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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
有人说"读万卷书不如行万里路",但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下面的提示分别阐述这两种意见并发表自己的观点。不少于80词。
Reading
1. 获取各类知识；2. 认识世界；3. 了解历史……
Travelling
1. 观光,游览名胜；2. 体验不同文化；3. 身心放松……
有人说"读万卷书不如行万里路",但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下面的提示分别阐述这两种意见并发表自己的观点。不少于80词。
Reading
1. 获取各类知识；2. 认识世界；3. 了解历史……
Travelling
1. 观光,游览名胜；2. 体验不同文化；3. 身心放松……
"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." This old
Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot
from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by
reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more
about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting
places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our
eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting
in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real
world, try travelling.
Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot
from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by
reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more
about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting
places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our
eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting
in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real
world, try travelling.
答案
One possible version:
"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." This old
Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot
from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by
reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more
about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting
places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our
eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting
in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real
world, try travelling.
"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." This old
Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot
from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by
reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more
about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting
places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our
eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting
in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real
world, try travelling.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确任务：需分别阐述“读万卷书”和“行万里路”两种观点，结合给定提示要点，最后发表个人观点；其次构思文章结构：开头引出话题，中间两段分别论述两种观点（对应提示的三个核心要点），结尾总结个人看法；最后组织语言，使用合适连接词，确保词数达标、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
解题步骤：1. 开头用题目俗语引出讨论，如“It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”；2. 论述读书的好处：用First/Second/Third对应提示，说明获取各类知识、认识世界、了解历史；3. 论述旅行的好处：用However转折，对应提示说明观光名胜、体验不同文化、身心放松，可补充提高沟通能力；4. 个人观点：表明两者都有益，若想感受真实世界可选择旅行；5. 检查词数，确保不少于80词，语言准确流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real world, try travelling.
【知识点】
英语观点类书面表达、英语写作连贯表达
【点评】
本篇范文结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，分别从给定提示点出发阐述两种观点，结尾个人观点明确，运用恰当连接词使文章逻辑连贯，语言规范，符合书面表达评分标准，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题明确任务：需分别阐述“读万卷书”和“行万里路”两种观点，结合给定提示要点，最后发表个人观点；其次构思文章结构：开头引出话题，中间两段分别论述两种观点（对应提示的三个核心要点），结尾总结个人看法；最后组织语言，使用合适连接词，确保词数达标、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
解题步骤：1. 开头用题目俗语引出讨论，如“It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”；2. 论述读书的好处：用First/Second/Third对应提示，说明获取各类知识、认识世界、了解历史；3. 论述旅行的好处：用However转折，对应提示说明观光名胜、体验不同文化、身心放松，可补充提高沟通能力；4. 个人观点：表明两者都有益，若想感受真实世界可选择旅行；5. 检查词数，确保不少于80词，语言准确流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
"It's better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, some other people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is also a good way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. However, if we want to feel the real world, try travelling.
【知识点】
英语观点类书面表达、英语写作连贯表达
【点评】
本篇范文结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，分别从给定提示点出发阐述两种观点，结尾个人观点明确，运用恰当连接词使文章逻辑连贯，语言规范，符合书面表达评分标准，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
