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三、单元写作指导
【典型例题】
假设你是李华,下周英语口语课的主题是"我最喜欢的故事"。请你把下面《守株待兔》
(Staying by a Stump Waiting for More Hares)的故事补充完整,并为此做准备。
Once upon a time, there was a farmer. He worked hard in the field every day.
One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly
that its head hit the stump. Then it died.
The farmer picked up the dead hare and took it home happily...
要求:1.想象合理,符合逻辑;
2.续写内容不少于60词。
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:记叙文;人称:第三人称;时态:一般过去时;
2.重点叙述接下来会发生的事情;
3.使用恰当的时间连词;
4.总结描述这个故事带给我们的启示。
【写作提纲】
【好句集锦】
中间句:
1.从那天起,他停止在田地里工作。(stop doing)
2.相反,他坐在树桩旁边等待兔子到来。(wait for sb to do sth)
3.在数日的等待之后,他依然没再看到兔子。(after days of waiting)
4.终于,他意识到了自己的错误。(realize one's mistake)
5.当他决定回到农田工作时,他发现田里只剩草了。(when...; decide to do sth)
结尾句:
1.这个故事告诉我们"一分耕耘一分收获"。(No pains, no gains)
2.这个故事向我们表明只有努力工作才能成功。(only if)
【小试身手】
【典型例题】
假设你是李华,下周英语口语课的主题是"我最喜欢的故事"。请你把下面《守株待兔》
(Staying by a Stump Waiting for More Hares)的故事补充完整,并为此做准备。
Once upon a time, there was a farmer. He worked hard in the field every day.
One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly
that its head hit the stump. Then it died.
The farmer picked up the dead hare and took it home happily...
要求:1.想象合理,符合逻辑;
2.续写内容不少于60词。
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:记叙文;人称:第三人称;时态:一般过去时;
2.重点叙述接下来会发生的事情;
3.使用恰当的时间连词;
4.总结描述这个故事带给我们的启示。
【写作提纲】
【好句集锦】
中间句:
1.从那天起,他停止在田地里工作。(stop doing)
2.相反,他坐在树桩旁边等待兔子到来。(wait for sb to do sth)
3.在数日的等待之后,他依然没再看到兔子。(after days of waiting)
4.终于,他意识到了自己的错误。(realize one's mistake)
5.当他决定回到农田工作时,他发现田里只剩草了。(when...; decide to do sth)
结尾句:
1.这个故事告诉我们"一分耕耘一分收获"。(No pains, no gains)
2.这个故事向我们表明只有努力工作才能成功。(only if)
【小试身手】
答案
【素材积累】
中间句:1.From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
2.Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
3.After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
4.Finally, he realized his mistake.
5.When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was
only grass in the field.
结尾句:1.The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
2.The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
【小试身手】
One possible version
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He stayed by the stump
and waited for hares to come again. After days of waiting, he never saw another
hare. He finally realized his mistake. So he decided to go back to work in the field.
But there was only grass in his field. How silly he was!
The story tells us "No pains, no gains". We can succeed only if we work hard.
中间句:1.From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
2.Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
3.After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
4.Finally, he realized his mistake.
5.When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was
only grass in the field.
结尾句:1.The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
2.The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
【小试身手】
One possible version
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He stayed by the stump
and waited for hares to come again. After days of waiting, he never saw another
hare. He finally realized his mistake. So he decided to go back to work in the field.
But there was only grass in his field. How silly he was!
The story tells us "No pains, no gains". We can succeed only if we work hard.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语寓言故事续写题，首先明确已知的故事背景：农夫偶然捡到一只撞死在树桩上的兔子，十分开心。接下来的思考逻辑非常清晰：第一步，顺着农夫的行为推导，他尝到了不费力气就获得收获的甜头，自然会产生不想再辛苦劳作、想再次捡到兔子的想法；第二步，按照题目给出的提示短语，依次把"停止劳作、守在树桩旁等兔子、多日等不到兔子、意识到错误、返回农田发现田地荒芜"的情节按时间顺序串联起来，全程注意使用第三人称、统一用一般过去时叙事；第三步，最后补充故事对应的寓意，用上题干给出的"No pains, no gains"等提示表达，保证总词数超过60，逻辑完全符合《守株待兔》的经典故事内容即可。
【解析】
1. 先完成题干指定句子的翻译，严格对应括号里要求使用的短语：
① 匹配stop doing的用法要求，写出对应句子：From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
② 匹配wait for sb to do sth的用法要求，写出对应句子：Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
③ 匹配after days of waiting的提示，写出对应句子：After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
④ 匹配realize one's mistake的用法要求，写出对应句子：Finally, he realized his mistake.
