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② 典例赏析
假如你是李华,你校英文专栏正在寻找校园小美食家,请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇80~100词的短文,向该英文专栏进行投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一道菜及制作方法。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
名称 炒土豆(stir-fried potatoes)
做法 土豆冲洗干净备用
土豆切块
锅烧热(heat),加油
放入土豆块翻炒,加适量盐
Everyone has his or her favourite food.
审题指导: 1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Everyone has his or her favourite food. As for me, my favourite food is stir-fried potatoes.
Let me share my way to cook it with you⁵. To begin with¹, prepare two or three potatoes and wash them. Then, what I should do is to cut them into small pieces. Next, heat the pot for half a minute and pour some oil into the pot². After tha
t out the potatoes into it and stir-fry them. At the same time³, I would like to add some pepper. In fact, it's up to you⁴ whether you add pepper or not. And then add some salt to the potatoes. At last, put the potatoes on a big plate.
How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are⁶!
亮点词块
①to begin with 首先
②pour some oil into the pot 往锅里倒些油
③at the same time 同时
④up to you 取决于你
高分句子
⑤Let me share my way to cook it with you. (祈使句)让我和你分享一下我的烹饪方法。
⑥How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are! (感叹句)我的炒土豆多好吃啊!
假如你是李华,你校英文专栏正在寻找校园小美食家,请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇80~100词的短文,向该英文专栏进行投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一道菜及制作方法。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
名称 炒土豆(stir-fried potatoes)
做法 土豆冲洗干净备用
土豆切块锅烧热(heat),加油
放入土豆块翻炒,加适量盐
Everyone has his or her favourite food.
审题指导: 1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Everyone has his or her favourite food. As for me, my favourite food is stir-fried potatoes.
Let me share my way to cook it with you⁵. To begin with¹, prepare two or three potatoes and wash them. Then, what I should do is to cut them into small pieces. Next, heat the pot for half a minute and pour some oil into the pot². After tha
t out the potatoes into it and stir-fry them. At the same time³, I would like to add some pepper. In fact, it's up to you⁴ whether you add pepper or not. And then add some salt to the potatoes. At last, put the potatoes on a big plate.How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are⁶!
亮点词块
①to begin with 首先
②pour some oil into the pot 往锅里倒些油
③at the same time 同时
④up to you 取决于你
高分句子
⑤Let me share my way to cook it with you. (祈使句)让我和你分享一下我的烹饪方法。
⑥How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are! (感叹句)我的炒土豆多好吃啊!
答案
As for me, my favourite food is stir-fried potatoes.
Let me share my simple way to cook it with you. To begin with, wash some potatoes clean for later use. Then, cut the potatoes into small pieces. Next, heat the pot and pour some oil into it. After that, put the potato pieces into the pot and stir-fry them, add proper salt to season.
How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are!
Let me share my simple way to cook it with you. To begin with, wash some potatoes clean for later use. Then, cut the potatoes into small pieces. Next, heat the pot and pour some oil into it. After that, put the potato pieces into the pot and stir-fry them, add proper salt to season.
How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are!
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份向校英文专栏投稿，介绍最喜欢的炒土豆的制作方法。解题思路：首先明确体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；接着按给定的制作步骤（洗土豆、切块、热锅倒油、翻炒加盐）组织内容，运用指定亮点词块使语句流畅；最后控制字数在80-100词，符合投稿要求。
【解析】首先承接开头点明最喜欢的食物是炒土豆；然后分步骤描述做法：第一步洗土豆备用，第二步切块，第三步热锅倒油，第四步放入土豆翻炒并加适量盐；最后用感叹句收尾，确保时态、人称正确，语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】As for me, my favourite food is stir-fried potatoes.
Let me share my simple way to cook it with you. To begin with, wash some potatoes clean for later use. Then, cut the potatoes into small pieces. Next, heat the pot and pour some oil into it. After that, put the potato pieces into the pot and stir-fry them, add proper salt to season.
How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、步骤类英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，结合校园投稿的语境，要求学生准确运用一般现在时描述制作步骤，同时运用亮点词块提升文章质量，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头点明最喜欢的食物是炒土豆；然后分步骤描述做法：第一步洗土豆备用，第二步切块，第三步热锅倒油，第四步放入土豆翻炒并加适量盐；最后用感叹句收尾，确保时态、人称正确，语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】As for me, my favourite food is stir-fried potatoes.
Let me share my simple way to cook it with you. To begin with, wash some potatoes clean for later use. Then, cut the potatoes into small pieces. Next, heat the pot and pour some oil into it. After that, put the potato pieces into the pot and stir-fry them, add proper salt to season.
How delicious my stir-fried potatoes are!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、步骤类英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，结合校园投稿的语境，要求学生准确运用一般现在时描述制作步骤，同时运用亮点词块提升文章质量，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
