2025年学习指要九年级英语全一册人教版第172页答案
写作训练
写作任务
在你的初中生涯中是否有一个人曾经给你带来过深远的影响,令你难以忘记。请根据以下要点写一篇文章,介绍一下这个人,并说说他(她)给你带来了什么样的影响。
参考要点:1. 这个人的基本信息;
2. 与这个人有关的何事给你带来了影响;
3. 你的感受。
写作指导
1. 人称:文章应用第一人称和第三人称。
2. 时态:介绍这个人时应用一般现在时,记叙这个人过去曾对你产生的影响时应用一般过去时。
3. 行文思路:本文可分成三个部分来写。第一部分简单介绍这个对你产生影响的人。第二部分着重写他(她)的何种言行或在哪些方面对你产生了影响。第三部分写你的感受和对这个人的感激之情。
4. 语句储备:The person that I will never forget is...; have a big influence on...; I will always be thankful to...
写作练习
The person that I will never forget is my English teacher, Ms. Lee. She is about 30 years old and always wears a warm smile. She is kind and patient, and she never gets angry when we make mistakes.
When I was in Grade 8, my English was poor. I was afraid to speak in class because I thought my pronunciation was bad. One day, Ms. Lee asked me to stay after class. She told me, "Don’t be shy. Everyone makes mistakes. Practice makes perfect." She spent two weeks helping me prepare for the school English speech contest. On the day of the contest, I was very nervous, but when I saw her encouraging eyes, I felt brave. I spoke slowly and clearly, and finally, I won the third prize. That day, I realized I could do it if I tried.
Ms. Lee has a big influence on me. Now I am more confident and I enjoy speaking English. I know I wouldn’t have improved so much without her help. I will always be thankful to her for showing me that with hard work and encouragement, anything is possible.

答案

The person that I will never forget is my English teacher, Ms. Lee. She is about 30 years old and always wears a warm smile. She is kind and patient, and she never gets angry when we make mistakes.
When I was in Grade 8, my English was poor. I was afraid to speak in class because I thought my pronunciation was bad. One day, Ms. Lee asked me to stay after class. She told me, "Don’t be shy. Everyone makes mistakes. Practice makes perfect." She spent two weeks helping me prepare for the school English speech contest. On the day of the contest, I was very nervous, but when I saw her encouraging eyes, I felt brave. I spoke slowly and clearly, and finally, I won the third prize. That day, I realized I could do it if I tried.
Ms. Lee has a big influence on me. Now I am more confident and I enjoy speaking English. I know I wouldn’t have improved so much without her help. I will always be thankful to her for showing me that with hard work and encouragement, anything is possible.

解析

1.确定写作对象为对自己有深远影响的初中人物,选择英语老师Ms. Lee,符合师生关系常见且易展开的特点。
2.第一部分用一般现在时介绍基本信息:姓名、年龄、外貌及性格(善良耐心)。
3.第二部分用一般过去时叙述影响事件:自己曾英语差、怕发言,老师课后辅导并鼓励参加演讲比赛,最终获奖。
4.第三部分表达感受与感激:因老师影响变得自信、喜欢英语,用指定句型总结。