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养成良好的习惯是身体健康的保证。某中学生英文杂志社即将主办一次题为“Good Habits and Health”的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加此活动。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
写作点拨:
审题
本题要求介绍良好的生活习惯如何影响身体健康，可从饮食、作息、运动等方面入手。文章体裁为说明文，人称使用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
提纲
参考句型
1. First, we should... Second,... Third,... Last but not least/What's more/Finally,...
2. Doing exercise/Going to bed early/Drinking more water/...is good for our health.
3. It's healthy/important/a good idea... (for us) to do sth
4. Take exercise/Play basketball/Run every day/three times a week/...
规范作文:
Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
养成良好的习惯是身体健康的保证。某中学生英文杂志社即将主办一次题为“Good Habits and Health”的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加此活动。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
写作点拨:
审题
本题要求介绍良好的生活习惯如何影响身体健康，可从饮食、作息、运动等方面入手。文章体裁为说明文，人称使用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
提纲
参考句型
1. First, we should... Second,... Third,... Last but not least/What's more/Finally,...
2. Doing exercise/Going to bed early/Drinking more water/...is good for our health.
3. It's healthy/important/a good idea... (for us) to do sth
4. Take exercise/Play basketball/Run every day/three times a week/...
规范作文:
Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
答案
Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four
good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too
late! Then we can always be in good health!
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four
good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we
should drink milk every day. Second, we should take
exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming,
and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we
should go to bed early at night and get up early in the
morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise
makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more,
it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a
good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too
late! Then we can always be in good health!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“Good Habits and Health”，要求围绕好习惯与健康的关系展开，需从饮食、运动、作息等方面介绍，使用一般现在时、第一人称，词数约80词，结构为总-分-总。需结合思维导图要点，用First/Second等连接词分点阐述，补充合理好习惯，最后发出呼吁，注意避免真实信息。
【解析】按照审题确定的结构，分点列举好习惯：1. 吃健康食物（如每天喝牛奶）；2. 每天锻炼（如跑步、游泳等）；3. 早睡早起，引用相关谚语；4. 补充常换衣服并晒太阳的好习惯，运用参考句型组织语言，确保符合词数要求，无真实信息。
【答案】Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we should drink milk every day. Second, we should take exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming, and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we should go to bed early at night and get up early in the morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more, it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
【知识点】英语说明文写作；健康话题表达
【点评】本题围绕健康话题考查学生英语写作能力，要求结合给定思维导图组织内容，结构清晰，语言符合初中英语水平，能有效考查学生语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照审题确定的结构，分点列举好习惯：1. 吃健康食物（如每天喝牛奶）；2. 每天锻炼（如跑步、游泳等）；3. 早睡早起，引用相关谚语；4. 补充常换衣服并晒太阳的好习惯，运用参考句型组织语言，确保符合词数要求，无真实信息。
【答案】Good Habits and Health
Good habits can keep us healthy. Here are four good habits for us.
First, we should eat healthy food. For example, we should drink milk every day. Second, we should take exercise every day. Exercise such as running, swimming, and playing basketball is good for our health. Third, we should go to bed early at night and get up early in the morning. Remember, "Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." What's more, it's healthy for us to change our clothes often. And it's a good idea to dry them in the sun after we wash them.
Start having these good habits before it's too late! Then we can always be in good health!
【知识点】英语说明文写作；健康话题表达
【点评】本题围绕健康话题考查学生英语写作能力，要求结合给定思维导图组织内容，结构清晰，语言符合初中英语水平，能有效考查学生语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
