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七、书面表达(20 分)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 想了解你最喜欢的运动，请给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：1. 什么运动；2. 喜欢的原因；3. 什么时候或者每隔多久做这种运动等。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语言准确；
2. 60 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 想了解你最喜欢的运动，请给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：1. 什么运动；2. 喜欢的原因；3. 什么时候或者每隔多久做这种运动等。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语言准确；
2. 60 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
参考例文：
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport. Of all the sports, badminton is my favourite. I like it because it's very interesting and it's easy to play. I can play it anytime and anywhere, and I don't feel very tired after playing. I usually play badminton for one hour every day. Sometimes I do it with my classmates, and sometimes just with my father. He is a badminton lover. What about you? Do you like playing badminton too?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport. Of all the sports, badminton is my favourite. I like it because it's very interesting and it's easy to play. I can play it anytime and anywhere, and I don't feel very tired after playing. I usually play badminton for one hour every day. Sometimes I do it with my classmates, and sometimes just with my father. He is a badminton lover. What about you? Do you like playing badminton too?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题首先先审题，明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：第一说明自己最喜欢的运动是什么，第二讲清楚喜欢这项运动的原因，第三说明参与这项运动的时间/频率，同时注意这是给笔友的非正式邮件，语气要自然亲切，总词数控制在60左右，给出的开头结尾不计入词数。接下来构思内容：第一步开门见山直接点明最喜欢的运动项目，避免跑题；第二步选2个简单好写的理由说明喜爱的原因，比如趣味性强、容易上手这类常见角度；第三步补充日常运动的频次、一起运动的对象，让内容更饱满；最后加一句反问对方喜好的句子，让信件互动感更强，写完后检查语法错误和词数是否符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点明核心：直接说明自己最喜欢的运动是羽毛球，精准对应第一个写作要点；
2. 紧接着阐述喜爱理由：说明羽毛球趣味性强、容易操作，运动后也不会过度疲惫，完整覆盖第二个写作要点；
3. 之后说明运动安排：提到自己每天都会打一小时羽毛球，有时和同学有时和父亲一起，完全符合第三个写作要点的要求；
4. 最后用反问句询问对方的运动喜好，贴合笔友邮件的交流场景，整体语句通顺无语法错误，词数符合60左右的要求。
【答案】
参考例文：
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport. Of all the sports, badminton is my favourite. I like it because it's very interesting and it's easy to play. I can play it anytime and anywhere, and I don't feel very tired after playing. I usually play badminton for one hour every day. Sometimes I do it with my classmates, and sometimes just with my father. He is a badminton lover. What about you? Do you like playing badminton too?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，运动话题表达，要点类写作
【点评】
这篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，语言简单地道，符合给笔友写信的轻松非正式语气，词数完全符合要求，没有冗余内容，参考性很强。学生写作时也可以结合自身实际，替换成跑步、篮球等自己熟悉的运动项目，调整对应的理由和运动频率，很容易上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题首先先审题，明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：第一说明自己最喜欢的运动是什么，第二讲清楚喜欢这项运动的原因，第三说明参与这项运动的时间/频率，同时注意这是给笔友的非正式邮件，语气要自然亲切，总词数控制在60左右，给出的开头结尾不计入词数。接下来构思内容：第一步开门见山直接点明最喜欢的运动项目，避免跑题；第二步选2个简单好写的理由说明喜爱的原因，比如趣味性强、容易上手这类常见角度；第三步补充日常运动的频次、一起运动的对象，让内容更饱满；最后加一句反问对方喜好的句子，让信件互动感更强，写完后检查语法错误和词数是否符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点明核心：直接说明自己最喜欢的运动是羽毛球，精准对应第一个写作要点；
2. 紧接着阐述喜爱理由：说明羽毛球趣味性强、容易操作，运动后也不会过度疲惫，完整覆盖第二个写作要点；
3. 之后说明运动安排：提到自己每天都会打一小时羽毛球，有时和同学有时和父亲一起，完全符合第三个写作要点的要求；
4. 最后用反问句询问对方的运动喜好，贴合笔友邮件的交流场景，整体语句通顺无语法错误，词数符合60左右的要求。
【答案】
参考例文：
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my favourite sport. Of all the sports, badminton is my favourite. I like it because it's very interesting and it's easy to play. I can play it anytime and anywhere, and I don't feel very tired after playing. I usually play badminton for one hour every day. Sometimes I do it with my classmates, and sometimes just with my father. He is a badminton lover. What about you? Do you like playing badminton too?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，运动话题表达，要点类写作
【点评】
这篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，语言简单地道，符合给笔友写信的轻松非正式语气，词数完全符合要求，没有冗余内容，参考性很强。学生写作时也可以结合自身实际，替换成跑步、篮球等自己熟悉的运动项目，调整对应的理由和运动频率，很容易上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
