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六、VI. 书面表达。
假设你是李华，你有一位来自英国的笔友Peter，他计划下个月来中国拜访一位好友。这是 Peter第一次来中国，他对中国的日常社交礼节不太熟悉，担心自己因不了解当地习俗而造成误会，于是写信向你寻求帮助。
请你根据本单元所学知识，给Peter回一封100词左右的电子邮件，为他提供3~4条实用的建议，帮助他更好地完成这次拜访。（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you ______ .
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours, Li Hua
假设你是李华，你有一位来自英国的笔友Peter，他计划下个月来中国拜访一位好友。这是 Peter第一次来中国，他对中国的日常社交礼节不太熟悉，担心自己因不了解当地习俗而造成误会，于是写信向你寻求帮助。
请你根据本单元所学知识，给Peter回一封100词左右的电子邮件，为他提供3~4条实用的建议，帮助他更好地完成这次拜访。（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you ______ .
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours, Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal
to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you.
First, for greetings, a smile and a gentle handshake are the most common ways. Unlike
in the UK, hugs or kisses are not common in China—they may make your friend feel a little
embarrassed. Second, if you're invited to their home, a small gift will leave a great
impression. A box of fine British tea or a bunch of colorful fresh flowers is a thoughtful
choice. Third, remember to wait for the host to start eating before you pick up chopsticks.
Also, never stick your chopsticks straight into the rice. This is a traditional taboo that
reminds people of mourning. These details will help you fit in well.
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal
to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you.
First, for greetings, a smile and a gentle handshake are the most common ways. Unlike
in the UK, hugs or kisses are not common in China—they may make your friend feel a little
embarrassed. Second, if you're invited to their home, a small gift will leave a great
impression. A box of fine British tea or a bunch of colorful fresh flowers is a thoughtful
choice. Third, remember to wait for the host to start eating before you pick up chopsticks.
Also, never stick your chopsticks straight into the rice. This is a traditional taboo that
reminds people of mourning. These details will help you fit in well.
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给首次来中国的英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，针对他对中国社交礼节的担忧提供3-4条实用建议。解题时需先明确邮件格式（开头和结尾已给出），围绕中国日常社交的核心习俗（问候、做客礼仪、餐桌礼仪等），结合中英习俗差异组织内容，确保词数约100词，语言符合笔友间交流的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出建议：先说明分享建议的意图；
2. 第一条建议：问候时用微笑和握手，避免拥抱或亲吻（对比英国习俗，说明差异，避免误会）；
3. 第二条建议：做客时带小礼物（如英国茶或鲜花），给主人留下好印象；
4. 第三条建议：餐桌礼仪，等主人先动筷，筷子不要插在米饭里（说明传统禁忌）；
5. 结尾衔接，表达对Peter的祝福。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you.
First, for greetings, a smile and a gentle handshake are the most common ways. Unlike in the UK, hugs or kisses are not common in China—they may make your friend feel a little embarrassed. Second, if you're invited to their home, a small gift will leave a great impression. A box of fine British tea or a bunch of colorful fresh flowers is a thoughtful choice. Third, remember to wait for the host to start eating before you pick up chopsticks. Also, never stick your chopsticks straight into the rice. This is a traditional taboo that reminds people of mourning. These details will help you fit in well.
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、中国日常社交礼仪
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，提供了3条具体实用的社交建议，清晰对比了中英习俗差异，内容贴合实际，语言流畅自然，符合笔友间交流的语气，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给首次来中国的英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，针对他对中国社交礼节的担忧提供3-4条实用建议。解题时需先明确邮件格式（开头和结尾已给出），围绕中国日常社交的核心习俗（问候、做客礼仪、餐桌礼仪等），结合中英习俗差异组织内容，确保词数约100词，语言符合笔友间交流的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出建议：先说明分享建议的意图；
2. 第一条建议：问候时用微笑和握手，避免拥抱或亲吻（对比英国习俗，说明差异，避免误会）；
3. 第二条建议：做客时带小礼物（如英国茶或鲜花），给主人留下好印象；
4. 第三条建议：餐桌礼仪，等主人先动筷，筷子不要插在米饭里（说明传统禁忌）；
5. 结尾衔接，表达对Peter的祝福。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm so excited to hear you're coming to China to visit your friend! It's totally normal to feel unsure about local customs, and I'm happy to share some tips with you.
First, for greetings, a smile and a gentle handshake are the most common ways. Unlike in the UK, hugs or kisses are not common in China—they may make your friend feel a little embarrassed. Second, if you're invited to their home, a small gift will leave a great impression. A box of fine British tea or a bunch of colorful fresh flowers is a thoughtful choice. Third, remember to wait for the host to start eating before you pick up chopsticks. Also, never stick your chopsticks straight into the rice. This is a traditional taboo that reminds people of mourning. These details will help you fit in well.
Hope you have a wonderful trip in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、中国日常社交礼仪
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，提供了3条具体实用的社交建议，清晰对比了中英习俗差异，内容贴合实际，语言流畅自然，符合笔友间交流的语气，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
