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“You can either travel or read,but either your body or soul must be on the way.”去旅行,这是身体在路上,可以拓宽人的眼界;去读书,这是灵魂在路上,可以让心智成长。某英文杂志正在开展以“身体和灵魂在路上”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文,说说你去过的地方、读过的好书。
要点提示:
1.选择一个你去过的旅游景点并描述你的所见所闻;
2.介绍你最喜欢的书并说明原因;
3.你对于旅游和读书的个人观点。
要求:
1.短文须包含所有提示要点,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80~100。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Either our body or soul must be on the way.
“You can either travel or read,but either your body or soul must be on the way.”去旅行,这是身体在路上,可以拓宽人的眼界;去读书,这是灵魂在路上,可以让心智成长。某英文杂志正在开展以“身体和灵魂在路上”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文,说说你去过的地方、读过的好书。
要点提示:
1.选择一个你去过的旅游景点并描述你的所见所闻;
2.介绍你最喜欢的书并说明原因;
3.你对于旅游和读书的个人观点。
要求:
1.短文须包含所有提示要点,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80~100。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Either our body or soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic thing.
Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature.
Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge.
Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
答案
One possible version:
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic thing.
Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic thing.
Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇以“身体和灵魂在路上”为主题的英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：1. 描述一处旅游景点的所见所闻；2. 介绍最喜欢的书并说明原因；3. 表达对旅游和读书的个人观点。解题思路：首先承接给定开头，先写旅游经历，选择具体景点（如故宫），用过去式描述所见所感；接着写读书内容，选一本喜欢的书（如《中国国家地理》），说明阅读收获；最后总结个人观点，控制词数在80-100之间，避免真实信息，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作采用“分述-总结”结构：1. 第一段（承接开头）：用一般过去式讲述参观故宫的经历，描述宫殿和艺术品，点明旅游能增长历史知识；2. 第二段：介绍喜欢的地理类书籍《中国国家地理》，说明能学到自然和景点知识，体现读书乐趣；3. 第三段：总结观点，指出旅游和读书都能增长知识、开阔视野，符合主题要求，语言简洁准确，符合词数限制。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic thing.
Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、一般过去时、观点表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑通顺，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，用词恰当，准确传达了旅游和读书的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇以“身体和灵魂在路上”为主题的英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：1. 描述一处旅游景点的所见所闻；2. 介绍最喜欢的书并说明原因；3. 表达对旅游和读书的个人观点。解题思路：首先承接给定开头，先写旅游经历，选择具体景点（如故宫），用过去式描述所见所感；接着写读书内容，选一本喜欢的书（如《中国国家地理》），说明阅读收获；最后总结个人观点，控制词数在80-100之间，避免真实信息，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作采用“分述-总结”结构：1. 第一段（承接开头）：用一般过去式讲述参观故宫的经历，描述宫殿和艺术品，点明旅游能增长历史知识；2. 第二段：介绍喜欢的地理类书籍《中国国家地理》，说明能学到自然和景点知识，体现读书乐趣；3. 第三段：总结观点，指出旅游和读书都能增长知识、开阔视野，符合主题要求，语言简洁准确，符合词数限制。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last summer I visited the Palace Museum. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those famous works of art. I learnt much about China's history. Travelling is really a fantastic thing.
Reading is also great fun. When I read my favourite books, I feel relaxed. I am interested in geography books because I can learn more about nature. Last week I read a magazine Chinese National Geography. I learnt a lot about places of interest from it.
I think both travelling and reading help us learn more knowledge. Moreover, they can open up a whole new world to us.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、一般过去时、观点表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑通顺，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，用词恰当，准确传达了旅游和读书的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
