九、书面表达。
春天到了,大家一起去公园游玩。大家都在公园里做什么呢?请你展开想象,写一写公园里的情景吧。
要求:1.语句通顺、书写工整、语法正确;
2.不少于5句话。
春天到了,大家一起去公园游玩。大家都在公园里做什么呢?请你展开想象,写一写公园里的情景吧。
要求:1.语句通顺、书写工整、语法正确;
2.不少于5句话。
答案
参考范文:
Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求围绕“春天公园游玩的情景”展开写作,需满足语句通顺、语法正确、不少于5句话的要求。解题思路:首先点明春天的到来、天气及时间,引出公园场景;接着具体描写公园里不同人群的活动,运用现在进行时体现动作的正在进行;最后点明大家的心情,使内容完整连贯。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题,时态正确(用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作),内容具体,语句通顺。参考范文:Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
【答案】
Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“春天公园游玩”的主题,内容具体生动,准确运用现在进行时描述公园内的活动,语句通顺、语法正确,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求围绕“春天公园游玩的情景”展开写作,需满足语句通顺、语法正确、不少于5句话的要求。解题思路:首先点明春天的到来、天气及时间,引出公园场景;接着具体描写公园里不同人群的活动,运用现在进行时体现动作的正在进行;最后点明大家的心情,使内容完整连贯。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题,时态正确(用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作),内容具体,语句通顺。参考范文:Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
【答案】
Spring is coming. It is sunny and warm. Today is Sunday. There are many children in the park. Look! Two boys and their parents are flying kites near the river. Three girls are dancing under the tree. Some boys are playing football. And some girls are drawing pictures near the hill. They are all happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“春天公园游玩”的主题,内容具体生动,准确运用现在进行时描述公园内的活动,语句通顺、语法正确,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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