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假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Tony 即将来中国，他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的表格提示进行适当发挥，用英语给 Tony 写一封邮件，对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。
【注意】1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Tony 即将来中国，他想向你了解一下中国人的生活方式和中国的传统习俗。请你根据下面的表格提示进行适当发挥，用英语给 Tony 写一封邮件，对此进行简单介绍并对他的到来表示期待和欢迎。
【注意】1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads.
Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth.
Third, we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles on our birthdays. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands.
Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival.
Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles on our birthdays. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have
a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles on our birthdays. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have
a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：这是一篇给外国笔友的介绍类邮件，核心要求是覆盖表格给出的全部习俗要点，同时补充合理的春节相关习俗内容，符合词数90左右的要求。第一步先梳理行文逻辑：开篇先回应对方想要了解中国习俗的诉求，接着用逻辑连接词依次介绍初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节四个场景的对应礼仪习俗，最后收尾表达对对方到来的欢迎和期待。写作时注意语气要自然亲切，符合笔友交流的语境，不要生硬直译表格内容，适当补充细节让文章流畅连贯，同时避开真实人名校名的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：先点明得知对方即将来中国，引出自己要介绍相关中国习俗的主题，完成内容引入。
2. 分点输出核心要点：
① 对应初次见面场景：说明中国人第一次见面通常以握手或者点头的方式问候，符合日常社交习惯。
② 对应用餐场景：说明中国人用餐使用筷子而非刀叉，同时提醒对方嘴里有食物时不要说话，是当地的用餐礼仪。
③ 对应过生日场景：介绍生日时会吃蛋糕和寓意长寿的长寿面，收到礼物时需要用双手接过表示礼貌。
④ 对应过春节场景：补充符合常识的春节习俗，比如全家团聚吃年夜饭，长辈会给孩子发寓意好运的红包，完善内容。
3. 结尾收尾：表达自己十分期待和对方见面，祝愿对方能喜欢中国，完成全文，最后通读检查语法错误，确认所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles on our birthdays. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，传统习俗表达，逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题属于应用文体写作，给出的提示要点十分明确，学生只需要将表格给出的不同场景的礼仪习俗用通顺的英语串联，补充符合常识的春节相关内容即可完成写作，难度适中，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也能引导学生了解对外文化交流的相关表达注意事项。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：这是一篇给外国笔友的介绍类邮件，核心要求是覆盖表格给出的全部习俗要点，同时补充合理的春节相关习俗内容，符合词数90左右的要求。第一步先梳理行文逻辑：开篇先回应对方想要了解中国习俗的诉求，接着用逻辑连接词依次介绍初次见面、用餐、过生日、过春节四个场景的对应礼仪习俗，最后收尾表达对对方到来的欢迎和期待。写作时注意语气要自然亲切，符合笔友交流的语境，不要生硬直译表格内容，适当补充细节让文章流畅连贯，同时避开真实人名校名的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：先点明得知对方即将来中国，引出自己要介绍相关中国习俗的主题，完成内容引入。
2. 分点输出核心要点：
① 对应初次见面场景：说明中国人第一次见面通常以握手或者点头的方式问候，符合日常社交习惯。
② 对应用餐场景：说明中国人用餐使用筷子而非刀叉，同时提醒对方嘴里有食物时不要说话，是当地的用餐礼仪。
③ 对应过生日场景：介绍生日时会吃蛋糕和寓意长寿的长寿面，收到礼物时需要用双手接过表示礼貌。
④ 对应过春节场景：补充符合常识的春节习俗，比如全家团聚吃年夜饭，长辈会给孩子发寓意好运的红包，完善内容。
3. 结尾收尾：表达自己十分期待和对方见面，祝愿对方能喜欢中国，完成全文，最后通读检查语法错误，确认所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to hear that you will come to China. You have asked me about the lifestyle of Chinese people and Chinese traditions. Here are some of my ideas.
First, when we Chinese people meet for the first time, we shake hands or nod heads. Second, we use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. Don't speak if you have food in your mouth. Third, we usually have a birthday cake and long noodles on our birthdays. When others give us presents, we should accept them with both hands. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People have a traditional family dinner together on the eve of the Spring Festival. Children get hongbao which means good luck during the Spring Festival.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon. I hope you will like China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，传统习俗表达，逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题属于应用文体写作，给出的提示要点十分明确，学生只需要将表格给出的不同场景的礼仪习俗用通顺的英语串联，补充符合常识的春节相关内容即可完成写作，难度适中，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也能引导学生了解对外文化交流的相关表达注意事项。
【难度系数】
0.6
