always spend a little money on small gifts for my parents because they take good care of me every day.
Making a clear budget is one of my most important rules. I will write down all the things I need to buy first and set specific money for each item, so I can avoid spending money on useless things that I don't really need.
I think using money wisely is a very important lesson for me. By planning my lucky money well, I can form a good habit of managing money, and this will surely help me a lot when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、应用文写作、理财表达
【点评】
范文紧扣征文要求,覆盖所有写作要点,结构清晰,衔接自然,内容真实具体,融入感恩之情,传递了正确的金钱价值观,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
Ⅰ.话题词汇
1. 预算(n.)
2. 储蓄(v.)
3. 银行账户
4. 制定预算
1. 预算(n.)
budget
2. 储蓄(v.)
save
3. 银行账户
bank account
4. 制定预算
make a budget
答案
1. budget 2. save 3. bank account 4. make a budget
解析
【分析】本题为英语基础词汇与短语识记题,需根据给出的中文释义,结合词性和常用搭配,写出对应的正确英文表达,注意名词、动词及固定短语的正确形式。
【解析】1. 中文“预算”对应的英文名词为budget;2. 中文“储蓄”对应的英文动词为save;3. 中文“银行账户”对应的固定英文短语为bank account;4. 中文“制定预算”对应的固定英文短语为make a budget。
【答案】1. budget 2. save 3. bank account 4. make a budget
【知识点】英语词汇识记、英语短语搭配
【点评】本题属于英语基础词汇考查题,聚焦日常话题相关的核心词汇积累,难度较低,用于巩固基础词汇知识。
【难度系数】0.9
【解析】1. 中文“预算”对应的英文名词为budget;2. 中文“储蓄”对应的英文动词为save;3. 中文“银行账户”对应的固定英文短语为bank account;4. 中文“制定预算”对应的固定英文短语为make a budget。
【答案】1. budget 2. save 3. bank account 4. make a budget
【知识点】英语词汇识记、英语短语搭配
【点评】本题属于英语基础词汇考查题,聚焦日常话题相关的核心词汇积累,难度较低,用于巩固基础词汇知识。
【难度系数】0.9
Ⅱ. 佳句翻译
1. 合理的预算能帮助我们避免冲动消费,做出明智的选择。
2. 学会理财是成长的一部分,明智消费是一种生活智慧。
1. 合理的预算能帮助我们避免冲动消费,做出明智的选择。
A reasonable budget can help us avoid impulse buying and make wise choices.
2. 学会理财是成长的一部分,明智消费是一种生活智慧。
Learning to manage money is part of growing up, and wise spending is a kind of life wisdom.
答案
1. A reasonable budget can help us avoid impulse buying and make wise choices.
2. Learning to manage money is part of growing up, and wise spending is a kind of life wisdom.
2. Learning to manage money is part of growing up, and wise spending is a kind of life wisdom.
解析
【分析】
本题为汉译英的句子翻译题,需准确对应中文词汇的英文表达,掌握常用固定搭配与句式结构,如动名词作主语、“帮助某人做某事”等结构,确保译文符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. “合理的预算”译为A reasonable budget,“帮助我们避免冲动消费”对应help us avoid impulse buying,“做出明智的选择”译为make wise choices,组合成完整句子;
2. “学会理财”用动名词短语Learning to manage money作主语,“成长的一部分”译为part of growing up,“明智消费是一种生活智慧”译为wise spending is a kind of life wisdom,用and连接并列分句。
【答案】
1. A reasonable budget can help us avoid impulse buying and make wise choices.
2. Learning to manage money is part of growing up, and wise spending is a kind of life wisdom.
【知识点】
汉译英、常用短语翻译、动名词作主语
【点评】
本题围绕理财消费话题考查基础汉译英,涉及日常常用表达,需掌握固定搭配与句式,适合基础阶段练习,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为汉译英的句子翻译题,需准确对应中文词汇的英文表达,掌握常用固定搭配与句式结构,如动名词作主语、“帮助某人做某事”等结构,确保译文符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. “合理的预算”译为A reasonable budget,“帮助我们避免冲动消费”对应help us avoid impulse buying,“做出明智的选择”译为make wise choices,组合成完整句子;
2. “学会理财”用动名词短语Learning to manage money作主语,“成长的一部分”译为part of growing up,“明智消费是一种生活智慧”译为wise spending is a kind of life wisdom,用and连接并列分句。
【答案】
1. A reasonable budget can help us avoid impulse buying and make wise choices.
2. Learning to manage money is part of growing up, and wise spending is a kind of life wisdom.
【知识点】
汉译英、常用短语翻译、动名词作主语
【点评】
本题围绕理财消费话题考查基础汉译英,涉及日常常用表达,需掌握固定搭配与句式,适合基础阶段练习,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
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