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[开头句]
1. The ocean is home to many kinds of sea life. （引出话题）
2. Wetlands are really important for wildlife, so we must protect our wetlands. （提出观点）
3. Forests are of great importance. （点明作用）
[中间句]
1. Pollution is one of the biggest problems. （引出问题）
2. We can help solve the problems. （行动方案）
[结尾句]
1. Together we can help protect the ocean. （呼吁行动,下同）
2. Let's do our part to save the earth!
3. It's time for us to take action and protect the ocean.
[名言警句]
1. Where there is green, there is life. 哪里有绿色,哪里就有生命。
2. Limited resources, infinite circulation. 有限的资源,无限的循环。
写作演练＞＞
Teens' Talk Magazine 向中学生征集有关“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以“Protecting the forests”为题,从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护森林。
要求:1. 词数90左右,文中须包含提示的所有信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 意思连贯,表达清楚。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要性,再说森林现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. The ocean is home to many kinds of sea life. （引出话题）
2. Wetlands are really important for wildlife, so we must protect our wetlands. （提出观点）
3. Forests are of great importance. （点明作用）
[中间句]
1. Pollution is one of the biggest problems. （引出问题）
2. We can help solve the problems. （行动方案）
[结尾句]
1. Together we can help protect the ocean. （呼吁行动,下同）
2. Let's do our part to save the earth!
3. It's time for us to take action and protect the ocean.
[名言警句]
1. Where there is green, there is life. 哪里有绿色,哪里就有生命。
2. Limited resources, infinite circulation. 有限的资源,无限的循环。
写作演练＞＞
Teens' Talk Magazine 向中学生征集有关“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以“Protecting the forests”为题,从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护森林。
要求:1. 词数90左右,文中须包含提示的所有信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 意思连贯,表达清楚。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要性,再说森林现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems.
People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die.
To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper.
Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now.
Join forest protection campaigns
and make a difference.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version：
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“Protecting the forests”为题，结合给定要点完成短文。解题思路如下：1. 确定三段式结构：第一段写森林的重要性，承接已给开头句展开；第二段写森林面临的问题及解决方案；第三段发出行动呼吁。2. 第一段需结合素材中森林的作用（动植物家园、提供资源），补充合理作用（如防水土流失、调节气候），覆盖要点。3. 第二段转折写森林面临的问题（如砍伐树木），说明危害后给出具体解决方案（种树、少用纸、呼吁他人）。4. 第三段发出行动号召，符合素材呼吁句要求。5. 注意用一般现在时，词数90左右，意思连贯，覆盖所有提示信息。
【解析】
第一步，第一段承接开头“Forests are of great importance.”，展开写森林的重要性：They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate. 第二步，第二段转折写问题与方案：However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important. 第三步，第三段发出呼吁：Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference. 全程确保覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version：
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁恰当，符合中学生英语写作水平，有效传递了保护森林的环保理念。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“Protecting the forests”为题，结合给定要点完成短文。解题思路如下：1. 确定三段式结构：第一段写森林的重要性，承接已给开头句展开；第二段写森林面临的问题及解决方案；第三段发出行动呼吁。2. 第一段需结合素材中森林的作用（动植物家园、提供资源），补充合理作用（如防水土流失、调节气候），覆盖要点。3. 第二段转折写森林面临的问题（如砍伐树木），说明危害后给出具体解决方案（种树、少用纸、呼吁他人）。4. 第三段发出行动号召，符合素材呼吁句要求。5. 注意用一般现在时，词数90左右，意思连贯，覆盖所有提示信息。
【解析】
第一步，第一段承接开头“Forests are of great importance.”，展开写森林的重要性：They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate. 第二步，第二段转折写问题与方案：However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important. 第三步，第三段发出呼吁：Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference. 全程确保覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version：
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，准确覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁恰当，符合中学生英语写作水平，有效传递了保护森林的环保理念。
【难度系数】
0.3