⑤ 匹配when引导的时间状语从句和decide to do sth的用法要求，写出对应句子：When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was only grass in the field.
2. 完成结尾指定句子翻译：
① 匹配No pains, no gains的提示，写出对应句子：The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
② 匹配only if的用法要求，写出对应句子：The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
3. 将上述句子做简单的衔接润色，补充少量衔接词让叙事更流畅自然，最终得到完整的续写短文，检查时态全部为一般过去时，人称统一，词数远超60，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
中间句:
1.From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
2.Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
3.After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
4.Finally, he realized his mistake.
5.When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was only grass in the field.
结尾句:
1.The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
2.The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
小试身手参考范文:
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He stayed by the stump and waited for hares to come again. After days of waiting, he never saw another hare. He finally realized his mistake. So he decided to go back to work in the field. But there was only grass in his field. How silly he was!
The story tells us "No pains, no gains". We can succeed only if we work hard.
【知识点】
一般过去时写作，动词固定搭配，记叙文续写
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语记叙文续写题，依托大众熟知的中国传统寓言《守株待兔》展开，题干已经给出了明确的写作提示、指定短语和写作要求，学生只要顺着故事的常规逻辑推进，注意保持叙事时态统一，正确使用题干给出的提示短语，最后点明对应的寓意，就可以完成符合要求的作文，需要注意避免出现时态混乱、情节不符合逻辑的低级错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇英语寓言故事续写题，首先明确已知的故事背景：农夫偶然捡到一只撞死在树桩上的兔子，十分开心。接下来的思考逻辑非常清晰：第一步，顺着农夫的行为推导，他尝到了不费力气就获得收获的甜头，自然会产生不想再辛苦劳作、想再次捡到兔子的想法；第二步，按照题目给出的提示短语，依次把"停止劳作、守在树桩旁等兔子、多日等不到兔子、意识到错误、返回农田发现田地荒芜"的情节按时间顺序串联起来，全程注意使用第三人称、统一用一般过去时叙事；第三步，最后补充故事对应的寓意，用上题干给出的"No pains, no gains"等提示表达，保证总词数超过60，逻辑完全符合《守株待兔》的经典故事内容即可。
【解析】
1. 先完成题干指定句子的翻译，严格对应括号里要求使用的短语：
① 匹配stop doing的用法要求，写出对应句子：From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
② 匹配wait for sb to do sth的用法要求，写出对应句子：Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
③ 匹配after days of waiting的提示，写出对应句子：After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
④ 匹配realize one's mistake的用法要求，写出对应句子：Finally, he realized his mistake.
⑤ 匹配when引导的时间状语从句和decide to do sth的用法要求，写出对应句子：When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was only grass in the field.
2. 完成结尾指定句子翻译：
① 匹配No pains, no gains的提示，写出对应句子：The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
② 匹配only if的用法要求，写出对应句子：The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
3. 将上述句子做简单的衔接润色，补充少量衔接词让叙事更流畅自然，最终得到完整的续写短文，检查时态全部为一般过去时，人称统一，词数远超60，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
中间句:
1.From that day on, he stopped working in the field.
2.Instead, he sat by the tree and waited for the hare to come.
3.After days of waiting, he still didn't see another hare.
4.Finally, he realized his mistake.
5.When he decided to go back to work in the field, he found there was only grass in the field.
结尾句:
1.The story tells us "No pains, no gains."
2.The story shows us we can succeed only if we work hard.
小试身手参考范文:
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He stayed by the stump and waited for hares to come again. After days of waiting, he never saw another hare. He finally realized his mistake. So he decided to go back to work in the field. But there was only grass in his field. How silly he was!
The story tells us "No pains, no gains". We can succeed only if we work hard.
【知识点】
一般过去时写作，动词固定搭配，记叙文续写
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语记叙文续写题，依托大众熟知的中国传统寓言《守株待兔》展开，题干已经给出了明确的写作提示、指定短语和写作要求，学生只要顺着故事的常规逻辑推进，注意保持叙事时态统一，正确使用题干给出的提示短语，最后点明对应的寓意，就可以完成符合要求的作文，需要注意避免出现时态混乱、情节不符合逻辑的低级错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
