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第三节 书面表达(共15分)
在英语课上,你和小组同学分享各自的兴趣爱好和理想职业。请根据以下表
格内容介绍小组同学及你自己的爱好和理想职业。
In today's English class, my classmates and I introduced our own hobbies and
dream jobs.
在英语课上,你和小组同学分享各自的兴趣爱好和理想职业。请根据以下表
格内容介绍小组同学及你自己的爱好和理想职业。
In today's English class, my classmates and I introduced our own hobbies and
dream jobs.
答案
In today's English class, my classmates and I introduced our own hobbies and dream
jobs. Annie's favourite hobby is skating. She feels like flying on the ice when she skates. Since
she took up the hobby, she's become healthier and stronger. Her dream job is to be a skate trainer.
John likes doing crossword puzzles. He thinks it is a good way to exercise the brain. Now he has
known many English words and his English has improved a lot. He wants to be an English teacher
in the future. I have been interested in cooking since childhood. It is amazing to turn different
kinds of food into delicious dishes. I like helping my mum cook meals when I am free. I think to
be a cook is an ideal job for me. I will work hard to achieve my dream.
jobs. Annie's favourite hobby is skating. She feels like flying on the ice when she skates. Since
she took up the hobby, she's become healthier and stronger. Her dream job is to be a skate trainer.
John likes doing crossword puzzles. He thinks it is a good way to exercise the brain. Now he has
known many English words and his English has improved a lot. He wants to be an English teacher
in the future. I have been interested in cooking since childhood. It is amazing to turn different
kinds of food into delicious dishes. I like helping my mum cook meals when I am free. I think to
be a cook is an ideal job for me. I will work hard to achieve my dream.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，先明确写作任务：需要依次介绍Annie、John两位同学的爱好、爱好的原因、收获、理想职业，最后补充介绍自己对应的相关内容。第一步先梳理表格给出的所有已知信息，先把Annie的四个维度的信息先整理通顺，按照“爱好-喜欢的原因-获得的收获-理想职业”的逻辑顺序串联成句；第二步用同样的逻辑顺序处理John的相关信息，保证所有给定的要点都不遗漏；第三步自主补充自己的相关内容，要选择合理的爱好，搭配对应的原因、收获和理想职业，逻辑自洽，最后把所有内容衔接起来，保证语句通顺、语法正确，符合英语书面表达的规范即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，首先介绍Annie的相关内容：结合表格信息，依次说明她的爱好是滑冰，滑冰时的感受是像在冰上飞翔，长期坚持滑冰让她变得健康强壮，她的理想职业是滑冰教练，将信息串联成通顺的英文语句。
2. 接下来介绍John的相关内容：按照同样的逻辑，说明他的爱好是做填字游戏，这个爱好可以锻炼大脑，长期坚持让他掌握了大量英语词汇，他的理想职业是英语老师，适当补充细节让内容更饱满。
3. 最后介绍自己的相关内容：选取符合日常逻辑的爱好，说明对应的喜好原因、日常相关行为、收获，点明理想职业，最后补充自己会为实现梦想努力，完成整篇文章的写作。
【答案】
In today's English class, my classmates and I introduced our own hobbies and dream jobs. Annie's favourite hobby is skating. She feels like flying on the ice when she skates. Since she took up the hobby, she's become healthier and stronger. Her dream job is to be a skate trainer. John likes doing crossword puzzles. He thinks it is a good way to exercise the brain. Now he has known many English words and his English has improved a lot. He wants to be an English teacher in the future. I have been interested in cooking since childhood. It is amazing to turn different kinds of food into delicious dishes. I like helping my mum cook meals when I am free. I think to be a cook is an ideal job for me. I will work hard to achieve my dream.
【知识点】
爱好类话题写作
信息整合输出
一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是表格提示类的英语书面表达，核心要求是完整覆盖表格给出的所有已知要点，同时自主补充的个人相关内容要逻辑通顺合理。写作时按照人物依次展开介绍，结构清晰明了，适当添加少量衔接细节可以让文章更流畅自然，避免生硬翻译要点，就能拿到不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题，先明确写作任务：需要依次介绍Annie、John两位同学的爱好、爱好的原因、收获、理想职业，最后补充介绍自己对应的相关内容。第一步先梳理表格给出的所有已知信息，先把Annie的四个维度的信息先整理通顺，按照“爱好-喜欢的原因-获得的收获-理想职业”的逻辑顺序串联成句；第二步用同样的逻辑顺序处理John的相关信息，保证所有给定的要点都不遗漏；第三步自主补充自己的相关内容，要选择合理的爱好，搭配对应的原因、收获和理想职业，逻辑自洽，最后把所有内容衔接起来，保证语句通顺、语法正确，符合英语书面表达的规范即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，首先介绍Annie的相关内容：结合表格信息，依次说明她的爱好是滑冰，滑冰时的感受是像在冰上飞翔，长期坚持滑冰让她变得健康强壮，她的理想职业是滑冰教练，将信息串联成通顺的英文语句。
2. 接下来介绍John的相关内容：按照同样的逻辑，说明他的爱好是做填字游戏，这个爱好可以锻炼大脑，长期坚持让他掌握了大量英语词汇，他的理想职业是英语老师，适当补充细节让内容更饱满。
3. 最后介绍自己的相关内容：选取符合日常逻辑的爱好，说明对应的喜好原因、日常相关行为、收获，点明理想职业，最后补充自己会为实现梦想努力，完成整篇文章的写作。
【答案】
In today's English class, my classmates and I introduced our own hobbies and dream jobs. Annie's favourite hobby is skating. She feels like flying on the ice when she skates. Since she took up the hobby, she's become healthier and stronger. Her dream job is to be a skate trainer. John likes doing crossword puzzles. He thinks it is a good way to exercise the brain. Now he has known many English words and his English has improved a lot. He wants to be an English teacher in the future. I have been interested in cooking since childhood. It is amazing to turn different kinds of food into delicious dishes. I like helping my mum cook meals when I am free. I think to be a cook is an ideal job for me. I will work hard to achieve my dream.
【知识点】
爱好类话题写作
信息整合输出
一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是表格提示类的英语书面表达，核心要求是完整覆盖表格给出的所有已知要点，同时自主补充的个人相关内容要逻辑通顺合理。写作时按照人物依次展开介绍，结构清晰明了，适当添加少量衔接细节可以让文章更流畅自然，避免生硬翻译要点，就能拿到不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.7
