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某地发生了地震，一部分幸存者身心都受到了重创，急需社会的帮助。假设你是孙洋，请你根据下列提示用英语写一封 80 词左右的倡议信，呼吁大家为地震幸存者献出爱心。已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示：
1. 一些地震幸存者受伤严重，需尽快手术，但手术费用高昂。
2. 一些地震幸存者失去了亲人，感到孤独，独自生活对他们来说很困难。
3. 我们可以捐赠物品，也可以当医院的志愿者。
4. 我们可以去拜访他们，让他们感受到温暖。
5. 我们都应该伸出援助之手，人多力量大。
[思路点拨]1. 文体：应用文。2. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 要点提示：按总分总写作。
[写作提纲]
What kind of help do they need?
[妙笔生花]
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Thanks a lot for the help!
Sun Yang
提示：
1. 一些地震幸存者受伤严重，需尽快手术，但手术费用高昂。
2. 一些地震幸存者失去了亲人，感到孤独，独自生活对他们来说很困难。
3. 我们可以捐赠物品，也可以当医院的志愿者。
4. 我们可以去拜访他们，让他们感受到温暖。
5. 我们都应该伸出援助之手，人多力量大。
[思路点拨]1. 文体：应用文。2. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 要点提示：按总分总写作。
[写作提纲]
What kind of help do they need?
[妙笔生花]
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot.
Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone.
We can donate useful items or food and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital.
We can visit them more often to make them feel warm.
All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.
Thanks a lot for the help!
Sun Yang
答案
One possible version:
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate useful items or food and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We can visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.
Thanks a lot for the help!
Sun Yang
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate useful items or food and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We can visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.
Thanks a lot for the help!
Sun Yang
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语倡议信写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先按照题目给出的三段式总分总结构展开，第一步先承接开头给出的主题句，先描述地震幸存者面临的两类困境，对应提示里的受伤急需手术但费用高、失去亲人孤独难独立生活的内容；第二步顺理成章引出我们可以提供的各类帮助，覆盖捐赠物资、做医院志愿者、上门探望送温暖的要点；最后收尾呼吁大家伸出援手，点出人多力量大的主旨，写作时注意区分时态：地震中发生的动作用一般过去时，描述现状和倡议内容用一般现在时，控制总词数在80左右，不要遗漏要点，语气符合倡议书的呼吁感即可。
【解析】
1. 承接开篇主题，先描述幸存者的生存困境：首先说明部分幸存者在地震中严重受伤，需要尽快接受手术，但手术的花费十分高昂，对应提示要点1；接着说明部分幸存者失去了亲人，内心十分孤独，独自生活对他们而言非常艰难，对应提示要点2。
2. 接着阐述可行的帮助方式：说明我们既可以捐赠有用的物资，也可以到医院担任志愿者，还可以经常去探望他们，让他们感受到暖意，对应提示要点3、4。
3. 最后发出呼吁，点明所有人都应该伸出援手，人多力量大，对应提示要点5，自然衔接题目给出的结尾致谢句，检查所有要点全部覆盖，语法无误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate useful items or food and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We can visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，一般过去时用法，it作形式主语句型
【点评】
本题属于基础应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，学生只需要按照逻辑顺序把提示内容自然串联，注意区分不同场景的时态，规避基础语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，同时也锻炼了学生把中文提示转化为地道英文表达的能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语倡议信写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先按照题目给出的三段式总分总结构展开，第一步先承接开头给出的主题句，先描述地震幸存者面临的两类困境，对应提示里的受伤急需手术但费用高、失去亲人孤独难独立生活的内容；第二步顺理成章引出我们可以提供的各类帮助，覆盖捐赠物资、做医院志愿者、上门探望送温暖的要点；最后收尾呼吁大家伸出援手，点出人多力量大的主旨，写作时注意区分时态：地震中发生的动作用一般过去时，描述现状和倡议内容用一般现在时，控制总词数在80左右，不要遗漏要点，语气符合倡议书的呼吁感即可。
【解析】
1. 承接开篇主题，先描述幸存者的生存困境：首先说明部分幸存者在地震中严重受伤，需要尽快接受手术，但手术的花费十分高昂，对应提示要点1；接着说明部分幸存者失去了亲人，内心十分孤独，独自生活对他们而言非常艰难，对应提示要点2。
2. 接着阐述可行的帮助方式：说明我们既可以捐赠有用的物资，也可以到医院担任志愿者，还可以经常去探望他们，让他们感受到暖意，对应提示要点3、4。
3. 最后发出呼吁，点明所有人都应该伸出援手，人多力量大，对应提示要点5，自然衔接题目给出的结尾致谢句，检查所有要点全部覆盖，语法无误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate useful items or food and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We can visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，一般过去时用法，it作形式主语句型
【点评】
本题属于基础应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，学生只需要按照逻辑顺序把提示内容自然串联，注意区分不同场景的时态，规避基础语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，同时也锻炼了学生把中文提示转化为地道英文表达的能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
