三、实战演练
初中阶段你参加过的印象最深刻的体育比赛是哪一次呢?某英文报正在举行题目为“An Unforgettable Match”的征文比赛。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文参赛。

注意:
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数 80 左右。
An Unforgettable Match
初中阶段你参加过的印象最深刻的体育比赛是哪一次呢?某英文报正在举行题目为“An Unforgettable Match”的征文比赛。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文参赛。
注意:
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数 80 左右。
An Unforgettable Match
答案
第5课时 单元写作指导
三、实战演练
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable match in my school life was the football match held last term on our school playground. My class played against Class Five, and I watched the whole match.
At the beginning, our class scored first, and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering for them. Finally, our team scored again just before the match ended.
This good result came from our hard work and strong will. I learn that we should always keep trying and fighting.
三、实战演练
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable match in my school life was the football match held last term on our school playground. My class played against Class Five, and I watched the whole match.
At the beginning, our class scored first, and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering for them. Finally, our team scored again just before the match ended.
This good result came from our hard work and strong will. I learn that we should always keep trying and fighting.
解析
【解析】
本题要求以“An Unforgettable Match”为题写一篇英语短文参赛,需围绕时间和地点、比赛过程、收获和感受三个要点展开,可适当增加细节,词数控制在80左右。写作时要保证行文连贯,语言符合英语表达习惯,结合初中阶段的体育比赛经历进行创作。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable match in my school life was the football match held last term on our school playground. My class played against Class Five, and I watched the whole match.
At the beginning, our class scored first, and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering for them. Finally, our team scored again just before the match ended.
This good result came from our hard work and strong will. I learn that we should always keep trying and fighting.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、校园体育话题表达、感悟类语句组织
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求。生动描述了比赛过程,同时点明从比赛中获得的感悟,很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“An Unforgettable Match”为题写一篇英语短文参赛,需围绕时间和地点、比赛过程、收获和感受三个要点展开,可适当增加细节,词数控制在80左右。写作时要保证行文连贯,语言符合英语表达习惯,结合初中阶段的体育比赛经历进行创作。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable match in my school life was the football match held last term on our school playground. My class played against Class Five, and I watched the whole match.
At the beginning, our class scored first, and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering for them. Finally, our team scored again just before the match ended.
This good result came from our hard work and strong will. I learn that we should always keep trying and fighting.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、校园体育话题表达、感悟类语句组织
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求。生动描述了比赛过程,同时点明从比赛中获得的感悟,很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
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