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六、书面表达
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter 今年暑假想要到你的家乡来游玩，他想了解一些你家乡的礼仪习俗和待客之道，请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件。
提示：
1. How to greet each other in a proper way?
2. How to be a good guest when visiting others at home?
3. What are good table manners about?
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter 今年暑假想要到你的家乡来游玩，他想了解一些你家乡的礼仪习俗和待客之道，请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件。
提示：
1. How to greet each other in a proper way?
2. How to be a good guest when visiting others at home?
3. What are good table manners about?
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about how to greet people properly here. We usually greet each other by shaking hands, especially for the first time or in the formal situation. Sometimes, we greet friends just by saying "hi" or "hello" to show politeness.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host your enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host your enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about how to greet people properly here. We usually greet each other by shaking hands, especially for the first time or in the formal situation. Sometimes, we greet friends just by saying "hi" or "hello" to show politeness.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host your enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about how to greet people properly here. We usually greet each other by shaking hands, especially for the first time or in the formal situation. Sometimes, we greet friends just by saying "hi" or "hello" to show politeness.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host your enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇应用文类的英语书面表达，解题时首先要明确写作要求：写给英国笔友的私人邮件，核心是向对方介绍家乡的待客相关礼仪，必须完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点。首先确定文体属性，语气要亲切自然，符合笔友交流的轻松语境，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一、第二人称为主。接下来梳理行文逻辑：首先承接题目已经给出的邮件开头，自然过渡到礼仪介绍的内容；之后按照题干给出的三个问题顺序依次展开，先讲日常正确的问候方式，再讲上门做客的注意事项，最后介绍相关餐桌礼仪；最后收尾安抚对方不必为礼仪差异紧张，表达期待对方来访的心意，保证所有提示点都不遗漏，行文连贯流畅。
【解析】
写作时按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 衔接给定开头，用逻辑连接词分层展开内容，让结构清晰明了：
① 第一部分对应第一个提示点：介绍本地的问候礼仪，说明初次见面或正式场合通常握手问候，熟人之间简单问好即可，符合日常交际实际。
② 第二部分对应第二个提示点：介绍上门做客的礼仪，点明登门拜访时准备水果、茶饮这类小礼物、准时抵达都是礼貌的行为，符合国内待客的习俗。
③ 第三部分对应第三个提示点：介绍餐桌礼仪，说明国人使用筷子就餐、围桌就餐的习惯，席间主动称赞食物美味、收到主人夹菜时道谢都是得体的行为。
2. 最后补充收尾内容，告知对方不必担心适应不了礼仪差异，自己会全程陪同，表达期待见面的心情，让邮件内容完整，交际属性达标，避免出现语法错误和要点遗漏。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about how to greet people properly here. We usually greet each other by shaking hands, especially for the first time or in the formal situation. Sometimes, we greet friends just by saying "hi" or "hello" to show politeness.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host you're enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，情景交际表达，餐桌礼仪英文表述
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的全部三个提示要点，使用firstly、secondly、then等逻辑连接词分层论述，结构清晰条理分明，语气贴合笔友间交流的亲切友好的氛围，内容完全符合国内本土待客礼仪的实际情况，用词准确地道，没有语法错误，收尾自然，既完成了信息告知的写作任务，也充分体现出东道主的热情，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.65
这是一篇应用文类的英语书面表达，解题时首先要明确写作要求：写给英国笔友的私人邮件，核心是向对方介绍家乡的待客相关礼仪，必须完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点。首先确定文体属性，语气要亲切自然，符合笔友交流的轻松语境，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一、第二人称为主。接下来梳理行文逻辑：首先承接题目已经给出的邮件开头，自然过渡到礼仪介绍的内容；之后按照题干给出的三个问题顺序依次展开，先讲日常正确的问候方式，再讲上门做客的注意事项，最后介绍相关餐桌礼仪；最后收尾安抚对方不必为礼仪差异紧张，表达期待对方来访的心意，保证所有提示点都不遗漏，行文连贯流畅。
【解析】
写作时按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 衔接给定开头，用逻辑连接词分层展开内容，让结构清晰明了：
① 第一部分对应第一个提示点：介绍本地的问候礼仪，说明初次见面或正式场合通常握手问候，熟人之间简单问好即可，符合日常交际实际。
② 第二部分对应第二个提示点：介绍上门做客的礼仪，点明登门拜访时准备水果、茶饮这类小礼物、准时抵达都是礼貌的行为，符合国内待客的习俗。
③ 第三部分对应第三个提示点：介绍餐桌礼仪，说明国人使用筷子就餐、围桌就餐的习惯，席间主动称赞食物美味、收到主人夹菜时道谢都是得体的行为。
2. 最后补充收尾内容，告知对方不必担心适应不了礼仪差异，自己会全程陪同，表达期待见面的心情，让邮件内容完整，交际属性达标，避免出现语法错误和要点遗漏。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown this summer holiday. I'd like to be your guide.
Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about how to greet people properly here. We usually greet each other by shaking hands, especially for the first time or in the formal situation. Sometimes, we greet friends just by saying "hi" or "hello" to show politeness.
Secondly, when someone invites you to visit his home, it's polite of you to prepare some small gifts. Usually some fruit, milk or tea are always welcome. Arriving on time is also very important.
Then, let's come to table manners in China. We use chopsticks instead of forks and knives. Usually we sit at the table in a circle. That makes it easy to talk and reach food in the middle. It's polite to say the food is tasty to show the host you're enjoying the meal. They are hospitable enough to keep putting food on your plate. Don't forget to say "thank you" when you are full.
Maybe it is hard for you to get used to all these differences in manners. But don't worry about them. I'll be with you when you come. I hope you can have a good time here. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，情景交际表达，餐桌礼仪英文表述
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的全部三个提示要点，使用firstly、secondly、then等逻辑连接词分层论述，结构清晰条理分明，语气贴合笔友间交流的亲切友好的氛围，内容完全符合国内本土待客礼仪的实际情况，用词准确地道，没有语法错误，收尾自然，既完成了信息告知的写作任务，也充分体现出东道主的热情，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.65
