七、书面表达
在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举行了有关“长江”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介绍长江。
要点：
1. 长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约 6300 千米；
2. 长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋；
3. 长江里有各种各样的鱼，对中国来说长江非常重要；
4. 我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。

One possible version:
The Yangtze River
The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it's also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful.

【分析】
写这篇介绍长江的英语书面表达，需围绕给定要点展开，先明确写作逻辑：第一步确定标题，第二步介绍长江的基本地理信息（长度、发源地、入海口），第三步说明长江的资源与重要性，第四步提出保护措施，最后补充合理细节完善文章，确保内容完整、语言准确。
【解析】
1. 拟定标题：The Yangtze River；
2. 介绍基本情况：用并列句说明长江是亚洲最长、世界第三长河，长度约6300千米，再点明发源地为青海省，最终汇入太平洋；
3. 补充内容：提及长江有多种鱼类（部分为濒危物种），强调其对中国的重要性；
4. 提出保护措施：明确要停止向长江倾倒垃圾、排放废水；
5. 结尾添加期望：希望长江愈发美丽，让文章结构更完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Yangtze River
The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it's also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、常用动词短语运用、说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，覆盖所有要点，补充了鱼类濒危的细节与结尾期望，结构清晰，语言准确，符合初中英语书面表达要求，是优秀范文，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.4