第三部分 书面表达
写一篇短文,谈谈你喜欢的音乐或艺术形式,以及它对你的影响。下面的表格可以帮助你梳理写作要点,词数60~80。

My Favorite Music/Art
写一篇短文,谈谈你喜欢的音乐或艺术形式,以及它对你的影响。下面的表格可以帮助你梳理写作要点,词数60~80。
My Favorite Music/Art
答案
My Favorite Music
I love light music most of all. It is soft and quiet, and I fell in love with it the first time I listened to it.
It sounds gentle like the wind in spring, and always makes me feel peaceful. I usually enjoy it in my free time or after I finish my study. It helps me relax when I feel tired, and it always brings me a lot of happiness. If you are upset sometimes, try a piece of light music, you will feel better soon.
I love light music most of all. It is soft and quiet, and I fell in love with it the first time I listened to it.
It sounds gentle like the wind in spring, and always makes me feel peaceful. I usually enjoy it in my free time or after I finish my study. It helps me relax when I feel tired, and it always brings me a lot of happiness. If you are upset sometimes, try a piece of light music, you will feel better soon.
解析
这是一篇提纲类写作,要求围绕自己喜爱的音乐/艺术形式展开,需要覆盖表格给出的全部写作要点:1. 开篇点明喜爱的艺术形式类型及喜爱的缘由;2. 描述该艺术形式的特点以及它带给自己的直观感受;3. 说明自己通常欣赏它的场景;4. 介绍它给自己带来的积极影响;5. 收尾向他人简单推荐。写作时使用九年级已学的基础词汇和句式,控制词数在60~80之间,保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯即可。
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