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体裁:说明文
假设你是红星中学的学生李华,请你根据以下提示,写一篇60词左右的英语短文,介绍一下自己的学校并表达对学校的喜爱之情。
人称:第一、三人称 主题:介绍学校
时态:一般现在时
要点:1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they? 2. Which building is your favourite? Where is it? 3. How do you like your school? Something more about it.
体裁:说明文
假设你是红星中学的学生李华,请你根据以下提示,写一篇60词左右的英语短文,介绍一下自己的学校并表达对学校的喜爱之情。
人称:第一、三人称 主题:介绍学校
时态:一般现在时
要点:1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they? 2. Which building is your favourite? Where is it? 3. How do you like your school? Something more about it.
答案
Hello, I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. There are three buildings in our school: a classroom building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the right of the classroom building, and there are many great books in it. Our school is clean and beautiful, all teachers and classmates are very nice. I love my school so much.
解析
【分析】本题为英语说明文写作任务，需以红星中学学生李华的身份，用一般现在时完成。解题思路为：①开篇点明自身身份；②按要求说明学校建筑的数量、类型；③明确最喜欢的建筑及其位置；④补充学校特点并表达喜爱，同时控制词数符合要求。
【解析】写作时，首先用“Hello, I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School.”开篇；接着介绍学校建筑：“There are three buildings in our school: a classroom building, a library and a sports hall.”；然后说明最喜欢的建筑：“My favourite building is the library. It's on the right of the classroom building, and there are many great books in it.”；最后评价学校并表达喜爱：“Our school is clean and beautiful, all teachers and classmates are very nice. I love my school so much.”，确保涵盖所有要点，时态正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】Hello, I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. There are three buildings in our school: a classroom building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the right of the classroom building, and there are many great books in it. Our school is clean and beautiful, all teachers and classmates are very nice. I love my school so much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的基础英语写作能力，要求紧扣给定要点，使用正确时态，语言简洁流畅，难度适中，适合学生巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，首先用“Hello, I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School.”开篇；接着介绍学校建筑：“There are three buildings in our school: a classroom building, a library and a sports hall.”；然后说明最喜欢的建筑：“My favourite building is the library. It's on the right of the classroom building, and there are many great books in it.”；最后评价学校并表达喜爱：“Our school is clean and beautiful, all teachers and classmates are very nice. I love my school so much.”，确保涵盖所有要点，时态正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】Hello, I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. There are three buildings in our school: a classroom building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the right of the classroom building, and there are many great books in it. Our school is clean and beautiful, all teachers and classmates are very nice. I love my school so much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的基础英语写作能力，要求紧扣给定要点，使用正确时态，语言简洁流畅，难度适中，适合学生巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.5
写作应用
（2025·东西湖区期中）假如你是七年级的学生腾飞。你的英国笔友Peter对你的新学校、在校好友以及校园趣闻等情况特别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示问题，给他写一封邮件，介绍你的校园生活和感受。
1. What's your new school like? And what's your favourite place? 2. Do you have a new friend at school? And what do you know about him/her? 3. What is fun in your new school? Something more about your new school.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60左右;格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school.
Yours,
Teng Fei
（2025·东西湖区期中）假如你是七年级的学生腾飞。你的英国笔友Peter对你的新学校、在校好友以及校园趣闻等情况特别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示问题，给他写一封邮件，介绍你的校园生活和感受。
1. What's your new school like? And what's your favourite place? 2. Do you have a new friend at school? And what do you know about him/her? 3. What is fun in your new school? Something more about your new school.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60左右;格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school.
Yours,
Teng Fei
答案
One possible version：
Dear Peter，
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school. My school is big and beautiful. There are many modern buildings and interesting places in it. My favourite place is the sports field. It's large and I often go there to do exercise or do morning reading. At school, I have a new friend. Her name is Betty. She is from the USA and now lives in China with her parents. She has long brown hair. She likes sport and basketball is her favourite. We often play basketball together after school. I have many kind teachers and classmates. We have classes, eat our favourite food and do sport happily together.
I love my new school. How about yours?
Yours，
Teng Fei
Dear Peter，
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school. My school is big and beautiful. There are many modern buildings and interesting places in it. My favourite place is the sports field. It's large and I often go there to do exercise or do morning reading. At school, I have a new friend. Her name is Betty. She is from the USA and now lives in China with her parents. She has long brown hair. She likes sport and basketball is her favourite. We often play basketball together after school. I have many kind teachers and classmates. We have classes, eat our favourite food and do sport happily together.
I love my new school. How about yours?
Yours，
Teng Fei
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级学生腾飞的身份给英国笔友Peter写邮件，需覆盖三个提示问题：新学校的样貌与最喜欢的地方、新朋友的情况、校园趣事，同时符合邮件格式、词数要求，语言贴合七年级水平。解题思路为：先明确邮件格式，再依次回应所有提示要点，控制词数，确保内容连贯、无真实个人信息。
【解析】
邮件开头已给出，正文依次介绍：新学校大而美，有现代建筑，最喜欢的地方是运动场，常去锻炼或晨读；新朋友Betty来自美国，和父母在中国，长棕发，爱运动，尤其喜欢篮球，常一起打球；补充校园里和师生同学快乐相处的日常，最后询问Peter的校园情况，结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear Peter，
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school. My school is big and beautiful. There are many modern buildings and interesting places in it. My favourite place is the sports field. It's large and I often go there to do exercise or do morning reading. At school, I have a new friend. Her name is Betty. She is from the USA and now lives in China with her parents. She has long brown hair. She likes sport and basketball is her favourite. We often play basketball together after school. I have many kind teachers and classmates. We have classes, eat our favourite food and do sport happily together.
I love my new school. How about yours?
Yours，
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语情景交际、词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查七年级学生的英语书面表达能力，要求紧扣提示要点，符合邮件格式，语言简单通顺，能考察学生的综合语言运用能力，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级学生腾飞的身份给英国笔友Peter写邮件，需覆盖三个提示问题：新学校的样貌与最喜欢的地方、新朋友的情况、校园趣事，同时符合邮件格式、词数要求，语言贴合七年级水平。解题思路为：先明确邮件格式，再依次回应所有提示要点，控制词数，确保内容连贯、无真实个人信息。
【解析】
邮件开头已给出，正文依次介绍：新学校大而美，有现代建筑，最喜欢的地方是运动场，常去锻炼或晨读；新朋友Betty来自美国，和父母在中国，长棕发，爱运动，尤其喜欢篮球，常一起打球；补充校园里和师生同学快乐相处的日常，最后询问Peter的校园情况，结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear Peter，
How are you these days? I'd like to tell you about my new school. My school is big and beautiful. There are many modern buildings and interesting places in it. My favourite place is the sports field. It's large and I often go there to do exercise or do morning reading. At school, I have a new friend. Her name is Betty. She is from the USA and now lives in China with her parents. She has long brown hair. She likes sport and basketball is her favourite. We often play basketball together after school. I have many kind teachers and classmates. We have classes, eat our favourite food and do sport happily together.
I love my new school. How about yours?
Yours，
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语情景交际、词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查七年级学生的英语书面表达能力，要求紧扣提示要点，符合邮件格式，语言简单通顺，能考察学生的综合语言运用能力，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.6
