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七、书面表达
假定你是王涛，今年14岁了。今天是周六，现在是上午8:30，外面正在下雨。你的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和爷爷都在家，你现在在家做作业。他们都正在做什么呢？请根据图片及提示写一篇小短文，介绍一下你们一家人正在做什么，可以适当发挥想象，词数80左右。
假定你是王涛，今年14岁了。今天是周六，现在是上午8:30，外面正在下雨。你的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和爷爷都在家，你现在在家做作业。他们都正在做什么呢？请根据图片及提示写一篇小短文，介绍一下你们一家人正在做什么，可以适当发挥想象，词数80左右。
My name is Wang Tao. I'm 14 years old. Today is Saturday. It is 8:30 in the morning. It is raining outside. My parents, my sister and my grandfather are at home. Now I am doing my homework. My grandfather is watching TV. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Who's the little girl? She is my sister Lucy. She's good at drawing. Look! She is drawing a picture for her toy bear now.
We are a big family. We love each other, and we are very happy.
答案
One possible version:
My name is Wang Tao. I'm 14 years old. Today is Saturday. It is 8:30 in the morning. It is raining outside. My parents, my sister and my grandfather are at home. Now I am doing my homework. My grandfather is watching TV. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Who's the little girl? She is my sister Lucy. She's good at drawing. Look! She is drawing a picture for her toy bear now.
We are a big family. We love each other, and we are very happy.
My name is Wang Tao. I'm 14 years old. Today is Saturday. It is 8:30 in the morning. It is raining outside. My parents, my sister and my grandfather are at home. Now I am doing my homework. My grandfather is watching TV. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Who's the little girl? She is my sister Lucy. She's good at drawing. Look! She is drawing a picture for her toy bear now.
We are a big family. We love each other, and we are very happy.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以王涛的身份，介绍周六上午8:30（下雨）时，在家的家人正在做的事，需结合图片中人物的动作（爷爷看电视、爸爸读报纸、妈妈做饭、妹妹画画、自己做作业），使用现在进行时，词数约80，适当发挥。解题思路：1. 开头介绍自己、时间、天气和家人都在家的背景；2. 依次描述每个家人的正在进行的动作，对应图片内容；3. 结尾表达家庭的温馨感受，确保语句通顺，时态正确。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 人称用第一人称“我（王涛）”，时态统一用现在进行时（结构：am/is/are + 动词ing）；2. 对应图片内容：爷爷在沙发上看电视，爸爸在看报纸，妈妈在厨房做饭，妹妹在画玩具熊，自己在做作业；3. 适当补充细节（如妹妹的名字、对家人的爱），控制词数在80左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Wang Tao. I'm 14 years old. Today is Saturday. It is 8:30 in the morning. It is raining outside. My parents, my sister and my grandfather are at home. Now I am doing my homework. My grandfather is watching TV. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Who's the little girl? She is my sister Lucy. She's good at drawing. Look! She is drawing a picture for her toy bear now.
We are a big family. We love each other, and we are very happy.
【知识点】
现在进行时、书面表达、家庭场景描述
【点评】
本题结合图片与提示信息，考查学生运用现在进行时描述日常活动的书面表达能力，贴近学生生活，内容明确，易于上手，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求：以王涛的身份，介绍周六上午8:30（下雨）时，在家的家人正在做的事，需结合图片中人物的动作（爷爷看电视、爸爸读报纸、妈妈做饭、妹妹画画、自己做作业），使用现在进行时，词数约80，适当发挥。解题思路：1. 开头介绍自己、时间、天气和家人都在家的背景；2. 依次描述每个家人的正在进行的动作，对应图片内容；3. 结尾表达家庭的温馨感受，确保语句通顺，时态正确。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 人称用第一人称“我（王涛）”，时态统一用现在进行时（结构：am/is/are + 动词ing）；2. 对应图片内容：爷爷在沙发上看电视，爸爸在看报纸，妈妈在厨房做饭，妹妹在画玩具熊，自己在做作业；3. 适当补充细节（如妹妹的名字、对家人的爱），控制词数在80左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Wang Tao. I'm 14 years old. Today is Saturday. It is 8:30 in the morning. It is raining outside. My parents, my sister and my grandfather are at home. Now I am doing my homework. My grandfather is watching TV. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
Who's the little girl? She is my sister Lucy. She's good at drawing. Look! She is drawing a picture for her toy bear now.
We are a big family. We love each other, and we are very happy.
【知识点】
现在进行时、书面表达、家庭场景描述
【点评】
本题结合图片与提示信息，考查学生运用现在进行时描述日常活动的书面表达能力，贴近学生生活，内容明确，易于上手，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
