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七、书面表达。（满分15分）
假如你是中学生杨迪,请根据下面表格中的内容,倡议同学们遵守公共秩序(obey public rules),共创良好的公共环境。
不良行为 到处乱扔垃圾;嘲笑(laugh at)穷人;……(发挥一点)
文明行为 校内 • 图书馆:保持安静;及时(in time)归还图书
• 食堂:排队等候;不浪费食物
• 教室:不追逐他人;……
校外 • 马路上:遵守交通规则
• 公园里:不要摘花;保持公园干净
……(发挥一点)
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息,可作适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整;
3. 80词左右。开头、结尾及提示已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
As a good middle school student, in our school,
Outside our school,
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
假如你是中学生杨迪,请根据下面表格中的内容,倡议同学们遵守公共秩序(obey public rules),共创良好的公共环境。
不良行为 到处乱扔垃圾;嘲笑(laugh at)穷人;……(发挥一点)
文明行为 校内 • 图书馆:保持安静;及时(in time)归还图书
• 食堂:排队等候;不浪费食物
• 教室:不追逐他人;……
校外 • 马路上:遵守交通规则
• 公园里:不要摘花;保持公园干净
……(发挥一点)
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息,可作适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整;
3. 80词左右。开头、结尾及提示已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.
As a good middle school student, in our school,
we should keep quiet in the library and return the books to the library in time. In the dining hall, we should queue up for our turn and shouldn't waste food. In the classroom, we shouldn't paint on our desks or run after others.
Outside our school,
we should also obey traffic rules. If you bump into someone, you should say sorry. We can't pick flowers in the park. We should keep parks clean. Moreover, remember to wait in line for your turn when shopping at a supermarket.
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
答案
One possible version:
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.
As a good middle school student, in our school, we should keep quiet in the library and return the books to the library in time. In the dining hall, we should queue up for our turn and shouldn't waste food. In the classroom, we shouldn't paint on our desks or run after others.
Outside our school, we should also obey traffic rules. If you bump into someone, you should say sorry. We can't pick flowers in the park. We should keep parks clean. Moreover, remember to wait in line for your turn when shopping at a supermarket.
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.
As a good middle school student, in our school, we should keep quiet in the library and return the books to the library in time. In the dining hall, we should queue up for our turn and shouldn't waste food. In the classroom, we shouldn't paint on our desks or run after others.
Outside our school, we should also obey traffic rules. If you bump into someone, you should say sorry. We can't pick flowers in the park. We should keep parks clean. Moreover, remember to wait in line for your turn when shopping at a supermarket.
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以中学生杨迪的身份写一篇倡议书，主题是遵守公共秩序、共创良好公共环境，需涵盖表格中的不良行为、校内文明行为、校外文明行为，适当发挥，词数约80词。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，先列举不良行为（对应表格的乱扔垃圾、嘲笑穷人，可补充对他人无礼等内容）；2. 校内部分按图书馆、食堂、教室的要求，逐一写文明行为，适当补充细节；3. 校外部分按马路、公园的要求，补充如超市排队等发挥内容；4. 衔接已给结尾，确保语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰，符合倡议书的语气。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，点明不良行为：“Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.”，对应表格中不良行为的要求；2. 校内部分：分别写图书馆需保持安静、及时归还图书；食堂要排队、不浪费食物；教室不追逐他人，补充“不在课桌上乱涂”的细节，对应表格校内文明行为；3. 校外部分：写马路上遵守交通规则，公园不摘花、保持干净，补充“超市购物排队”的发挥内容，对应表格校外文明行为；4. 衔接已给结尾，完成全文，确保词数符合要求，语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.
As a good middle school student, in our school, we should keep quiet in the library and return the books to the library in time. In the dining hall, we should queue up for our turn and shouldn't waste food. In the classroom, we shouldn't paint on our desks or run after others.
Outside our school, we should also obey traffic rules. If you bump into someone, you should say sorry. We can't pick flowers in the park. We should keep parks clean. Moreover, remember to wait in line for your turn when shopping at a supermarket.
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
【知识点】英语书面表达、倡议书写作、公共秩序话题
【点评】该范文严格遵循题目要求，涵盖表格所有要点，适当补充了合理内容，结构清晰（分校内、校外两部分），语言通顺，语法正确，符合倡议书的文体要求，很好地完成了倡议同学们遵守公共秩序的任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，点明不良行为：“Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.”，对应表格中不良行为的要求；2. 校内部分：分别写图书馆需保持安静、及时归还图书；食堂要排队、不浪费食物；教室不追逐他人，补充“不在课桌上乱涂”的细节，对应表格校内文明行为；3. 校外部分：写马路上遵守交通规则，公园不摘花、保持干净，补充“超市购物排队”的发挥内容，对应表格校外文明行为；4. 衔接已给结尾，完成全文，确保词数符合要求，语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My dear friends,
Each of us must obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.
Some students drop litter everywhere. They laugh at the poor and even speak rudely to others.
As a good middle school student, in our school, we should keep quiet in the library and return the books to the library in time. In the dining hall, we should queue up for our turn and shouldn't waste food. In the classroom, we shouldn't paint on our desks or run after others.
Outside our school, we should also obey traffic rules. If you bump into someone, you should say sorry. We can't pick flowers in the park. We should keep parks clean. Moreover, remember to wait in line for your turn when shopping at a supermarket.
Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.
Yang Di
【知识点】英语书面表达、倡议书写作、公共秩序话题
【点评】该范文严格遵循题目要求，涵盖表格所有要点，适当补充了合理内容，结构清晰（分校内、校外两部分），语言通顺，语法正确，符合倡议书的文体要求，很好地完成了倡议同学们遵守公共秩序的任务。
【难度系数】0.6
