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某英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为主题进行征文，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，描述你的一次旅行经历，并向该报社投稿。
要点：
1. Where did you go?
2. Who did you go with?
3. What did you do there?
4. How did you feel about the trip?
要求：
1. 短文须包括以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整；
3. 70词左右。
某英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为主题进行征文，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，描述你的一次旅行经历，并向该报社投稿。
要点：
1. Where did you go?
2. Who did you go with?
3. What did you do there?
4. How did you feel about the trip?
要求：
1. 短文须包括以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整；
3. 70词左右。
答案
One possible version:
An Enjoyable Trip
Last month,I went on a trip to Sanya,Hainan. I went there by train with my parents. It took us about 12 hours to get there. It was sunny there.
On the first day,we walked around the city. It was quite a beautiful place. The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean. We all enjoyed the beautiful views. People there were friendly too. On the second day,we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums. Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park. We did some shopping on the third day. Mum and I bought a lot of things. After that,we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant.
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring,but we really had a fantastic time there.
An Enjoyable Trip
Last month,I went on a trip to Sanya,Hainan. I went there by train with my parents. It took us about 12 hours to get there. It was sunny there.
On the first day,we walked around the city. It was quite a beautiful place. The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean. We all enjoyed the beautiful views. People there were friendly too. On the second day,we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums. Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park. We did some shopping on the third day. Mum and I bought a lot of things. After that,we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant.
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring,but we really had a fantastic time there.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“An Enjoyable Trip”，要求根据给定的四个要点（旅行地点、同行人员、旅行活动、旅行感受）撰写70词左右的短文投稿。解题思路：① 确定具体的旅行场景（如三亚），明确同行人员（如父母）；② 围绕要点补充合理的旅行活动细节，使内容连贯；③ 结尾点明旅行感受，确保所有要求的要点都被覆盖，同时控制词数，保证语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明旅行的时间、地点及同行人，对应要点1、2；2. 中间分述旅行中的具体活动（如逛城市、游海滩、主题公园、购物等），对应要点3；3. 结尾总结旅行的感受，对应要点4；4. 注意词数控制在70词左右，适当发挥细节，使短文条理清晰、语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Enjoyable Trip
Last month,I went on a trip to Sanya,Hainan. I went there by train with my parents. It took us about 12 hours to get there. It was sunny there.
On the first day,we walked around the city. It was quite a beautiful place. The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean. We all enjoyed the beautiful views. People there were friendly too. On the second day,we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums. Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park. We did some shopping on the third day. Mum and I bought a lot of things. After that,we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant.
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring,but we really had a fantastic time there.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作、旅行话题应用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要点，条理清晰，语言流畅，通过具体的活动展现了愉快的旅行体验，符合投稿要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“An Enjoyable Trip”，要求根据给定的四个要点（旅行地点、同行人员、旅行活动、旅行感受）撰写70词左右的短文投稿。解题思路：① 确定具体的旅行场景（如三亚），明确同行人员（如父母）；② 围绕要点补充合理的旅行活动细节，使内容连贯；③ 结尾点明旅行感受，确保所有要求的要点都被覆盖，同时控制词数，保证语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明旅行的时间、地点及同行人，对应要点1、2；2. 中间分述旅行中的具体活动（如逛城市、游海滩、主题公园、购物等），对应要点3；3. 结尾总结旅行的感受，对应要点4；4. 注意词数控制在70词左右，适当发挥细节，使短文条理清晰、语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Enjoyable Trip
Last month,I went on a trip to Sanya,Hainan. I went there by train with my parents. It took us about 12 hours to get there. It was sunny there.
On the first day,we walked around the city. It was quite a beautiful place. The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean. We all enjoyed the beautiful views. People there were friendly too. On the second day,we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums. Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park. We did some shopping on the third day. Mum and I bought a lot of things. After that,we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant.
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring,but we really had a fantastic time there.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作、旅行话题应用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要点，条理清晰，语言流畅，通过具体的活动展现了愉快的旅行体验，符合投稿要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
