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下周英语口语课的主题是“学校里我最喜爱的地方”。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文为此做准备。
提示:1. What is your favourite place at school? 2. Where is the place? 3. Why do you like it?
要求:60~70词。
My Favourite Place at School
下周英语口语课的主题是“学校里我最喜爱的地方”。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文为此做准备。
提示:1. What is your favourite place at school? 2. Where is the place? 3. Why do you like it?
要求:60~70词。
My Favourite Place at School
There are many interesting places in my school. We have a big playground, a library and a dining hall. My favourite place is the library.
It is between the teaching building and the garden.
I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class.
Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
I love my school very much. It is like my second home.
答案
1. My favourite place at school is the library.
2. It is between the teaching building and the garden.
3. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
完整短文:
My Favourite Place at School
There are many interesting places in my school. We have a big playground, a library and a dining hall. My favourite place is the library.
It is between the teaching building and the garden. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
I love my school very much. It is like my second home.
2. It is between the teaching building and the garden.
3. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
完整短文:
My Favourite Place at School
There are many interesting places in my school. We have a big playground, a library and a dining hall. My favourite place is the library.
It is between the teaching building and the garden. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
I love my school very much. It is like my second home.
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确写作任务:以李华身份写60-70词的英语短文,主题为“学校里我最喜爱的地方”,必须覆盖三个提示要点:①最爱的地方是什么;②该地方的位置;③喜欢的原因。解题步骤:1. 选定具体的校园场所(如图书馆,便于展开理由);2. 清晰说明其位置;3. 结合自身经历阐述喜欢的理由;4. 补充简短收尾,确保总词数符合要求,语句通顺。
【解析】根据审题确定的思路,先总述学校有多处场所,点明最爱的是图书馆;接着说明图书馆的位置;再解释喜欢的原因(课后读有趣的书,带来快乐并增长知识);最后表达对学校的喜爱,形成完整短文,满足词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Place at School
There are many interesting places in my school. We have a big playground, a library and a dining hall. My favourite place is the library.
It is between the teaching building and the garden. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
I love my school very much. It is like my second home.
【知识点】英语短文写作、英语情景表达
【点评】本题紧扣校园生活主题,考查学生围绕指定要点组织英语语言的能力,结构清晰,难度适中,适合巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】根据审题确定的思路,先总述学校有多处场所,点明最爱的是图书馆;接着说明图书馆的位置;再解释喜欢的原因(课后读有趣的书,带来快乐并增长知识);最后表达对学校的喜爱,形成完整短文,满足词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Place at School
There are many interesting places in my school. We have a big playground, a library and a dining hall. My favourite place is the library.
It is between the teaching building and the garden. I like it because I can read many interesting books there after class. Reading makes me happy and helps me learn a lot.
I love my school very much. It is like my second home.
【知识点】英语短文写作、英语情景表达
【点评】本题紧扣校园生活主题,考查学生围绕指定要点组织英语语言的能力,结构清晰,难度适中,适合巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.4
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