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你校正在举行英语作文竞赛，请你以“Life on Mars”为题，展开想象写一篇文章参赛。
要点：
1.人们住在火星上的原因；
2.人们在火星上的出行方式；
3.人们在火星上的饮食；
4.……
要点：
1.人们住在火星上的原因；
2.人们在火星上的出行方式；
3.人们在火星上的饮食；
4.……
答案
[高分范文]
Life on Mars
① In the year 2100， most people will live on Mars because there won’t be enough space for people to live on the Earth. And the pollution on the Earth will also be very serious.
② When people living on Mars go out， they will take a plane. If they want to go back to the Earth to visit friends， they will take a spacecraft. People will grow vegetables and fruit on Mars to eat.
③ There’s less pollution on Mars， so people will be much healthier.
[名师点评]
这篇文章要求学生畅想未来的火星生活，描述在火星的生活日常。
① 开篇介绍人们将在火星上生活的原因，引出下文；
② 从交通、饮食等方面描述畅想中火星生活的日常；
③ 运用比较级总结火星生活的美好。
Life on Mars
① In the year 2100， most people will live on Mars because there won’t be enough space for people to live on the Earth. And the pollution on the Earth will also be very serious.
② When people living on Mars go out， they will take a plane. If they want to go back to the Earth to visit friends， they will take a spacecraft. People will grow vegetables and fruit on Mars to eat.
③ There’s less pollution on Mars， so people will be much healthier.
[名师点评]
这篇文章要求学生畅想未来的火星生活，描述在火星的生活日常。
① 开篇介绍人们将在火星上生活的原因，引出下文；
② 从交通、饮食等方面描述畅想中火星生活的日常；
③ 运用比较级总结火星生活的美好。
假设你班以“Life in the future：for the better or the worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有一些同学对未来有些担心。请你根据表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 90词左右；
2. 文章需包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：standard 水平，标准；opinion 观点，看法；optimistic 乐观的
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般将来时为主；2. 人称：以第三人称为主；3. 写作时根据表格中的内容叙述双方不同的观点并给出自己的观点。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Life in the future：for the better or the worse?
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
注意：
1. 90词左右；
2. 文章需包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：standard 水平，标准；opinion 观点，看法；optimistic 乐观的
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：以一般将来时为主；2. 人称：以第三人称为主；3. 写作时根据表格中的内容叙述双方不同的观点并给出自己的观点。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Life in the future：for the better or the worse?
One possible version: Life in the future: for the better or the worse? Many students are optimistic about life in the next fifty years. They think the world will be a better place and that our lives will be greatly improved. What’s more, people will have a higher standard of living and live longer.
However, other students are worried about the future. They say that the world will become more crowded. Therefore, there will be even more environmental problems and we’ll live in a world with less energy available.
But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve these problems and that everyone will live more happily.
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Life in the future: for the better or the worse?
Many students are optimistic about life in the next fifty years. They think the world will be a better place and that our lives will be greatly improved. What’s more, people will have a higher standard of living and live longer.
However, other students are worried about the future. They say that the world will become more crowded. Therefore, there will be even more environmental problems and we’ll live in a world with less energy available.
But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve these problems and that everyone will live more happily.
Life in the future: for the better or the worse?
Many students are optimistic about life in the next fifty years. They think the world will be a better place and that our lives will be greatly improved. What’s more, people will have a higher standard of living and live longer.
However, other students are worried about the future. They say that the world will become more crowded. Therefore, there will be even more environmental problems and we’ll live in a world with less energy available.
But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve these problems and that everyone will live more happily.
