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体育强则中国强,国运兴则体育兴。你校的英文报正在举办以"Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life"为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示信息,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
1. What's your favourite sport?
2. How often do you play it?
3. How does it help you?
要求:
1. 参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 词数不少于60。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①保持健康
②几乎从不
③一次或两次
④每周三次
⑤少数;几个
⑥属于某人
⑦工作日
⑧充满能量
⑨对……有好处
⑩锻炼;解决
⑪玩得开心
⑫团队精神
2. 句型仿写
①Keeping fit is not that hard!教材p.21 3c
句型:动词-ing形式短语作主语
仿写:打篮球使我变得健康、活泼。
②We have fun when we keep fit together!教材p.22 1b
句型:when引导时间状语从句
仿写:当我们一起打篮球的时候,我们结识了更多的朋友。
③It's fun to swim and play with my friends in the water.教材p.23 2a
句型:It's+形容词+to do...
仿写:对我来说,和我的同学一起打篮球很令人兴奋。
连句成篇
体育强则中国强,国运兴则体育兴。你校的英文报正在举办以"Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life"为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示信息,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
1. What's your favourite sport?
2. How often do you play it?
3. How does it help you?
要求:
1. 参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 词数不少于60。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①保持健康
②几乎从不
③一次或两次
④每周三次
⑤少数;几个
⑥属于某人
⑦工作日
⑧充满能量
⑨对……有好处
⑩锻炼;解决
⑪玩得开心
⑫团队精神
2. 句型仿写
①Keeping fit is not that hard!教材p.21 3c
句型:动词-ing形式短语作主语
仿写:打篮球使我变得健康、活泼。
②We have fun when we keep fit together!教材p.22 1b
句型:when引导时间状语从句
仿写:当我们一起打篮球的时候,我们结识了更多的朋友。
③It's fun to swim and play with my friends in the water.教材p.23 2a
句型:It's+形容词+to do...
仿写:对我来说,和我的同学一起打篮球很令人兴奋。
连句成篇
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①keep fit ②hardly ever
③once or twice ④three times a week
⑤a few ⑥belong to ⑦working day
⑧(be) full of energy ⑨be good for
⑩work out ⑪have fun ⑫team spirit
2. 句型仿写
① Playing basketball makes me healthy
and lively.
② We make more friends when we play
basketball together.
③ It's exciting for me to play basketball
with my classmates.
【连句成篇】
Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life
My favourite sport is basketball. It's
exciting for me to play basketball with my
classmates.
We usually play basketball once or twice
a week in our school on weekdays, but we
play a lot at weekends. Playing basketball
makes me healthy and lively. We make more
friends when we play basketball together.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's
make exercise part of our life.
1. 主题词块
①keep fit ②hardly ever
③once or twice ④three times a week
⑤a few ⑥belong to ⑦working day
⑧(be) full of energy ⑨be good for
⑩work out ⑪have fun ⑫team spirit
2. 句型仿写
① Playing basketball makes me healthy
and lively.
② We make more friends when we play
basketball together.
③ It's exciting for me to play basketball
with my classmates.
【连句成篇】
Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life
My favourite sport is basketball. It's
exciting for me to play basketball with my
classmates.
We usually play basketball once or twice
a week in our school on weekdays, but we
play a lot at weekends. Playing basketball
makes me healthy and lively. We make more
friends when we play basketball together.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's
make exercise part of our life.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life”为题的英语征文，需按照思维导图的结构完成写作：第一步开篇点题，明确自己最喜欢的运动；第二步主体部分介绍运动的频率、参与场景及对自身的益处；第三步结尾总结运动的重要性，发出呼吁。写作时需使用第一人称、一般现在时，适当运用积累的词块与句型，保证语句通顺、内容连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接点明最喜欢的运动，如篮球，运用句型“It's + 形容词 + to do...”引出与同学打篮球的感受；
2. 主体介绍：说明运动频率（如每周一两次，工作日在学校、周末多参与），阐述运动带来的益处（让自己健康活泼、结交更多朋友），结合积累的句型丰富内容；
3. 结尾总结：点明运动对健康有益，呼吁大家将运动融入生活，呼应主题。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①keep fit ②hardly ever ③once or twice ④three times a week ⑤a few ⑥belong to ⑦working day ⑧(be) full of energy ⑨be good for ⑩work out ⑪have fun ⑫team spirit
2. 句型仿写
① Playing basketball makes me healthy and lively.
② We make more friends when we play basketball together.
③ It's exciting for me to play basketball with my classmates.
【连句成篇】
Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life
My favourite sport is basketball. It's exciting for me to play basketball with my classmates.
We usually play basketball once or twice a week in our school on weekdays, but we play a lot at weekends. Playing basketball makes me healthy and lively. We make more friends when we play basketball together.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise part of our life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般现在时运用，主题词块积累
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的思路展开，合理运用积累的词块与句型，内容充实连贯，准确传达了运动的益处，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇以“Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life”为题的英语征文，需按照思维导图的结构完成写作：第一步开篇点题，明确自己最喜欢的运动；第二步主体部分介绍运动的频率、参与场景及对自身的益处；第三步结尾总结运动的重要性，发出呼吁。写作时需使用第一人称、一般现在时，适当运用积累的词块与句型，保证语句通顺、内容连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接点明最喜欢的运动，如篮球，运用句型“It's + 形容词 + to do...”引出与同学打篮球的感受；
2. 主体介绍：说明运动频率（如每周一两次，工作日在学校、周末多参与），阐述运动带来的益处（让自己健康活泼、结交更多朋友），结合积累的句型丰富内容；
3. 结尾总结：点明运动对健康有益，呼吁大家将运动融入生活，呼应主题。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①keep fit ②hardly ever ③once or twice ④three times a week ⑤a few ⑥belong to ⑦working day ⑧(be) full of energy ⑨be good for ⑩work out ⑪have fun ⑫team spirit
2. 句型仿写
① Playing basketball makes me healthy and lively.
② We make more friends when we play basketball together.
③ It's exciting for me to play basketball with my classmates.
【连句成篇】
Enjoy Sport; Enjoy Life
My favourite sport is basketball. It's exciting for me to play basketball with my classmates.
We usually play basketball once or twice a week in our school on weekdays, but we play a lot at weekends. Playing basketball makes me healthy and lively. We make more friends when we play basketball together.
Exercise is good for our health. Let's make exercise part of our life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般现在时运用，主题词块积累
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的思路展开，合理运用积累的词块与句型，内容充实连贯，准确传达了运动的益处，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
