Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
最近,学校英语社团将进行主题为"健康生活"的宣传活动,假设你是李辉,受邀请参加主题宣讲。请你以"Enjoy Healthy Life"为题,根据下面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿,以自身经历讲述如何拥有健康的生活方式并提出倡议。

注意:1.词数60—80,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life.
最近,学校英语社团将进行主题为"健康生活"的宣传活动,假设你是李辉,受邀请参加主题宣讲。请你以"Enjoy Healthy Life"为题,根据下面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿,以自身经历讲述如何拥有健康的生活方式并提出倡议。
注意:1.词数60—80,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life.
I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep,I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p. m. and get up at 6:30 a. m. every day,so I have enough sleep.
When it comes to food,I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning.
I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life. I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep,I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p. m. and get up at 6:30 a. m. every day,so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food,I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life. I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep,I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p. m. and get up at 6:30 a. m. every day,so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food,I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李辉的身份写主题为“Enjoy Healthy Life”的演讲稿,开头已给出,需结合插图的三个核心要素(运动、睡眠、食物)展开,词数控制在60-80词,且不能出现真实姓名和学校。解题思路:先对应插图的运动内容(play basketball and swim after school),说明运动的益处;再补充规律睡眠的安排,体现充足睡眠的重要性;接着围绕健康饮食(如蔬果、牛奶)展开;最后发出健康生活的倡议,确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】承接开头,依次从运动、睡眠、食物三个方面阐述健康生活的方式,最后发出倡议,语言简洁通顺,符合演讲稿格式。具体内容:I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep, I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p.m. and get up at 6:30 a.m. every day, so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life. I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep,I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p. m. and get up at 6:30 a. m. every day,so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food,I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】本题结合插图提示,考查学生围绕主题组织语言的能力,紧扣健康生活的三个核心要素,要求语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作的常见要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】承接开头,依次从运动、睡眠、食物三个方面阐述健康生活的方式,最后发出倡议,语言简洁通顺,符合演讲稿格式。具体内容:I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep, I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p.m. and get up at 6:30 a.m. every day, so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food, I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Enjoy Healthy Life
Good morning,everyone! Today I want to tell you how to live a healthy life. I always play basketball and swim after school. Doing sport helps me stay active and happy. For sleep,I make sure to go to bed before 9:30 p. m. and get up at 6:30 a. m. every day,so I have enough sleep. When it comes to food,I eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I also drink milk every morning. I hope we all can have a healthy life. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】本题结合插图提示,考查学生围绕主题组织语言的能力,紧扣健康生活的三个核心要素,要求语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作的常见要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
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