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在成长的过程中，可能会有某个事物(例如：一首歌曲、一本书、一部电影、一首诗……)对你产生深刻的影响，甚至能改变你的生活轨迹。请结合自己的生活实际，以“
提示：
1. How was your life before?
2. What changed you? How did it change you?
3. Please say something more about it.
要求：
1. 80～100词；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
在成长的过程中，可能会有某个事物(例如：一首歌曲、一本书、一部电影、一首诗……)对你产生深刻的影响，甚至能改变你的生活轨迹。请结合自己的生活实际，以“
A Book
Changed My Life”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的成长经历。提示：
1. How was your life before?
2. What changed you? How did it change you?
3. Please say something more about it.
要求：
1. 80～100词；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
A Book
Changed My LifeWhen I was a child, I didn't like to read books. I thought they were boring. My mother was worried. Then she bought many books for me. Of all the books, I liked Robinson Crusoe best. I have learned that Robinson never gives up. He often tries his best to solve the problems. Now, I love reading very much. I often read books in my free time. I always face problems bravely and try my best to solve them.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
答案
One possible version:
A Book Changed My Life
When I was a child, I didn't like to read books. I thought they were boring. My mother was worried. Then she bought many books for me. Of all the books, I liked Robinson Crusoe best. I have learned that Robinson never gives up. He often tries his best to solve the problems. Now, I love reading very much. I often read books in my free time. I always face problems bravely and try my best to solve them.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
A Book Changed My Life
When I was a child, I didn't like to read books. I thought they were boring. My mother was worried. Then she bought many books for me. Of all the books, I liked Robinson Crusoe best. I have learned that Robinson never gives up. He often tries his best to solve the problems. Now, I love reading very much. I often read books in my free time. I always face problems bravely and try my best to solve them.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
解析
【分析】首先，需补全半命题题目，结合提示选择具体事物（如书籍）；其次，围绕三个提示要点展开：先描述改变前的生活状态（如不喜欢读书），再说明改变的契机（如妈妈赠送的《鲁滨逊漂流记》）及具体改变（学会坚持、勇敢面对问题），最后补充该事物的意义；写作时控制词数80-100，保证语言通顺、条理清晰。
【解析】1. 补全题目：选择“A Book Changed My Life”；2. 开篇点明改变前的状态：小时候不喜欢读书，觉得无聊；3. 说明改变的原因：妈妈送书，最喜欢《鲁滨逊漂流记》；4. 阐述改变的内容：学会不放弃，勇敢解决问题，现在热爱读书；5. 补充该事物的教育意义，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
A Book Changed My Life
When I was a child, I didn't like to read books. I thought they were boring. My mother was worried. Then she bought many books for me. Of all the books, I liked Robinson Crusoe best. I have learned that Robinson never gives up. He often tries his best to solve the problems. Now, I love reading very much. I often read books in my free time. I always face problems bravely and try my best to solve them.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
【知识点】英语写作、半命题作文
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕提示要点展开，结构清晰，内容真实具体，语言通顺，符合词数要求，准确体现了书籍对成长的深刻影响。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 补全题目：选择“A Book Changed My Life”；2. 开篇点明改变前的状态：小时候不喜欢读书，觉得无聊；3. 说明改变的原因：妈妈送书，最喜欢《鲁滨逊漂流记》；4. 阐述改变的内容：学会不放弃，勇敢解决问题，现在热爱读书；5. 补充该事物的教育意义，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
A Book Changed My Life
When I was a child, I didn't like to read books. I thought they were boring. My mother was worried. Then she bought many books for me. Of all the books, I liked Robinson Crusoe best. I have learned that Robinson never gives up. He often tries his best to solve the problems. Now, I love reading very much. I often read books in my free time. I always face problems bravely and try my best to solve them.
It has changed me so much and I think it is very educational.
【知识点】英语写作、半命题作文
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕提示要点展开，结构清晰，内容真实具体，语言通顺，符合词数要求，准确体现了书籍对成长的深刻影响。
【难度系数】0.6
