写作应用
假如你校英语社团本月的主题活动是讲述一次帮助别人的经历,请你根据以下提示问题,以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题写一篇英语短文,为此活动做准备。
What was your experience of helping others?
How did you help others in this experience?
What have you learned from this experience?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Helping Others Makes Me Happy




请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。

One possible version:
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
As the saying goes,"Helping others is helping ourselves."
I understood this after an experience in the community park last
Sunday. When I hung out there, I noticed a little boy sitting
alone on a bench, looking sad. I asked gently and found he got
lost and couldn't find home. Since I'm always ready to help
people in need,I decided to give him a hand.
First,I calmed him down and asked about his parents'
information patiently. Luckily,he remembered his mum's phone
number. I took out my phone and called her at once. Ten
minutes later,his mum arrived. The moment she saw her son,
she thanked me repeatedly,and the boy's eyes lit up.
Watching their reunion, happiness filled my heart. This
experience teaches me helping others is meaningful and makes
life colourful. Even a small kind act can make a big difference.

【分析】
本题为英语记叙文写作，主题是“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”，要求讲述一次帮助他人的经历。解题思路：1. 审题：确定用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，需覆盖“帮助的经历是什么、如何帮助、学到了什么”三个核心问题；2. 结构规划：开头引出经历，中间详细描述帮助的具体过程（时间、地点、原因、帮助方式），结尾表达感悟；3. 细节把控：注意词数约100词，不透露真实信息，语言需准确、连贯。
【解析】
写作需遵循以下步骤：1. 开篇用谚语引出主题，点明经历的时间、地点；2. 中间部分描述发现需要帮助的对象，询问情况并实施帮助的具体过程；3. 结尾表达帮助后的感受，总结感悟。同时要使用丰富的句型和连接词，确保逻辑清晰，符合自评表格的各项指标要求。
【答案】
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
As the saying goes,"Helping others is helping ourselves."
I understood this after an experience in the community park last Sunday. When I hung out there, I noticed a little boy sitting alone on a bench, looking sad. I asked gently and found he got lost and couldn't find home. Since I'm always ready to help people in need,I decided to give him a hand.
First,I calmed him down and asked about his parents' information patiently. Luckily,he remembered his mum's phone number. I took out my phone and called her at once. Ten minutes later,his mum arrived. The moment she saw her son,she thanked me repeatedly,and the boy's eyes lit up.
Watching their reunion, happiness filled my heart. This experience teaches me helping others is meaningful and makes life colourful. Even a small kind act can make a big difference.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、英语写作要点
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，符合写作要求，第一人称、一般过去时使用准确，完整覆盖了帮助的经历、方式及感悟，语言丰富，逻辑连贯，符合自评表格的各项指标，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5

学生们正在谈论他们下个学期的志愿服务计划。
任务一:请根据对应图片内容,完成句子。

①She could help the teacher to in the classroom.
②He could the park in the city centre.
③She could food and drinks for outdoor workers户外工作者.
④He could to the elderly.

任务一:
①hand out books ②clean up ③provide ④give a seat

【分析】
本题需结合四幅图片的场景，理解每句语境，匹配对应的动词短语。①图是女生在教室帮老师分发书本；②图是男生在公园清扫；③图是志愿者为户外工作者提供食物饮料；④图是男生在公交车上给老人让座，据此填写合适的短语。
【解析】
①图中女生在教室帮老师分发书本，对应短语hand out books；②图中男生在公园清扫，对应短语clean up；③图中志愿者为户外工作者提供食物饮料，用动词provide；④图中男生给老人让座，对应短语give a seat。
【答案】
①hand out books ②clean up ③provide ④give a seat
【知识点】
动词短语 动词用法
【点评】
本题通过图片场景考查常用动词短语，需结合图片动作理解语境，匹配正确表达，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3

任务二:谈谈你在下个学期想从事的志愿服务工作,并给出理由。
I would like to/want to/hope to... because...

1. I would like to volunteer at the old people's home next term because I want to cheer up the lonely elderly and listen to their interesting life stories.
2. I want to help tutor primary school students with their English because I'm good at English and I hope to help them build up their confidence in learning the language.
3. I hope to take part in the park cleaning volunteer work because I want to help keep our city clean and beautiful, and also encourage more people to protect the environment.

【分析】本题要求用指定英语句式（I would like to/want to/hope to... because...）表达下学期想从事的志愿服务工作并说明理由。解题时，首先需选取常见且有意义的志愿服务类型（如关爱老人、学业辅导、环保行动等）；其次，理由要贴合志愿服务的价值，如帮助他人、发挥自身优势、贡献社会等；最后需严格遵循题目给出的句式结构，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
【解析】结合常见志愿服务场景及合理理由，按照指定句式完成表达，示例如下：
1. I would like to volunteer at the old people's home next term because I want to cheer up the lonely elderly and listen to their interesting life stories.
2. I want to help tutor primary school students with their English because I'm good at English and I hope to help them build up their confidence in learning the language.
3. I hope to take part in the park cleaning volunteer work because I want to help keep our city clean and beautiful, and also encourage more people to protect the environment.
【答案】1. I would like to volunteer at the old people's home next term because I want to cheer up the lonely elderly and listen to their interesting life stories.
2. I want to help tutor primary school students with their English because I'm good at English and I hope to help them build up their confidence in learning the language.
3. I hope to take part in the park cleaning volunteer work because I want to help keep our city clean and beautiful, and also encourage more people to protect the environment.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达
【点评】本题贴近学生生活实际，考查用英语表达个人意愿及理由的能力，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的语言组织与逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6